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Dimitri must be quite the f----ster to keep everyone one a string. lol He certainly must do something right I had a feeling he was the one to come up with the plan. The girls tickle the hell out of me. Can't wait to see what Siggi gets into next chapter
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Dang, I missed this chapter. Dimitri is a piece of work, but I think Siggi is the bastard. He seems to get off thinking he is torturing Gunni. Gunni is a lot tougher than he seems, but his blushing makes it seem the opposite. He can take a lot more than Siggi realises. Great chapter.
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Chapter 2 – Units and Equations
joann414 commented on meanderingsNmusings's story chapter in Chapter 2 – Units and Equations
Travis is going to be a hand full. I couldn't help but smile at how he is trying to play it cool, although I feel the chances of him keeping his thoughts and feelings to himself are nil to none. lol Great chapter and looking forward to more. -
Chapter 1 - Where all things start
joann414 commented on meanderingsNmusings's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Where all things start
This looks like a good one! The tough detective and the mouthy twink. Great start! -
"claps like a happy kid". so glad you are going to tell Zu's story girl. Can't wait to see the shit you put him thru for being such a dick to BAy
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So many good things in this chapter. But, have to say the male bonding hit 10 on a scale of10 The four guys seem to be bonding in a great way/. Why do I keep getting a slight niggling every time Prez and Derrick are together. The parents are being very lenient imo as far as rules during the school year, especially given the boys relationship and their age. Great job!
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This was very much worth the wait. I love little Jake, but grown ups need grown up time. That's what my parents used to tell me. lol. Hope the two guys can get past the awkwardness. But, it's kinda cute
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Well, "pats self on back",lol. My instincts were right on about Drew, cute fellow. He has his own inner demons and worries, but looks like he is handling them and moving right along. The diary touch was a great idea on how to reveal this though. YOu are doing a wonderful job with this stories, and each of your characters are very individual in their own personalities, keeping the reader's interest in all and not just your main characters.
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DAng, they may have slept under the stars, but I saw stars you wrote that sex scene it was so hot! I am enjoying this story so much. The homophobic idiots that beat the gay guy should be hung. I can understand why the boys were so upset, especially Derrick since his dad and brother hate gays. Wonder ful story, well paced, and not over done. Thank you
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Why do I feel that things are just too good to be true at the moment. Parents are communicating and fine with everything. The four boys have cleared the air and even Preston's mom, just now learning all seems calm and cool about everything. Preston and Mike are almost inseperable. Something has to crack here soon.
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The most entertaining chapter yet. I love all of the boys so much. Drew, I think is confused about his sexuality and Keith and Preston are so caught up in themselves that they don't see it. John has gained a maturity over the few days that they have been there, being in the presence of the older boys. Had the feeling that Keith's father already knew that the two boys were in love. Takes love to know love and from what you have showed of Keith's parents, there's a lot there to behold.
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So glad everyone is coold with Preston and Keith's relationship. I know they were a little anxious about John. The dives into the lake with the imitated scream was hilarious. Only close brothers do things like that One thing that thought about, was how trusting Keith's father is to let the couple stay in the room with the younger brothers, even knowing they were in a relationship. Says a lot about trust. This was a sweet and great chapter.
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Two Sides of the Same Coin
joann414 commented on TheEggman's story chapter in Two Sides of the Same Coin
I can imagine why Keith feels like a third wheel sometimes. Maybe now they can all become great friends. Mike and Derrick seem like genuine guys full of goodness and love for each other. I am still waiting for the shoe to drop somewhere. -
What beautiful imagery in your rock by the lake scene. YOu wrote that perfectly. Can't you just imagine laying on a large flat warm rock, with someone you care about and staring at the sky or a beautiful lake? Drew, I think is a pretty complex character. Have a feeling things about him are fixing to come to light. Great job!
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Love to see a teen go from depressed to happy. The only thing better than being in love is being young and in love. Preston and Keith are way cute together. I am not even going to tell you what I thought the surprise was going to be.
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I also had the impression that the story was memories of Preston's. Nothing is better than sitting on a beach after dark with friends and music. I am glad you showed the true hormonal feelings here instead of letting two fifteen gay guys, profess their feelings for each other, sleep in the same bed, and not touch each other. YOu would have had me doubting that.
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Boy, you talk about changes. A baby will flip your world in a heartbeat. The boys will become attached to Maryanne before they know it and everything will revolve around and be about her. Loving this Wayne.
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Danny and Moose was thrown a curve ball and stepped up to the plate when they took Chad. I was so proud of Danny for trying so hard to no avail until Chad ran away and realised in Danny's rescue of him that he was loved by both men. Such a beautiful and entertaining story. Thank you so much for sharing and for a happy ending!
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Everyone doesn't get a second chance at a good life, but Moose certainly did. Danny knew a good thing when he found it, but he had a hard time giving Moose back his self-esteem. Life is never going to be perfect, but love endures when you fine the right one to share it with. Wonderful story!
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Chapter 23 - Epilogue
joann414 commented on meanderingsNmusings's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Epilogue
This was a beautiful story from beginning to end. Of course I am a sucker for happy endings, and you wrote a great one! Thank you so much for sharing -
I think you are a menacing tease and that your chapters are too short. I would be meaner if you did not have such a great story here and you might block me Seriously, I loved the chapter and the fact that Asher does want Michael not to only learn male to male sex, but show him what it feels like in a meaningful way, and not just a quick handjob or "wham bam thank you sir", sex. Michael is so in lust, love, and into Asher that he is about to explode. If that is how you are wanting it to come across to the reader, then you did a great job writing it. Good stories always have characters that find their way into the readers thoughts and hearts and not just remain on the paper they are writting on.
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Awww, Kent seemed so calm and confident and went straight to his parents to be sad. Makes me want to hug him so much. Jon is not the bad person he thinks he is and I am glad he finally knows that. Can't wait for the epi, and more stories from you.
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Chapter 21 – Despair
joann414 commented on meanderingsNmusings's story chapter in Chapter 21 – Despair
obviously something more happened and I guess Carter will have to fill us in on that one. HOpe it wasn't too bad. Obviously, Kent is not upset for that as much as Jon's immaturity. -
Chapter 20 – Loose ends
joann414 commented on meanderingsNmusings's story chapter in Chapter 20 – Loose ends
Standing ovation for Kent. Jon was drunk,and spewed his true feelings. Where does Carter fit in? Seems Jon needs to get his feelings in order, and not just jump on the "I love you" wagon. He has some issues to be resolved, and I agree with Kent about the time apart. Love the chapter, but hate the uncertainty. -
Chapter 2 An Old Friend with an Old Grudge
joann414 commented on flawlesss's story chapter in Chapter 2 An Old Friend with an Old Grudge
High school drama at it's best. Great job. Sometimes you need to see that things are not going to calm down and go away just because you want them to do so. Love this story
