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Standing ovation for Kent. Jon was drunk,and spewed his true feelings. Where does Carter fit in? Seems Jon needs to get his feelings in order, and not just jump on the "I love you" wagon. He has some issues to be resolved, and I agree with Kent about the time apart. Love the chapter, but hate the uncertainty.

High school drama at it's best. Great job. Sometimes you need to see that things are not going to calm down and go away just because you want them to do so. Love this story

Myiege told me this was a great read and she is absolutely right. I loved it. Ben and Mark are so different, but somehow, a lot alike. Great job Thorne

Well, that was subtle Talking about getting to know someone. Just take the plunge and sink or swim. This is so much fun Renee. Thanks for sharing

I am definitely up for more of this tail. the two characters you've let us meet so far are awesome. Maertegh seems like she would be a great watchdog for Shawn. Under that gruff exterior, I bet she is a pussycat. Shawn had me laughing at his "what the hell" thoughts. Being thrown around like a ragdoll was new to him. That's for sure. lol Love this

What a way to go. His family does not know the right ways to do things for him. His friends has disowned him and he was rejected for awards that should have been his. I think I would have taken the first train out of town period, as long as I could just get the hell out of Dodge. Ryan did a lot of wrong things also. I guess at their age, it is hard to just talk things out. When you are angry, you can't seem to see past the red. Only time heals things like that. I know that from experience. Sometimes it never gets fixed. You just have to leave it behind and move on. Hopefully, he will straighten things out with his parents now that he has Isaak to guide him a little, along with his Dale. So much going on here girl. Your imagination is working overtime these days.

I don't know how I missed these last two chapters. And this was the make up chapter. Yay!!!! love it:)

Great job! I was like WTF? I would have stabbed her with my fork or something What a coniving unfeeling bitch! Your drama definitely went over as you wanted it to. I promise

Well, if you want your main character to come across as a "little shit", mission accomplished Great start to your story. Can't wait to see who he sets his sights on for a boyfriend. Levi seems like a great best friend. Good job

Was I ever glad to see another chapter. I was fixing to commit murder. Yours I love, love, love this story. Poor guys. This is a terrible situation to have to make such a decision. I know you will fix it though. Good job Sui.

I hope you have another part of this tucked away in your brain or I am going to hunt you down and strangle you! lol Love this but is this really the end?

Liron is crazy. He should have waited. Can't wait to read the next chapter girl!

It's funny how circumstances can change your place in life. For instance, Ralph went from being the dependent one to the one needed by Neill. It's always great to see two brothers close. Poor Neill has a long row to hoe ahead of him, but I have a feeling he and Ralph will manage a lot between the two of them. Looking forward to more Wayne.

Preston seems like the typical teen. Moves to a new town, meets someone, and settles in to make his first friend. Hope he doesn't get too hooked on the weed tho. lol. His mom does not seem like the type that would be too happy about that. Looks like an interesting story you have set up here. Thanks for sharing

Bay is where a lot of teen-age gay males find themselves. He has been outed, lost his best friend and is scared and feels alone. It is hard to point your finger at one person here, but as you said, teen-agers can be total shits. I hated my senior year of high school for that very reason. The teens around me sickened me with their "clicks", homophobic and racial slurring, and bullying of those that weren't in the clicks. I was relieved to graduate and get away from it all. I am sure that is what Bay is wanting at this point also. Great chapter Sasha

That was not a good move, not a good move at all. When you kiss your best friend on the lips, he has the right to question you. Bay should have kept his temper and talked to Ryan. Angst galore. Great chapter

Certainly hope your peeing mechanics get back in order. That does suck. Has not affected your writing though. MIchael is a piece of work, gay work if I may say so, even if he thinks different Poor Asher was like a small child, he was so pitiful. This is an interesting set up, I have to admit. Asher is already in love, and MIchael still insists he's not gay. This recuperation period is going to be pretty hairy. Wonder who's going to break first? Will Michael admit he's gay or will Asher get frustrated and angry, resulting in him kicking Michael's butt out. Can't wait to find out

Kei's mother is too wishy washy for me. Can't trust her yet, even though she acknowledged that Alex loves Kei. Angela seems to have things under control, until this last episode. Hopefully, Kei was just exhausted from the stress of talking too much and trying to deal with things in his confused state.

The happy ending I loved, but the sadness of this story is that it happens more than any of us will ever know. It would be nice if everyone that needed it, had a JB, but unfortuantely, they don't and have to take their chance and suffer the consequences on their own. Scott's parents were not his mother and father, but just a sperm donor and delivery woman. I say that in a sincere tone. "hops up soapbox" Enjoyed your story from beginning to end

Quite a unique take on the topic, but effective. I did go get dice from my Yahtzee game and gave it a try. Jem had the advantage most rolls of the dice. In the back of my mind, I felt that the monks and Noble had found out what was going on and they were going to entrap Jem. Glad that was not the case though. At least their new way of doing things went on into the future for other monks. Good job!

I agree with Daithi. Zu rocks at this moment. Bay better take his advice and run with it.

Now I am wondering if Bay and Zach's friendship ended in Zach's rejection of him. Lot of food for thought here. But, is Bay still carrying a torch for Zach and trying to form a relationship with Isaac. In the back of my mind, I kinda wonder if Zach took advantage of an infatuation of Bay's and screwed him and then pushed him away. Mmmmm. Write fast Sasha

Bay is hurt, but Isaac seems to be even more so. Never be so self-centered that you can't see beyond your own problems and issues. Love this

I downloaded this on a whim late yesterday afternoon and read it at one sitting. You told a wonderful story. Kudos

Now, I really can't wait for the holiday and Jon's mother's reaction to Kent's parents and their social standing. Kent is very much in love with Jon and hopefully JOn will get his head out of his ass. Great job!