“Good evening!”
The host of the TV talk show stood in front of her wildly-clapping audience, smiling broadly while pretending to hide something behind her back. “Thank you!” She waited for the people to calm down. “Thank you!” She put a finger on her lips, making a big show of almost dropping what she had in her right hand. “Oops.” She winked. “Today I have a surprise guest for you!”
Someone whistled loudly. Others began to yell guesses. “Keanu Reeves!” “Greta Thunberg!”
She laughed
Aaron was indeed capable of development, good. And Malcolm seized an unexpected opportunity given to him. Good. I liked the unexcited resolution.
Thank you for sharing.
Well, in that case, you should read the story again.
Rob is/was exposed to some albeit not all of these effects, which you knew if you'read the story thoroughly.
Naturally, Rob doesn't live through all the horrible effects of homelessness in one night.
Rob is not mocking homeless people.
Good idea! It's always well received. Make sure you have something salty and savory ready for after, lol. I'm honored you'll try this for such a special occasion.
Every tradition that results in eating something yummy is good. Where I live we have sweet men for St. Martin too....Thank you for your comment, dughlas.
I commented accordingly while beta reading the story. It makes the story realistic, though. Talking about this is difficult, especially being a um first-timer. Something for their next story (total subtle hint)