SoullessCynner
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You made me cry! *Wipes eyes* That was so sad! I liked it, though. It was sweet and innocent. Good writing style. *Wipes eyes again*
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Thank you, Sammy Bug. I'm glad you glad you liked it. I hope you continue to like it.
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I don't know you, but I'm appalled that people are being so mean as to make your hopes and dreams feel worthless. That is not right. It's not okay. Why people have to be so mean all the time, I'll never know. What some people don't seem to get is that being called names, whether it's in real life or online, is hurtful. More so for some than others, but still. I'm sorry people are being jackasses. *Hug* If you ever need to talk, I'll be happy to listen. Keep your chin up, Cyn
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I definitely plan to keep going. I'm glad you're drawn in.
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Yay! Don't worry; my plan is to submit one chapter either every week, or every other week. I'll try not to keep anybody waiting.
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Thank you! Hopefully, I won't disappoint you.
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When the world falls apart...
SoullessCynner commented on Foopy's story chapter in When the world falls apart...
This poem... made me cry... *Still wiping tears away* I thank you very, very much for sharing this poem with us. It has so much emotion, so much pain. The imagery was good, too. The only downside to this poem is what you must have gone through, what you must have felt, in order to produce this. -
"Yo, Taz." "Mmm..." "Taz, wake your ass up." Taz blinked, yawned. Scratched his nuts and groaned. "Wha' the fuck, man? I was having the best dream," he complained, his voice thick and husky from sleep. "Was he hot?" "Wouldn't be the 'best' dream if he wasn't." "For you, maybe." "What, you want an ugly dude?" Taz asked, knowing full well that his best friend was unswervingly straight. It was a shame, really. Taz would love to show him the joys of gay sex. At a solid si
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Taz Langley is just an ordinary American—until Tepin Blankht shows up at his door. Now everything he's known as truth turns out wrong as his world turns upside down.
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Took him long enough. I liked this story a lot. It was cute and refreshing. And I love, LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE, a happy romantic ending!
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I don't think you're allowed to say the F word here. I know you're not allowed to say it in chat. Post more before you can submit.
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I like your thinking! I even agree with you.
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That is because GA rocks!
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Dusk The sun is sinking below the horizon of dreams, Filling me with the disquiet of promises broken. The shadows are creeping out of the corners And I will be consumed by the darkness. I can feel myself breaking into tiny pieces, Everything spilling from me in a torrential downpour. My control is shattering with the sinking sun, And soon, I'll be left with nothing of myself. Raw and vulnerable; open wounds festering. Splayed out on a bed of half-truths and lies. My will is b
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Inconsequential Ignored and shunned In a room full of people. My feelings are locked inside, My efforts to reach out feeble. Sometimes I feel so inconsequential, Like I don't matter at all. Why can't I just speak up? I wish I could break through this wall. I'm drowning in myself; My emotions are tidal waves Waiting to pull me down. I am my own slave. Does anyone see me? Can anyone hear my pleas? I want to be free of myself. I want to breathe with ease. This fear will not rule
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Thank you.
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it, Roan.
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I guess I won't hitch-hike. Wouldn't want to worry you. Do you guys have meetings like this often? Or is it more of a once a year thing? Because I have no job, so, even if I were to make it to the gathering, I wouldn't be able to do anything. So, I was hoping that this isn't going to be a one-time thing, because I'd really love to meet you guys sometime.
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I Am Beautiful I am not that smart, My self-esteem is too low, But take a look in my heart, And you will see that it glows, Because I am beautiful. I hate to make decisions, And I'd rather follow than lead, But please have no illusions That mean words won't cut me, I am beautiful. People call me fat and ugly, Yet I say nothing to contradict them. And despite what they believe, I have somebody to call my best friend, Because I am beautiful. I believe in Him, And God believes i
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Faceless Person Who is this person I see? I see him in my dreams. I have not seen his face, Because we are always in a dark place. It's me who this faceless person wants; My dreams in which he haunts. This faceless person always seems to be waiting... Waiting for me to be sleeping. He comes towards me, his pace slow. On his right shoulder is a pitch-black crow. His hand slowly reaches for the silvery object in the crow's beak. Neither of us has yet to speak. He grasps the object's h
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Wonderful poem. Sad. But wonderful.
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Chapter 18 – Lucky to Have You
SoullessCynner commented on EmDee's story chapter in Chapter 18 – Lucky to Have You
Oh, you evil, evil, evil devil! That was just mean! But awesome! Can't wait for more! And yes, I actually squealed when I saw it finally posted. Also, is it just me, or was this chapter kinda short? -
This story was breathtaking in it's beauty. You really captured the emotions,and... It was just beautiful.I was actually teary-eyed there at the end. I wish they had a 5 thumbs up emoticon. will just have to do.
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I really liked this. It has a great beginning. However, I didn't like how it slipped to first person for a paragraph toward the end. It confused me at first. But I still loved the chapter.
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Thank you. Maybe I should wear my contacts more often, instead of my glasses, so people can actually see my eyes. I never did understand the point of blush. But then again, I never really understood why some women, like my mom, refuse to leave the house without makeup on. I only ever put on the foundation crap to make my complexion all one color, and that's only when I'm doing something special, like Christmas or Thanksgiving, and job interviews. Any other, it's what you see is what you get... I think I may have been rambling. Oh, well.
