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SoullessCynner

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  1. I'm not very good at writing things like reviews, but I'm going to put extra effort into this one. As much as I love Silver, and appreciate what he lived through, I have to say that I rather liked River more. I can't really explain why, but I do. This story was edgy, sweet, and very exciting. I had trouble tearing myself away even just to pee. It gripped me right from the start, and kept me on the edge of my seat until the very end. I must confess, though, that I peeked at the last chapter before I delved into this story. You see, I prefer reading things that have a happily ever after (or at least a happily for now), because I tend to get emotionally involved with the characters and the story. So when I started reading this, I already knew the ending. However, that did not, in any way, diminish the story, or lessen the impact. I loved this story thoroughly and completely, and I will probably end up reading it again some day. I am rather terrified to read Enigma II, though. If I do, I will most likely peek at the end just like I did here. But I like this story, and I love the characters, that I might end up reading Enigma II even if I find it doesn't end as happily. Oh, and, one more thing. I hereby proclaim you as one of my all-time favorite authors.
  2. Beautiful chapter. Heartrendingly sad, but beautiful. It sounds like Silver went through the same thing Nikki did. I wouldn't be surprised if Silver was in the same ring, or a branch of it. Now, for River... I sense a whole helluva lot of grief and self-blame in him that he hasn't dealt with. I think he punishes himself with bad relationships, and never lets "beautiful" men get close, because they remind him of Nikki in a way. Onward to the next chapter!
  3. *Sniffles and grabs Kleenex* Wow. Your stories seem to all (so far, at least) make me into an emotional wreck. This was absolutely beautiful. Breathtaking, even. I am so glad they got a happy ending. They are such sweet boys.
  4. Ahhh. Sweet, innocent love. This was a very touching story, and despite myself, I kept getting teary-eyed. Marc is definitely Special, but I think "his" Jamie is also Special. It definitely takes a special person to not only become great friends with a Special person, but to also fall in love with them. If you keep spitting out stories as good as this, I'll be forced to proclaim you as one of my all-time favorite writers.
  5. ...I have a bad, bad feeling about this secret. I dunno... it could just be because I've been awake over 24 hours now, but... Something keeps nagging at me. I really, really hope I'm wrong. Great story, btw. I absolutely HAVE to know if this secret is what my overtired brain keeps whispering to me.
  6. I really dislike sad endings. They make me... sad. I really, really, really, wish Daniel had lived. Beautifully haunting, this story will stick with me. Great job.
  7. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 12

    One, I think Chad was a coward for sneaking out in the night like that. Two, I think Tibial is a coward for not telling Mia the truth. Three, Mia is seriously delusional if she thinks she can make Tibial happy. Four... Well, there better be more, or I'll have to come hunt you down. J/k about hunting you down, but seriously. I'm not sure if you're planning on writing more for this or not, but I really, really, really hope you do. I'm personally wishing for a happily ever after for Tibial and Chad.
  8. This story was so sweet! I loved it. I was so hoping that he would get with Darry.
  9. SoullessCynner

    Story

    Omg. I'm, like, literally sobbing. I've teared up before. I've had tear tracks before. But never have I actually sobbed at a story. I hate you for ending it this way. ...Okay, not really. But still. Damn. My hands aren't enough to dry my tears, which, again, has never happened while reading a story. This was beautiful, not to mention my first time reading a story in the form of a blog. I give you And also? I've decided that you are very, very evil.
  10. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 5

    That's the end? I have to be honest with you; I was really, really enjoying this story, but the ending, well, it was seriously lacking, in my opinion. That doesn't sound like an ending to a story. There's no closure or anything.
  11. SoullessCynner

    Prompt #155

    Wow. Just... wow. I loved this. I'd love to know if Timothy called his name, but I don't need to know. Perfect ending to a wonderful story.
  12. SoullessCynner

    Chapter 5

    Awww. Well, it's finally here. I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
  13. .::Taz::. After Dane's surgery, he was moved to the ICU, so the doctors could monitor him. Taz and his parents had taken turns sitting at his bedside for the next forty-eight hours. Dane had slept through most of those two days, only staying awake for a couple hours at a time. During one of those brief interludes, Taz had told him of his decision to marry Tepin. “Dane,” he had said haltingly, “I told Tepin I'd marry him. I'll be leaving as soon as I get my passport.” He chewed his bo
  14. Awww. That was cute! I loved it! You weaved Sir Gareth's story so well in this poem. I love how he chose love.
  15. SoullessCynner

    Almost Home

    Omg. I think I'm gonna cry! I'm guessing that means Bryson died.
  16. I haven't really been here in a few days, so this is the first I'm hearing about this. I'm so incredibly glad to see/hear/whatever that Brian is going to be okay and has not, in fact, left us. Brian, I wish you the best. I you, so you HAVE to get better soon and get back to us. Missing You, Cyn
  17. SoullessCynner

    The Finish Line

    Oh how cruel. We don't even don't even get to know for sure that Espen asked him out, and that Crew said yes. Wonderful short.
  18. So sad... I liked this poem, even though it made me frustrated again from all the bigoted assholes out there.This made me feel, and that's the best kind of writing, be it poetry or stories, there is. Wonderful job.
  19. Hm... Movies: 8 Seconds Harry Potter Billy Madison Big Daddy Liar Liar Coraline The Nightmare Before Christmas T.V. Shows: Criminal Minds Glee Jane By Design How I Met Your Mother Switched at Birth Medium The Secret Life of the American Teenager Covert Affairs
  20. AHHH! It's a monster!!!! *Runs away* LOL. J/k I you!
  21. You're so cute! Lol But seriously, this is an adorable pic.
  22. Happy belated birthday, Myr! I hope you had a great one!
  23. Welcome to GA, Cielo! ...Late, I know, but better late than never, right? Cianna! 'Bout time you posted here! Welcome to GA! *Sits on your head, eating drippy ice cream*
  24. Beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. Great job.
  25. Happy, anxious, depressed. How do I cope with that mix? They rage and swirl within, Each one trying to be the dominant. Anxious, depressed, happy. They fluctuate deep inside. I can feel them shifting, writhing, Breaking me from inside out. Depressed, happy, anxious. I can feel them colliding, Tearing me apart bit by bit, Leaving scars on my shattered soul.
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