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  1. Wonder if my daughter ever called me a piece of work to her boyfriends? Probably Great chapter, and loved the bar scene. Can't wait to see what happens over the holidays
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    Chapter 1

    Dang Wayne, the sad element blew me away here. Great job guy, but sheesh!
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    Worth It

    Bud, you can write some deep stuff. Kudos to you:)
  4. That was unexpected. I was wondering who was telling this story. Great writing!
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    Chapter 1

    While this is not my cup of tea, it certainly kept me reading. After about two minutes, I was taken. Your imagination must drive you crazy sometimes! Loved it:)
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    Chapter 1

    I don't know how to explain this, but I could not bring myself to click,"like". Horrific and sad. Great writing. Kinda what Delores said. Don't know what to say.
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    Chapter 1

    Love me a happy ending with a lot of sweetness in the mix!
  8. Jenny is lucky to have Jon, and Jon is lucky to have Kent. They are a great group of friends. Jon seems so much younger than Kent. I guess Kent seems to act more mature. Something tells me that before long Jon is going to have to man up and go with what he feels. Great chapter
  9. Well, Zupan is definitely a force to be reckoned with, crippled or not. His heart seems in the right place this time though. Maybe he knocked some sense into Bay. Great chapter!
  10. Oh hell, What a mess. Poor Jon is more nervous than Jenny. lol
  11. This chapter explains a lot of Bay's frame of mine at present. His past is not one to be proud of. That's for sure. He has a reason to be careful, but not the homophobic jerk he is at times. Great chapter!
  12. Maybe when Kent gets settle in and realises how much he misses Jon, he will approach the subject of them moving in together. I can understand the questions that Jon has in his mind. Only time will tell if the long distance thing will work. It will work, they will grow apart, or they will realise they want to be together all the time. Can't wait to see how you work this out.
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    Chapter 1

    I just found this story. Let me tell you. If you grew up where I did and live where I do now, this could very well be a true story. I love you descriptions. It reminded me of when I would talk my dad to take me as a young girl (twelve or younger) to the bayou fishing with him. I was fascinated with gators and moccasins. I couldn't watch my cork for looking for beady eyes above the water or a snake gliding across the water. There's been times that I had to choose between the gator in the water or trusting my dad to get the snake out of the boat that had fallen from a tree above us. It's funny how it doesn't seem so scary now, but just a great memory. "jumps off soapbox now"..I loved this!
  14. Finally That sounded like a fun weekend though. I hope there's no regrets or uncertainties afterwards. Great chapter!
  15. And Bay's homophobic, not that type of gay, just bit him in the ass. I have no sympathy for him at this point. You are what you are, not matter what degree. Whether it is race, sex, or whatever. Bay needs to think long and hard and get his own life into perspective before thinking he can love someone, expecially someone so accepting of himself as Isaac is. "gets down off soapbox" Bay has a long way to go and looks like a short time to get there and his running skills are not going to help him. I wish there was an "asshole" emoticon. It would fit perfectly.
  16. Jon has a lot of trust issues it seems. Jeremy see ms to have hurt him more than he realises making him shy away from commitment. Your emotions were very well written in this chapter. Great job
  17. Bay damn well better dance with him next time. But, I have to wonder why Isaac just assumed it was Bay's fault. Kinda wierd!
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    Kiss and Tell

    The positive side of things is that MIchael will have to function around Asher on a regular basis. I think this will help the "who am I?", process alone. If the attraction is as strong as it seems, being in such close proximity with Asher should push Michael over the edge and to the truth about himself. JMO. Great chapter as always. Wishing you the best in surgery KC. Will be praying for you. Think positive! Jo Ann
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    Left Behind

    I loved this story, but the ending kinda blew me away. I certainly hope there is a sequel to this somewhere.
  20. Jon is lucky to have Jenny, and vice versa. I am so glad he told Kent he wanted to come to Seattle. You had me thinking maybe Kent was hiding something But, I am glad he was just waiting for Jon, like always. Maybe Kent will be just what the doctored ordered.
  21. I know life is life, but that little excapade was certainly dangerous, though very realistic. Bay didn't seem to be uncertain when he got to the "gay" part of town. He is quite a unique character.
  22. Well, Kent certainly seems to have no doubts now even though he has been through so much. You go Jon!
  23. Wow, what a lot of guilt Zol must have felt. No wonder the three guys are so close after what they went through together. Now I wonder if maybe Isaac and Za were in a realationship at anytime. Great chapter.
  24. DAng it! I am out of likes and that was an awesome chapter. How can Isaak say no to "I want to fuck you til you scream." That should definitely keep him confident and aroused.
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    Chapter Two

    Lol. Nothing puts me off more than an egotistical, braggart. They drive me nuts and I pretty much tune them out too. Hopefully things are looking up now. Can't wait for more
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