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Day 29 Patience invites the impetuous to rest their head on a soft, fragrant pillow, and runs cool, soothing hands through their hair. Patience trickles life’s nectar on their tongue to savor. (the quality of patience) Day 30 A serious poet poets with sense, structures with rhymes, lines, meter, and stanza, improves the meaning of poems immense by using lots, lots of hot, hot... java. This spring poet was inspired by season, fueled by balm
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I'm happy you enjoyed this year's NaPoWri Mo. Day 22 describes a very frightening event of my childhood with a happy ending. I like you're talking with your readers in your head too. Thank you for reading my poems and sharing your thoughts.
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We did it ! This years's set was very personal, so much it hurt sometimes. You're a brave, brave hooman. # 26 made me smile. I found parts of me. Oh look! A squirrel! #28 is a favorite. Thank you for letting me go by your side.
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April 25th through April 30th
Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 25th through April 30th
I always enjoy when your words illustrate nature for me. Millispoon and tableliter perfect. I will never forget those. April twenty eighth is a favorite. Thank you for brightening April. Til next year. ~Adi -
It has been a fun week.Thank you for pushing me in the right direction.
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April 19th through April 24th
Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 19th through April 24th
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Foolproofed Week 4 Day 22 Learning to swim in the Mediterranean Sea, sounds marvelous, slipping through your beloved, but too big, seahorse swim ring when touched by the first serious wave, seeing greenish water, foamed by air bubbles rushing by your wide-open eyes while you sink to the ground, is terrifying. Being pulled out by your shocked father, and wrapped into his strong, albeit damp arms, is exhilarating. The ensuing gelato with all the
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April 19th through April 24th
Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 19th through April 24th
Your berry poem inspired me to look for new recipes. Study hall isn't common around here, from your poem I gather Is should be happy about that . Reading your poems is always a treat. Thank you. -
#15 broke my heart. #19 is my favorite. You did very well this week.
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Thank you, Gary. I'm sure that is one of those unrivaled moments in a father's life.
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I'm glad you enjoyed those two, they are the result of some new vistas of time I found. Thank you, Parker.
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Thank you, Val! I can't wait for the berry summer to start.
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Foolproofed-Week 3 Day 15 I was like the needle in a compass carried through the forest by an orienteer with a thumping heart, you, I pointed us firmly north, nothing deterred me on our way in the right direction, uneven ground, rivers, rocks and fallen trees, obstacles appearing out of nowhere, nothing. Then a pole shift happened. Now you lead us. Going South, somehow feels like going downhill. (Let’s start our poems today with a Trans
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Welcome, foxkidsgayboy, you came to the right place.
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April 13th to April 18th
Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 13th to April 18th
Oh my, I can't decide which I like the most. April thirteenth, made me smile and remember the Valle dei Templi Valley of Temples in Sicily, a delightful place, especially at dawn. April fourteenth I stare wide eyed, a movie in my head. April fifteenth. Found it! I so love the imagery. April sixteenth. Hat tip. April seventeenth, a mathematical detour from bagel to arithmophobe (nice word BTW). What an arch, I'm impressed. April eighteenth. Very educational for the foreigner from distant lands. I had fun. -
I know we joked about a sump pump poem, I think it came out very well, as sad as it is. I can relate to #11 and #14, especially the love and fellowship part.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings, Gary. I loved it. Cliche...who cares.
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Strawberries have always been the epitome of not-winter to me, even in times where we can get any fruit at any time, imported from warmer countries. I'm happy you found things to savor in my poems, enjoyment is a very important part of life IMHO.
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I'm glad you enjoyed these and I could make you laugh.
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Thank you, Val. Did you find lime green tiles ?
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Thank you for reading, northie. I love that you think my thoughts jump rhythmically in contrast of erratically. Avian poem, I like this.
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Week 2 Day 8 Lost... Fingers fly over piano keys easily, detecting small imperfections only by touch, running over hill and dale, wind in hair— STOP! Focusing on sense of lost might help treasure the previously mundane again, but it poisons the mind eventually. The operative word is achievement, Not even regain, only plain achievement. (The sense of being/having lost) Day 9 Today the mind can’t latch on a given theme, focus on a certain mood, an image, or a
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I enjoyed the entire set. April seventh: I can relate. April tenth: I own an assortment of things that let me see people, open the veil between their world and mine, sometimes I even talk to them. April eleventh:Spring indeed! Thank you.
