SoullessCynner
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Unfortunately, open-heart surgery is a very real thing, and it's never pretty. I hope I can keep Dane's recovery realistic. Well, the recovery that we see, anyway.
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Lol! Dekklahn irritates you? Well, hopefully he'll win you over by the end of this story. I based Dane's heart defects on my mom. My mom was born with two holes in her heart, and she had her first open-heart surgery when she was 11. She's 42 now (43 in Feb.), and she has a pacemaker AND a mechanical valve in her chest. I won't be THAT mean to Dane, though. Or will I?
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Awwww... It's over. This was a great story. Marc and Celyn are cute. I enjoyed this very much.
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Chapter 19 Why Am I Feeling Like This
SoullessCynner commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 19 Why Am I Feeling Like This
Is Gabri'el secretly in league with Micha'el? So far, I'm really not liking Gabri'el. -
Chapter 18 Don't Leave Me
SoullessCynner commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 18 Don't Leave Me
No! Poor Pasha! Oh wait. What am I saying? Bring on the torture! Loving this story so far. Can't wait for more. -
Chapter 24 - The Dance
SoullessCynner commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 24 - The Dance
"...Find the person you are... the one that lives inside, who has always lived inside... without any chains.” Powerful. Very powerful. Those words struck a chord in me. -
I'm scared to read the next chapter. I really, really don't want Silver to succeed in going "home". I really hope that they find him before anything happens.
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Awww... I actually want to believe Gabriel. But I have my doubts about him... And yay! Uzziel unlocked! Curious to know who he was left to, and what all they did to him...
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God, I love your evil, torturous mind.
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Hot. Not unexpected. Yet, I'm still disappointed in Glory. Poor Rover is probably gonna feel betrayed. But then again, this is a different world form ours, so he might not.
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Epilogues and New Beginnings
SoullessCynner commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Epilogues and New Beginnings
I loved this story so much. The characters felt real to me, and the plot was well-thought out. Little Man also invoked feelings in me, making me laugh one moment, and then cry the next. Excellent work! ~Cyn~ -
Happy belated birthday, Bee! *Hugs and snuggles*
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Panic, sharp and insistent. Heavy and suffocating. I can't seem to rise against this. It's burying me under my fears. Fingers like claws desperately cling, Praying for some ray of light. A ray to penetrate the foggy darkness, Illuminating anything substantial and real. Relief, sharp and intense, As a thin line of red thickens. Another slash and more red. The panic recedes slash by slash. The fog lifts with each new sting, More lines of red dripping, Sliding down satiny pale skin, Chasing the
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I wanted to see Candes and Matt have a happily ever after. D: Great story! I laughed and cried while reading it.
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Omg. The only thing running through my mind right now is, "Please tell me you didn't kill Matt. Please tell me you didn't kill Matt. Please tell me you didn't kill Matt." Over and over again. Onward to the epilogue!
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I figured it was something really bad like that. I still Matthew is an ass for treating his brother like that, but a brain tumor? You really like your drama, don't you? I hope he pulls through. And Maxi and Luke... I actually feel sorry for Maxi. I liked him until he pulled that stunt.
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I've never even heard of As the World Turns... >.> Okay, so that's not entirely true. I think somebody mentioned it a review to another story. But that's the extent of my knowledge of that show. Great chapter, btw. I like this story. And bad Maxi.
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And that, Holden, is why Luke left in the first damned place. You igit.
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I'm not saying that I agree with Gust's reaction to Matt's offer, but I do understand it. I mean, for starters, he's only 17 And then there's the whole thing where Matt hurt him and his relationship with Joe when he found out Gust was gay. So maybe he overreacted, but put in his shoes, I can't honestly say I wouldn't do the same.
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I knew it was Rob. Evil bastard. I just want to throttle him.
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Is it Rob?
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Aw. A baby! I really, really, really hope that Joe and and Gust stay together, even with a baby on the way. I actually like them together. They're cute. A little--okay a lot--quick one the big L-word, but cute nonetheless. And you tricked me! I thought it was Luke that jumped. Glad it wasn't, and glad the unborn baby survived the jump.
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I'm enjoying this so far. Although I do think the suicide attempt was a bit drastic. But then again, he is a 17 year old boy who had just had his heart ripped out. I guess love--or rejection of it--affects everybody differently. I ran out of likes about 2 chapters back. I'll have to try to remember to come back when I have more like what I missed.
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Nice chapter. I really like Luke and Noah. I also kind of like this Joe guy for Gust. Provided, of course, that he's not just playing with him.
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I agree completely with JoAnn. Sounds very interesting so far. I'll be checking back for the next chapter.
