Lugh

Yes Fate, Luck, and Chance --- Val really does, poor baby. Four years is a long time to keep quiet over a family secret though, yes? I would love to drop Mia out of a trash chute... but I think we need her still. I don't like her much either.

I love Matov too. This installment was supposed to be from either Rix or Amberly's POV but Matov just took over and refused to let go. However the one thing I was really worried about was the "sex". Anyone care to discuss if it worked or not in the forums? What could be done to make it better... what could have been left out?

heh I'm not telling anyone anything. well I had to really mess it up before I could clean it up, right? I'm working on it soon. I'm trying to figure out some things, and finish up another project... then it will be out to you. Pity the beta/editor.

sighs. Confusion is NOT what I wanted to hear. Maybe I should just pull it...

As fall begins I would like to see just how much I really am writing. Comsie keeps saying I need to write more. So from now until Dec 21 I want to see how much I really am writing and editing. I'll figure out a fair method of counting later but today I -- Edited or rewrote site help/ Basic Care Guide of Authors -- all parts Community Blogs -- all parts 11 pages of a story.

No. I think the next part cannot stand alone. It will be showing up not in the anthology. Something else will have to go in Aftermath. Sorry. It will be showing up not long after the anthology though I hope. There might be another short installment between now and then but I'm not promising. I'm really glad you are enjoying it. This one was VERY hard to make stand alone. I'm still not quite sure it does. Hugs. Thanks for reading.

Tob... there are five parts... you missed "It Was A Monday"

Well Frosty, I like it. Sorry it took so long to get to reviewing it. You have some nice imagry here and a logical progression from beginning to end. Kudos.

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This Blows! They landed. Valdorn and the Hanovers’ immediately debarked. The Cousins stayed back with the ship and the prisoners. They were met and escorted into a small building. “I hope you will find our travel papers in order,” Valdorn said as he passed over everyone’s travelling documents. Maggie understood her role in this little drama and moved to stand closer to him. “We are looking for my betrothed’s brothers, Puck and Amberly Hanover as well as Brianna Legacy. We understand Prince

Hell Hath No Fury… Brianna couldn’t find Amberly. He was not in the room when she finally went to bed the night before and he wasn’t with her now. She dressed and went to check on Bobby hoping to find him there, but he wasn’t. “Has Amberly been in this morning?” she asked. “Haven’t seen him. He don’t come very often or stay very long,” Bobby wouldn’t meet her eyes. “I’m broken.” “You are not broken. He’s worried about Puck. He knows you have me. When you weren’t there for me he was,”

Courting Disaster “This is the strangest message I think I’ve ever gotten, Tal,” Kismet said as he wrote it down on a sheet of paper to study it. It was basically a string of numbers like a text converter gone bad. “Who is it from?” “Well at first I thought it might be Valdorn, but we talked this afternoon. His ship is docking at their exchange tonight. A ship in Uncle’s fleet is meeting them there.” “They made good time then.” “Well, there were a few complications, and he did hav

Duties Unbound Matov was exhausted. Teaching the boys the priest had rounded up to replace Torzet, Windal, and Alvaz was a lot like herding kittens – blind kittens – who mewed for their mothers constantly. It was hopeless. Well maybe not hopeless, but he was tired of hearing them complain about everything like it was his fault they were there. It was not his fault. These things happened. Heirs bound and others, well others… He understood why Alvaz ran away to the priesthood. Now that he wa

Raised to believe the being Eldest Unbound is a position of honor, Matov accepts the mantle of Duty fully on his shoulders. However, when fate meets faith, Matov must choose to follow the teachings of the temple or the fire in his heart.

hah she will be late cause girls are always late it's fashionable you know. the green works, it's pretty. get t-shirts made for you and mike that says "he's the mommy" with arrows and wear them when your daughter wears her mommy t-shirts. embrace childhood, laughter, and hairbows (in your hair). I'm glad your marriage survived the putting together of the crib. Now if it survives the mother invasion for the next three months you will be fine. Be firm. Be strong. Change the locks.

Ok you're making me care about this kid, and that is good. You really don't need to translate those words, the translations deter from the reading flow. They are easy to figure out their meaning from the context. Now I'm a bit curious as to where this might be going. Let's see if you can take me there. Happy writing... Lugh

I guess "bleh" would be considered an inappropriate response... it was ok. Not really enough to get worked up over, no investment in the characters so I didn't really care. Why was the candle thing big as a car? that made no sense. Although if they all are going to be full of nasty surprises this might be a fun little story. But I really need some sort of emotional investment in the people who die. Keep writing.

Hey Louis. Taking a look so I can honestly say one way or the other. Gah those foot notes made my head hurt. And do you have an editor? I didn't see one listed. There were several places that could have benefited from having an editor look at it. If you want one -- editing forum - WS Request forum -- follow the directions pinned at the top. Now, about the story itself -- it was good. I'm going to read the next chapter. The story itself was interesting. I'm not quite invested, but part of that is due to your footnotes and all those other notes. Yeah I'm the person who actually reads those, usually BEFORE the story. We'll take this one chapter at a time. I don't do a whole lot of reviewing, I told you that. But... we'll see. Keep writing and stop complaining. They'll read it, eventually. Lugh

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hey guys, I am looking for the "best of" the older anthologies -- 2004-2008. This group is 2004 and some of 2006. I'll post more later as these get some votes. I know most of you haven't read them, so if you could do me a favor and take a look it would be much appreciated. Most of them are shorter. In the poll above you can pick as many or as few as you would like and I'm not putting an end date on it right now. I would rather see how many people vote. 2004 -- Christmas 2006 -- Day of Silence 2006 -- Going on Vacation 2006 -- Halloween Thanks. Lugh

glittery vampires yep that's it.

No I've not changed at all.

So does this mean that you ADMIT to reading at least one of my stories to know that I indeed do use cliffhangers or is this just a deflection tactic? I'm thinking it's a deflection tactic...

Well, our house is in a unique situation. DC has always called me Dad or daddy. However Bump has a daddy so he calls me a combonation of daddy and my last name because DC was calling me daddy and I didn't think it right for him to call me daddy when he had one. It works for us. When I did have a long term live in, DC called him pop cause we were both of the belief that a child calling an adult by their first name was inappropriate and calling him "mister" was too formal.

apparently Marty is mistaken. Lughcifer is a fey little thing.