Rndmrunner
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What I love about this story is that while generally quite serious in content, there is still a place for lighter moments and humour
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Gary has invested a lot of energy working at hiding who he is. He wants to be blind that others can see through his cover. Now he will start to deal with it and hopefully will realize that his mom is both smart and on his side
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Ronyx, you're killing me; I am just settling in for a nice long chapter...... - Wait, What, it's over ????? 1500 words ??? Who do you think you are Mann Ramblings??
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I like the slow start. Gary is just starting to deal with his sexuality and doesn't know where to turn and this is carried on the page. More please.
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Fascinating and heart wrenching story. Is there a gay Mafia in Oz or just a regular Mafia who is an equal opportunity employer?
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We do always look forward to your regular postings. This is of course not your first priority though. The anticipation of the next chapters will only heighten the pleasure when they arrive. Hope everything settles out. Be well Graeme
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It is amazing how you show Artie (and Dizzying Adam) continuing to grow, independently and as a family (come on Dizzy is family by now). Both the characters and the readers got a chance to lighten up and have a giggle this chapter !!
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I loved the story even if I think that Carter could have retained his memories. Those experiences helped him mature as well as are part of him.
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It's been a nightmare for Woody and it will get worse before it gets better. Its nice to see a tender moment between Woody and Lucas
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I sense some back-seat driving happening here - bio-dads and custody. we are just passengers along for the ride, though sometime we have white knuckles so fasten your seatbelts.
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Well, that was just plain cruel. Laura, maybe you have a little Alex in you? Until next week then
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Saved by a dirty diaper! (or are they nappies down under?)
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Amazing story but heart wrenching.
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Well things just got serious very fast. We all knew that he grand parents were going to make another appearance. Fasten your seatbelt......
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This was never going to be an easy story. It's great but difficult.
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Sometimes, It’s All About The Plates
Rndmrunner commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Sometimes, It’s All About The Plates
I would say that Carter should grow a pair but it is obvious that has has balls - he just does;t know how to use them! -
Never corner a bully unless you are on sure ground. Bullies are cowards and easily lash out against their best friends much less an enemy. This will get much darker before it resolves.
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Great chapter! Its time for the boys to put their adolescence behind them. Things are getting serious and pretending that it is all so cas will lead to troubles and drama. Alex may thrive on drama but Aron and Carter, not so much. Can't wait for the next instalment.
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And also one of the hardest to read. There is potential disaster and danger at every turn
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Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
Rndmrunner commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
Wow, there is so much ownership involved in topping, hope the boys can just enjoy each other -
Experimenting To Be With You
Rndmrunner commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Experimenting To Be With You
Simon doesn't seem so bad. He is a little f*cked up chasing after Alex (or Carter as Alex) but he is a nice guy at heart. Hope he finds someone nice -
Poor Woody, a lot is happening very fast and he is definitely not in the driver's seat and is struggling to keep up. I hope he gets a pause to adjust and absorb everything.
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"That the residents of Panoramic Mansion are seldom out of the tabloids might give you an idea of its exclusivity" Having dealt with Manhattan, Co-op boards, i find this line amusing; celebrity is often reason for denial in Fifth Avenue. Trump may be able to live in Trump tower but not a chance in 740 Park Avenue.
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i am wondering if Connor saw Woody's screen???
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This story has an ominous feel about it. I fear that things are going to get bad real fast.
