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Chapter 78 No Such Thing As Bad Publicity
Dodger commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 78 No Such Thing As Bad Publicity
I've been getting a battering lately for this later than usual chapter but it's better than being ignored, I suppose, so I'll attempt to get back on track now. Robbie made his point with Sue but will he be able to do the same with Don? -
Chapter 78 No Such Thing As Bad Publicity
Dodger commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 78 No Such Thing As Bad Publicity
Yeah, it would be kind of frustrating. Let's hope that Don has learned his lesson and is able to come to terms with their sexuality. I don't think that anyone would forgive him a second time. -
“POLICE! PUT YOUR HANDS ABOVE YOUR HEAD!” It was a woman’s voice but there were others with her. I squinted into the flashlight, confused and scared as they barked instructions at us. When the kitchen light came on, I could see four officers, three men and one woman. They were pumped up and looked kitted out for combat as if they had been expecting some kind of armed resistance. The odds were undeniably stacked in their favour; they faced two teenage boys in their underwear and ten-year-old in a
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This is a wonderful and well-written story by a talented author.
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I've been looking at this story for ages but until now I've never had the time to read it. Cool start to what I think will be a good read.
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Thank you for your kind words and encouragement @bubby1234 I think that we would all have liked to have found a Charlie or Roger when we were younger. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. There will definitely be more from these boys soon.
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Thanks, Parker. I love it that you're reading the story and it sounds as if you're enjoying it. I'm not sure about 28,000 but it probably seems like that many and someone must have tipped them off. Could be Jazz!
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I was doing the same thing when I was writing it!
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Thank you for pointing this out; I hadn't even noticed myself and I suppose that nobody really likes being called stupid even if, as in Robbie's case, he often is. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate the feedback.
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment @Potterslashfan
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You're probably right, in which case he's past his sell-by date already. These so-called pop stars don't have particularly long careers, which is understandable when most of your fans are under 12-years-old.
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Thank you @quokka for reading and commenting, it isn't a long story but there are a few more chapters to come.
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Well, as Andy found out, he's capable of anything. Probably because he never has to face the consequences of his actions. We will see, thanks for reading.
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Definitely, a spoiled little wanker and I could think of a few other choice words. Thanks for reading.
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It's nothing personal against my many American friends but Canada already has a real life attention-seeking jerk and Britain has an entire family of them at large. A fleet of quadcopters and jumping onto the lorry's roof makes Tyrone sound like a bit of a James Bond character, which wasn't really how I was trying to portray him but maybe he sees himself in that kind of role. Really, of course, he's just a commodity, used to make money for the already rich fat cats who own him. They'll want to get as much out of him as possible before he reaches his sell-by date and the scrapheap of teeny pop stars. What age is that now 19 or 20? Thanks for the comment @droughtquake
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“Let me go, you freak,” he said but I held on and tightened my grip around his wrists. We were deadlocked but when he kicked me in the shin, I instinctively replied with a swift knee to his bollocks and he cried out in pain. It alerted the security guard who came running towards us with Bob behind him, but as I turned towards them ready to plead my innocence, the golden haired brat leaned his head forward and took a bite out of my hand. “Argh, you bastard.” I let go and stepped backwards
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Admittedly, this is a difficult part of the story to read. Robbie is a very troubled boy who is desperate to be accepted by his new family and friends and believes that he can only do this by being straight. He's lying to himself as well as those around him and with little guidance and no role model, he tends to learn the hard way. There is a light at the end of the tunnel and I hope that you are able to plod on because it does get a lot easier. Thank you again for your comment.
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writing tip Writing Tip: Speech Tags
Dodger commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
"I love this feature, Renee," Dodger said artfully. "Thank you, Graeme, for taking the time to explain it so well." -
Yeah, me too. @BlindAmbitionSorry to keep you waiting and as always thanks for reading and commenting.
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I never thought of that before but you are right and it does happen all the time at workplaces. I don't think that Bob would care if he has to work all night but Andy will and Tyrone definitely will. Eventually, of course, if they can't fix the boiler then the record company will have to move him into a hotel. Tyrone, as you mention has no idea what is socially acceptable and he definitely doesn't like the way that Andy has treated him, which is basically the same as he would treat anyone else.
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Ha, maybe he was just hungry. I know that the record companies like these kids to be skinny, so Mrs Dewsbury's probably got him on a strict diet!
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Thank you @chris191070
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Biting someone does seem to be a little extreme but this brat will continue to surprise Andy with his unpredictable antics. Thanks for the comment.
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Thank you, @Parker Owens Yes, Tyrone is a first-class ass who's used to getting what he wants. Unfortunately, we have yet to see the worst of him.
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Yes, of course, no one would bat an eyelid if you said that in England but elsewhere it could get you into a bit of trouble.
