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SoullessCynner

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  1. Awww. Why, thank you!
  2. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 1

    I started reading this story, and got maybe a quarter of the way down, but I had stop because of the lack of line/paragraph breaks. This is a on a computer, and reading one long paragraph online just hurts my eyes. What I actually read, though, was interesting.
  3. Web of Confusion: There’s nowhere to run… Nowhere to hide… In my head, A web of confusion has been spun. Down one of the silky white vines I slide, And I wonder where I’m being led, Because there’s nowhere to run... And nowhere to hide... Somewhere deep within this web lies all the answers, But until a light shows me the way, there’s nowhere to run... And nowhere to hide... This web of confusion kills me like a cancer... And from it, there’s nowhere to run, And nowhere to hide...
  4. you say that like you aren't an attractive person. Geez. Aw. Thank you, comicfan. Normally, I'm not attractive. Not outwardly, anyway. My cheeks are puffy, and there is a red blotch on each cheek.
  5. Thanks! I'm glad so far, too. So far, not one person has been mean to me.
  6. The Power of Hope: Written by SoullessCynner The Power of Hope can get you through, Even when it seems everyone's against you. It can make any day seem brighter, Because it also makes you a great fighter. The Power of Hope is a wonderful thing to behold, Because it can warm your soul, so it's foretold. Embrace your loss with a smile and a pleasant thought, Because it helps if you remember what you've been taught. The Power of Hope can change your life. It can melt the ice and tak
  7. These are a few poems I wrote a few years ago.
  8. So.... We just post pictures of ourselves? Well, here's one of me on Thanksgiving day. My mom and I were on our way to her sister's, but we had to stop and get her from work. Well, I got bored waiting for her to come out, so I looked in the visor mirror and started posing for the camera. I can't believe it came out that good, considering I took it myself. And considering it's me.
  9. Hi! I've been on chat a lot, but haven't really gone through the forums. I'm doing that now. So hi! I'd like to formally introduce myself. My name is Cyn, and I'm happy to be here. Also, welcome to everybody who signed up after me.
  10. Alright, don't. I live in Ohio. So, which get-together would I be able to do? Assuming I got up the courage to hitch-hike there, anyway.
  11. So... Is Elijah going to eventually get a happy ending? Perhaps with Tom? Or is there not gonna be a happy ending at all?
  12. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 11

    I still don't like that Alex slept with Mandy, whether it was a dream or not, but I'm happy that at least he didn't seem to want to. I'm curious about this Brian guy.
  13. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 2

    I didn't comment on the first chapter, because I was too much in a hurry to get to the second. I told you I was sure I'd like it just fine, and I do. It's cute and romantic. It has angst and love. I will ask you this, though: Is English your first language? I mean no offense, but it doesn't sound like it. There were a lot of grammar problems, BUT. I still loved the story. (Why do they even put the smiley icon and the change text color in these if you can't use them? I had to change the color through edit mode. )
  14. SoullessCynner

    Warm

    Oh my god. I wanted to cry at the end. In fact, I feel a tear has escaped is now traversing down my cheek. This was a great story. I'm sad that Emanuel is dead, though.
  15. Jeez. I devoured all 17 chapters thus far in one sitting. I literally just read the last words. I'm anxious. I really, really, really hope that Tyler forgives him in the end and that they live happily ever after, but then, that's just what I like; HEAs. I can't wait to read more. Is going to tell him on the trip? Is he going to slip up and Tyler finds out? Is Tyler gonna finally make a play for him? I mean, sure, he asked him out, but not very well. Tyler needs to just grab "David" and kiss him, show him what he wants! Eagerly Awaiting More Chapters, Cyn (Ugh. I can't get to the font color to change it. )
  16. I have to admit, I had to pinch myself several times to keep from laughing too hard. Don't want to to wake the whole house up. But this chapter was hilarious. I don't think Tyler will recognize him. Not at first, anyway. He might find his voice oddly familiar at times, but I think that's going to be the extent of it. As for Robert, I happen to believe that if he doesn't already know who Davey is, then he'll figure it out soon. What I want to know, though, is why Tyler lied about his schedule Immensely enjoying this series. Heading to the next chapter now.
  17. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 1

    I have to be honest. It was a great story, but I don't like the main characters being killed off. I prefer romance. xD While it was dark and mysterious---who doesn't love a D&M story?---it wasn't quite my cup of tea. I like love with my dark and mysterious. Having said that, I do not regret reading this story, because, like I said, it was great.
  18. Happy Belated Birthday.
  19. Alright. I will try out the next chapter when you get it posted. After all, I liked the story up until that last line.
  20. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 6

    Well. I was really enjoying this series, but I have to be honest: that last line, that Alex loved and had sex with some woman, was extremely jarring for me. It doesn't fit with how they are with each other, and if I'm being honest, I hate cheaters. I'm sorry to say, I probably won't be reading any more of this story when you get them posted.
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