SoullessCynner
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Great chapter. Loved the drama. I think Eric wants to be that man for Clay, but is too chicken to admit it. I mean, he does sound like a jealous girlfriend. >.>
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This story was cute. It was beautiful. And it made me think about what's really important in my life. Thank you for this great story.
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I can't believe I haven't replied to this yet. I apologize for that. This was a great review. Thank you very much. I try to make most of my poems have emotion, because most of the time when I write them, my own emotions are overflowing.
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Despite what they were/are doing, or perhaps because of it, I have this almost unbearable urge to say "Awwwwwwww!" Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
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...Did this chapter get pasted twice? Good, though!
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Toss-Up Tuesday: Interview With Myr
SoullessCynner commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Myr, I would just like to congratulate you on your excellent work in creating and maintaining this awesome site for us lowly people—especially with your busy schedule. I would also like to thank you for the same reason. -
Oh my gosh! I loved this story, Andy. It was well-written and intriguing. I was horrified by the bathroom scene of the near-rape; nobody ever deserves to be raped. Ever. And then you completely blew my mind with Jake being the savior. Bravo, Andy, for a great read!
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This is an awesome story so far! I can't wait for more!
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A voice called softly to me, “Richard.” I ignored the voice. I wanted to sleep. I wanted to sleep and forget. “Richard,” the voice called again, and again I ignored it. I turned over on my side, putting my back to the voice. I squeezed my eyes shut tight, trying not to let the images back in. The images only brought pain and tears. “Richard, look at me. I can make your pain go away.” Anger poured over me, through me, and I sat up. I turned to face the voice, fully intending t
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Spiders! This was great! I love how you structured this story to look like updates a scientist would send to whomever is in charge. Spiders rule! I want a tarantula...
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# 165 Thought to be extinct, until…
SoullessCynner commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in # 165 Thought to be extinct, until…
Poor dog. Evil millipede. Poor millipede. Great story. -
Writing Tip Writing Tip: Stolen Stories! Blast From An Angry Author
SoullessCynner commented on Cia's blog entry in Writing World
So, I'm trolling through the blogs out of boredom, and because I'm stalling going to bed, and I came across this. Stealing somebody's story is vile enough, but to then go and claim it as your own and sell it? It makes me sick. Sorry you had to go through that, Grimmie. I know this is late, but better late than never. -
Have I told you lately how incredibly evil you are? Is it possible for you to write a non-tearjerker? I've been up all night reading this story, and my eyes hurt from being tired and from leaking those tears you forced from me. I did tell you that I didn't like Kelly. Guess I had a reason to. Why did Luc have to die, though? You big meaniehead.
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Have I mentioned yet how much I do not like Kelly? Hurry, Cal, hurry! Go save your man!
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...STILL don't like Kelly. I probably won't ever like her unless she throws herself in front of a speeding semi to protect him.
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Photographers? Damn. That song alone had me misty-eyed. I would love to hear it actually sung by somebody (a guy). I can almost imagine a deep, haunting voice singing it... *Shudders* Great chapter! ..And again. Photographers?
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Omg! That was damn amazing! Shit, I laughed so hard, I damn near fell off my chair! And I'm STILL giggling! You go, Jayden! Show that bitch who's boss!
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I like Helen.
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...Can I smack Manya? Evil bitch. Still love the story, though!
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I don't like Kelly. I can't put my finger on the why, but I don't. It might be just because she hurt Jayden when they were kids, and it might be something else... I dunno, I kinda feel like she's gonna go off the deep end, or something... xD Anyway, you better let Jayden live! I love this story so far.
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Overall, this story was epically awesome, and very intriguing. I loved it. I loved that it had a happy ending, too. I did not, however, like getting into everybody's POV there at the end. I was only interested in Shaun's and Adam's, and maybe Annie's. Still, awesome story!
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Did Ben get drafted to join the game? He confuses me... I don't really want him to be in the game, least of all on the bad team. I also hope that Shaun doesn't get hurt for helping Daniel/Adam, which I'm assuming he's gonna try to do. Overall, I like this story so far. Lots of intrigue. I can actually feel myself getting closer and closer to the edge of my seat as I read on.
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Thank you. Unfortunately, it is all too easy to take a loved one for granted, even without realizing you are doing so. I'm glad you enjoyed this little poem.
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We are watching a television show, Just enjoying each others company. It is nice to just sit here with her; We don't do it often enough. When a commercial comes up, I turn to look at her, smiling as I realize She's fallen asleep, her face so peaceful. I turn off the TV and whisper, "I love you, Mom." Prompt 144
