SoullessCynner
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Please do not fear for me, my friend. I'll be okay in time. I'll never stop missing or loving you, But this grief I feel will eventually lessen. It won't ever go away completely, But I'll be happy again someday. You were my best friend for half my life, So don't fret if I'm sad longer than you'd like. You've been a huge part of my life for so long, I have to learn what my life will be like with you gone. I'm going to cry for you
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I love what I've seen so far. Kohen is adorable and I really feel for him. Captain seems to have an attachment to him, and he's protective. I love Lakshou, too. My only complaint is that you've been spelling his name as "Kohen", but in this chapter, you changed it to "Cohen".
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You never finished this, Foopy? 😟
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I'm with everybody else: More please.
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I'm liking this story so far, although I really hope that Hudson doesn't turn out to be evil in the end, like the other caretakers. Perhaps Chris can keep him good and sane?
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Poor Teddy, indeed! Wake up, Teddy! I'm sure Will wants to squeeze you to pieces just like a teddy bear! Teddy is definitely awesome. And I love Wildman, too. Like Valkyrie, I really want to know Wildman's story. Can't wait for Wednesday! ~Cyn
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Poor Dave. Now I just wanna cuddle him. Shield him from all the big bad meanieheads. Let me at the guy that hurt Dave. Great chapter btw.
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I hope Teddy comes out of this stupor soon, and with no ill effects. I'm really loving this story. ~Cyn
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Prompts Writing Prompts #444 & #445
SoullessCynner commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Nobody I know drinks coffee. It's a very disgusting drink. Almost as bad beer. -
Hey, Cia. I love this story a lot. In fact, this is my second time reading it. In this chapter, I noticed a discrepancy, though. In chapter 4, you say (or rather, Dane's father says,) that Dane turns 18 in February. "....You are in charge of my son's money until he turns 18 next February..." But in this chapter, it's changed to October. "....so that I can make a recommendation to the judge about where you need to be placed until you reach 18, sometime in the fall." Mrs. E looked at her file, "Yes, October, right?" That's all I had to say. Now on to the next wonderful chapter. (I can't believe that when I read this the first time around, I didn't "like" each chapter. )
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I really hope you continue this story someday. It's really great so far. I hope Som and Rabbie can stop the Cailleach.
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Yay! I was right! I was right! I was right! I suspected about Dillon for the last few chapters now, and I was right! I love being right. And I love mpreg. And I love this story.
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It was little jarring when you switched from past tense to present tense. But other than that, this was a good chapter.
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Prompt 393 - The Gifts
SoullessCynner commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 393 - The Gifts
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Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up!
SoullessCynner commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Wait, what? Crosswords? We have crossword puzzles on here? Where? O_o -
Prompt 353 - The Anniversary
SoullessCynner commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 353 - The Anniversary
I'm so sad now. Great response to this prompt. -
Happy birthday, Cia.
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To An Awesome Person!
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The Animal Psychologist
SoullessCynner commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Animal Psychologist
Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. So now if my cats ever pee on anything other than their litter, I'll know it's because they really like it. I really enjoyed this. It was light and funny, and just what I needed. -
I agree with Avid about the planet calling for more stories. This one was awesome. The way you showed us the power in cave going off, and the teens freaking out was very realistic. I hate the dark, so I might have been one the screaming girls. But you really have a way with words, Cia. I could see the bodies at the mouth of the cave as if I were there. And then Barron's (LOVE his name, and Revi's) heroic move to save little Marya. And her bunny. This story was awesome. 5 stars.
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I sure hope that doctor is for real and not just trying to trick Benny. Benny just might need the help. And what the hell is Sheshtun (sorry if I spelled his name wrong) planning? Yuri needs to kick Sheshtun's ass. Will we get to meet Yuri's brother now?
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This is a great chapter, Cia. I don't think a warning is needed. But then, that's just me.
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Epilogue - Turtle Island
SoullessCynner commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Epilogue - Turtle Island
I'm so sad that this story is over. I loved every bit of this story. I wish we could've seen the proposal and the maybe the wedding, but I'm satisfied with the ending. I love love love that the ending was Asher carrying on his sister's dream with Michael and his friends. It was a sweet ending. P.S. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful story with us. -
*Crawls out of hiding for a brief moment* I am so proud of Noah. I wanted to cheer and clap when he stood up to Derek. I can't wait to see what Derek tries next. I really want Noah to find out that Derek tried to give Eli money to go away... and that Eli refused. This is a fun ride you're taking me on, Rob. *Dives back into my hiding place*
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Wrapped up and finished? Are you nuts? I never want this story to end. It's an awesome story, with realistic, lovable characters, and a great plot. I know! This story can be The Story that Doesn't End. This is the story that doesn't end. It goes on and on my friend. Some people started reading it, not knowing what it was, and they'll continue reading it forever just because, this is the story that doesn't end...
