SoullessCynner
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This chapter was beautiful. I loved every word.
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Such a beautiful, sad picture you weave with your words. I know this is my first review on this story, but in my defense, I haven't been stopping to review because I was anxious to get to the next chapter. I am loving this story, and I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Will Matt and Luc let go of Josh and Scott? Will they find the happiness they so sorely need with each other? Or will Scott and Josh realize that they belong with Luc and Matt, respectively? I don't know, but I'm dying to find out. ~*Cyn*~
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I've never been in a maze that's been planted, so I couldn't tell you which one is scarier, but I'm glad you liked the poem. I'm glad the feelings I was trying to invoke came out.
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Chapter #2 - The Best Day Ever (Cont)
SoullessCynner commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #2 - The Best Day Ever (Cont)
Interesting. You had an incest moment there. Great chapter. -
Lets Make Love Cont...II
SoullessCynner commented on Mark92's story chapter in Lets Make Love Cont...II
*Leaves a Review * Haha. But seriously. I liked this story a lot. A lot a lot. I read it twice. -
A Rose upon the Grave
SoullessCynner commented on Celethiel's story chapter in A Rose upon the Grave
All three gave me goosebumps and made me teary-eyed. You have talent. I very much enjoyed these three poems. -
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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Him Again He's drunk again tonight. The house is quiet and dark. He comes into my room, Because he knows I'll be awake. He says he just wants to play a game, But he's not looking at the X-Box. The look he's giving me chills me, And I can't move; my feet are frozen. He is bigger than me, much bigger, And I'm afraid of what I know is coming. He pushes me down onto my bed, And I shrink away from his touch. He leans over me, his face so close to mine. I can smell the alcohol on his breath. I
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.::Tepin::. "Don't you have anything . . . less stuffy?" Tepin looked up, his gaze meeting Taz's honey-whiskey eyes. Heat suffused his body. God, he wanted Taz bad. "Hm...?" he murmured. "Your vest. Don't you having anything less stuffy to change into? Like maybe a tee shirt?" Tepin looked down at the vest he'd pulled out of the closet; it matched the one he had on now, minus the chocolate milk stain. "What's wrong with this?" he asked defensively. "It's stuffy," Taz said
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Too scared to move, Too scared to speak. What is wrong with me? Why am I so weak? Too tired to disagree, Too tired to fight. What is wrong with me? Why does nothing feel right? Too happy to care, Too happy to die. There's nothing wrong with me. No more reasons to lie.
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Babycakes! Welcome to GA! ...Again. xD You are awesome, and i have thoroughly enjoyed talking to you in the black hole that is chat.
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You big meanie. Love the chapter. I love that Ellis is becoming more confident and independent. I don't remember anybody saying that his best friend was dead, though. I might have to go back a few chapters and read again for that. But if his body hasn't been found, I think he's gonna end up being one of the bad guys. Of course, that's just my thought for this moment. It might change in about an hour. ~*Cyn*~
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.::Tepin::. Tepin ran his fingers through hair that was silky-soft, jet black, and just long enough to have some shag to it. He looked deep into eyes that were mesmerizing. He felt vaguely as if he were falling into an abyss made of whiskey and honey. An abyss he wouldn't mind living in. He had the rather inane thought that the intriguing color of Theodore's eyes may very well be his new favorite color. No. It's Taz. He preferred Taz, he reminded himself. Their faces were so close, h
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I have a major surprise planned for this story. I hope you like it.
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That was kind of the idea. You are very welcome. Thank YOU for reviewing.
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I'm glad you think so.
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I thought this was a very cute short story.
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The Abandoned Maze I'm stuck in a maze, And the way out is obscured By darkness and fog. I cannot see much Beyond the vague shapes of paths Aglow from moonlight. Which way should I go? I'm turning this way and that, But no path calls out. The hedges rustle, The paths getting narrower. I need to choose one. In eerie silence, I walk alone in darkness, My mind wandering. Ghostly voices sound, Resonating all round, Filling the twilight. Mental pictures flash Fleetingly through
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A poem written for the "Cracks of Time" themed Anthology, 2012. The narrator is lost in the maze of his mind, until somebody from his future leads him out.
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I liked this poem a lot. It made me shiver the first time I read it. You're good.
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.::Tepin::. Back in his hotel room, Tepin collapsed onto the single bed, his arm over his face. He was angry and exhausted. He'd gotten off the plane only two hours ago. The cab ride to this modest hotel had taken an agonizingly slow half hour. Traffic had been horrendous due to an accident out on the freeway. Another drunk driver had plowed into a minivan with a toddler and newborn. He only knew that much because his phone had internet service. He'd gone online and watched the live news
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Yes, it did shock him. And yes he did! Thank you for the review!
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Yes, I did! Lol. Good! Glad I got you excited!
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Awesome! There is a follow button on the main page of this story, if you're interested.
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Thank you. Chapter 2 should be up next week.
