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    Chapter 5

    joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Hope that last sentence was not an omen. This story is getting better and better
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    Should have worn my cheerleader uniform for this chapter. Guess I will just send Dave a big hug! I hate to see this end.
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    Chapter 4

    joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Cole and Jared are going to make a great couple. I love Cole's dad. He seems very understanding, but gets a lot of respect from his "pups". lol Can't wait to see how this romance progresses. The first kiss was Great! Thanks for a great chapter
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    Chapter 3

    joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 3

    So why do I feel that Jared is going to be in Cole's class? Poor Jared is so upset. At least he dumped that scumbag Cole.
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    Chapter 2

    joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Joel seems to be taking advantage of Jared. I was certainly glad you did not let Cole walk in on them. It is a good sign that Jared is feeling guilt tho. Good job!
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Love your story SAsha. Jared seems a little shy instead of rude. Cole is defintely in lust or love one. lol. Great job!
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    What do I think? I think I am going to strangle you and feed you to Miss Piggy for lunch. A cliff-hanger after the scene in the bar. Not a happy camper right now. You better be writing fast Mr. Muppet! Put a great chapter out there and leave me hanging.
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    Matt is so sweet. I hope he finds someone to appreciate him like Nick appreciates Dave. Dave is strong and I think he will pick the right time or the right time will present itself unexpectedly to stand up to his dad. You have brought us along with you on a great journey Thorne. Great writing!
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    Alan is scary he is such a piece of work Hope he doesn't go after Nick in an angry way. Jason is a great person to have in your corner and it would be even better if he and Zoe hit if off. This was a very enlightening chapter. Matt is one of my favorite characters!
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    I knew that Zoe would be there for Nick. Blood is thicker than water and shit! I still wish the worst on Craig for what he did. So, Dave is out to his dad by default. For some reason i feel that Jason being there will help the process of acceptance along. I am hoping there is love in Dave's dad heart. Maybe Dave knocked some into it. LOL Great chapter!
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    Can I say I want to strangle you for leaving poor Gunni sitting at the table while these two are having blow jobs in the loo? Poor guy. Dimitri is a whore with more than just one musical instrument it seems and uses both as often as he sees fit. I am ready for some angst between the boys and a little hot chemistry they can't resist! Gunni's cuteness has to break Siggi soon. lol Great chapter
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    Chapter 4

    joann414 commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter 4

    So glad you can make months into days when writing You are working a sexual warmth into a "G" rated story and doing a damn good job of it. Murray is a great matchmaker tho. Now I can't wait to see if their resolve will last for a few months. Tony sounds pretty hot! Great chapter.
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    Well, I knew Craig was a piece of shit, but he is lower then flea piss now. Homophobic idiot rapes a sixteen year old. Someone should castrate him with a dull fork. So glad Dave was so supportive. wondering if Jason is going to be receptive of the boy's relationship. If Craig has the guts to stay until Zoe gets home, then is sickness is complete because Zoe loves her brother more than life and i know she will believe what he tell her. Great chapter!
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    Alan is fighting his own battles and hurting others in the process. Thankfully Matt, Dave and the others friend finally stood up to him and reprimanded him for his verbal bullying of Nick. Dave is so in love with Nick. Great chapter!
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    What a horrible wake up call for Nick. Just when you think that things are getting better, the bottom falls out from all. Dave stepped up to the plate tho. Even tho his "I love you" was unexpected, it was spontaneous and genuine and just what Nick needed at the moment. Dave is moving along with his feelings for Nick and even in this family crisis he was steadfast in his feelings for Nick and was there for support. Wonderful chapter!
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    Brighton Rock

    joann414 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Brighton Rock

    Nice piece of hotness. lol. Loved this!
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I think WEndy is a very dry witted character that carried the story perfectly. Theresa seems to almost see here as a troublesome puppy that she only lets out when she is needed. lol. Great story Wayne! Very entertaining
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    Cupid's Arrow

    joann414 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Cupid's Arrow

    If Michael isn't gay, he wants to be! lol. Asher is more complex than he was at first glance He has emotional issues to be resolved and surprisingly shared some of this with Mike. The mutual interest is definitely there, but how far will Michael push because Asher is thinking Michael is straight. Lots to ponder here. Loving your story KC!
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    Awesome chapter! I can understand Dave's reluctance and Nick's frustration. That's part of many relationships that mean a damn thing. If you care, you will find a mutual pace to explore all parts of your relationship tho it is pretty hard for each one at times. Alan is a piece of work and I am pretty sure a closet case huh? I like Matt! Great chapter!!!!
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    Chapter 6

    joann414 commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Awww, San and Ziyu's story is just beginning. This was beautiful as as all of your writing. Looking forward to hearing more from you!
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    I enjoyed this story from beginnning to end. Braylon was a bit of an ass, but I somehow feel that the meaness will take a seat behind Korbyn's and Brays' relationship now. YOu did a great job delivering this piece. HOpe you have something else ready to post. good job
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    Both guys seemed to have just tolerated Christmas with the family. lol. The choice of gifts exchanged by the boys I think were great. I am so glad Dave came clean about sitting and listening to Nick play that day. That confession said a lot.
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    The story is moving along nicely but I am looking forward to when Dave and Nick come out or worst case scenario, one of Dave's friends or his father catch them in a compromising way. Have a feeling it is going to be a pretty rough ride when this happens. Mel seems like the perfect friend for the boys and I hope she does find someone to love her like she deserves. Waiting for more!
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    Dave is very mature in his thoughts and reasoning for one so young. Most boys his age would freak out at this point before they even thought about thinking it through . You write emotions well without overdoing them. Nick is so friggin sweet and shy. You make me want to hug him. No wonder Dave is falling fo him. I can't wait to see what is bugging Mel. Maybe she is freaked out that her cousin is gay and closeted and is afraid for him. Another great chapter
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    Chapter 3

    joann414 commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I had forgotten about your weekend update and when I saw it I got so excited. These little chapters always make my day. Looks like there is definite chemistry between the two. Tony's almost unnoticeable reaction to Brad's breakup and Brad's feeling of warmth with the handshake. Methinks is it fixing to get pretty interesting. I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship
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