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Haunting your stories today. What a great emotional story. Imagine hiding a secret for so long from your lover, soon to be husband. Jesse had to be a nervous wreck inside. Loved this girl!
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Sunday 11th December 2010
joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Sunday 11th December 2010
You know, I have seen several errors throughout the story, but I find as you write, there's less and less of them. None of them have really taken away from the story for me though. This chapter was great and your writing gets better and better. keep up the good work! -
This looks like another great one Renee. Can't wait for more.
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Bay and Zupan are a match made in hell. lol. Isaac is gay? I hope he is not some kind of wierdo and tries to hurt Bay. Great chapter. WAiting on more like always
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This is about the cutest story that I have ever read. It is very entertaining with just the right amount of sex. Great job Larwain!
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Friday 22nd October 2008
joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Friday 22nd October 2008
So, Bay got the hell scared out of him and that is why he is scared to act gay. I have to be a little more understanding of him now. Being bullied is not something anyone wants to deal with. Great chapter Sasha! -
Alexi realised that his music made him forget his stage fright. Joshua is so good for him. The declaration of love was so damn sweet. Made my heart hurt
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I agree about Bay and Zupan hooking up. Kinda like a good hot fire myself+ Bay has a lot of issues. Maybe Zupan can help Now, I have to wait for more
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Thursday 6th of June 2013
joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Thursday 6th of June 2013
mmmmm, I guess that went well. Bay comes out and then all but slurs the gay guys passing by. A little f ked up I think. But, maybe he is gay, but does not like gays. Or maybe he is just f--ked up. lol -
Wednesday 19th January 2003
joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Wednesday 19th January 2003
Poor Bay. Kiddos are resilent though. I am sure he made another best friend. Sweet chapter -
Sunday 2nd of June 2013
joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Sunday 2nd of June 2013
Bay seems a little timid, and I think that is why he does not flaunt his sexuality. I agree with Dale on the point he tried to make in a subtle way. Don't misrepresent yourself to others! Great chapter. Can't wait for the game -
Good, good, good grief. I am feeling sorry for Michael. Hopefully, this will not discourage him. Poor Asher also. He is in the in between mode, and wants Michael so bad. and Tyler is at his apartment. What a mess. Great Chapter KC
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Well, another great story from you huh? This first chapters sets the tone so well. I love this. Glittery and camp huh? lol. People amaze me sometimes. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Davis is definitely a force to be reckoned with and has a great since of humor. What a great chapter!
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I don't know anything to say here Louis but that you wrote this chapter so beautifully that it game me chills and made my heart hurt. When I finished, I realised I had tears on my face. When you feel this emotional as you read a story, the author has done his job and this was perfection
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Michael persues some kind of relationship but accuses Ash of only helping him becasue Ash was attracted to him? Someone needs to step back and look at the situation from another perspective. He was the on that showed up at Ash's apartment unannounced. Ash did the right thing by being honest about being gay and checking Michael out. If you are going to be friends, lovers or whatever, honesty is the keyword. I think a little angst was needed between the two to spice things up a little. Kudos to Ash for sending MIchael home. Let him stew for a little while. Great chapter, and sorry I am already out of "likes", but I will come back and catch you when I get more
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This was a beautiful ride SAsha. Thank you for sharing your story with us
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Like oil and water. Vincent and Haje are not a great mixture at the moment but seems they are going to be closer that what either really wants at this point. Haje has reason to be suspicious, but that does not keep him from wanting Vincent to stay in his room for the night. As alway, love this
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I keep coming back to this I know, but the differences in the two boys and how well they fit together amazes me. You write them so well. I was not surprised at what happened after the fight. That takes place a lot more than we will ever know. I think Cole's parent's are going to be fine with the boys living together. But I am wondering about Jared's twin. It is going to be hard for her I think. Guess I will just have to wait and see how you handle it.
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Great job. I think I am in love with Jared myself. The deaf boy teaching the cowboy how to make love was a freaking awesome plot. The scene was hot but so damn sweet. Can't wait for more!
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I agree with Jamie that it would not be a big issue because of Brad and Tony's age, but I also think Brad is running scared. He felt the loss of his boyfriend and so did Jake. But, kids are resilent and I think he is seeing that with Murray and Jake. You are doing a wonderful job with these prompts. I love this story!
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I am glad you do quick updates This is one of my favorite stories. Jared is so damn sweet and Cole is the perfect foil for him. Great chapter
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You write emotions wonderfully! Jared is in a very delicate world and Cole is still leaning that. Hopefully Cole will be able make Jared see that he cares too much about him to hurt him. Great chapter
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Have to say that I am hooked on your fantasy. This is a great story. I feel like I know who the virgin is though Waiting on next chapter already!
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I don't know how I missed this. Great beginning Sui. Poor Haje. HIs mother seems so sweet and the poor housekeeper, Christina practically raised the twins. How sad for the three of them. Shin was going to tell Haje what I guess would solve this whole cliffhanger. Sheesh. Write fast Please!!!!!
