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“That’s really funny,” I said. “We are talking about the same guy, right? Is that why you think I’m here; you think that we’re having some kind of gay love affair.” I tried to laugh and make fun of a very unfunny situation but Jenny was poker faced and had plenty of ammunition at hand to substantiate her claim. “Alex doesn’t do sleepovers unless he’s getting laid,” she said. “I’ve never known any of his friends to stay over at his house, not ever. You don’t even hang out with him; he never
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Thank you, Caz. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this story.
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I hate them too Tim. They do keep me awake. Thanks for your comment.
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Thank you @BrianM for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Thank you, @Defiance19
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Thank you @Freerider for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Nice one @northie I agree with Aditus, it could have been a Halloween prompt too. I enjoyed this; I think that you did a good job.
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Thank you, Cia. I hope this means you liked it.
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Thank you @dughlas I suppose there's nothing really erotic about an alarm clock is there, but yes he would have known Tommy better than anyone. Thank you for your comment.
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Thank you @northie for your comment. I wouldn't want a wind-up model either, but I couldn't deny our retro friend a happy ending. Glad you liked it.
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Thank you so much @Valkyrie for taking the time to read and comment. Your kind words and encouragement mean a lot to me.
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No harm in a little bit of love. I love a lot of inanimate objects. Not sure if I would love something that woke me up every morning with a loud bell though. Thank you so much for your comment.
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Thank you @aditus I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and appreciate you taking the time to comment. It means a lot to me.
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Thank you @Magicstate I appreciate your comment as always. Love the joke 'doodat?' I've gotta use that somewhere.
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I like this story. You did well to bring that hungry fire to life.
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Brilliant Tim. I really enjoyed reading this. Reincarnation was a great way to explain how the fire extinguisher came to life. You also managed to include a gay theme, threw in some humour and picked your way carefully around a difficult topic. Home run, my friend!
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Thanks for posting this @MrM I can't believe that I only caught up with this yesterday and you post a new chapter today! It's funny reading about the two boys both reluctantly dating girls and believing the other one's straight but secretly wanting each other. I bet this has happened quite a lot, not just in high school either. Thanks for all the hard work you've put into this story.
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It had been another long day; a Saturday according to the flashy LED directly above me. He did days, months, and years, and plugged into the wall. A useful gadget to have around but too close for my liking, and he wasn’t doing much for my chances of finding a home. The shoppers noticed him first because he was unboxed. I generally hated display models; second-hand goods laid bare to be used and played with by all and then sold off cheaply to make way for new stock. I was still respectably c
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Confessions of a gay alarm clock!
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This story has everything but the length of time between posting chapters makes it unreadable. No matter how good a story is, nobody can enjoy it or be able to follow it properly with a three and a half year gap between chapters.
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Nice chapter as always but the length of time between posting was too long.
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A cool first chapter to a great story. Ethan and Drew are very believable characters.
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One of my favourite chapters from one of my favourite stories. The ending is brilliant.
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Nice chapter and now I'm up to date with the story. I really like what you've done so far and I appreciate the work that you've put into it. It's a credit to the Billy Chase series.
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story critique Improve & Encourage #3: Alex's Legacy
Dodger commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Excellent work William, you really sold this story to me. Thank you @Valkyrie for providing me with something extra to read.
