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Loved the story and now I can't stop crying. I just want to hug them both and know more about them. I want to read more about them and their future. I know the story is complete, but it has a powerful impact that I will feel for a while,
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Not a typical HEA but it works. Jonah needs the time to figure out exactly what he wants from life and with who. He's been running for so long, he needs to stop and take a breath and look around. I look forward to the epilog and hope it will give us that HEA,
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Uh-oh seems to sum it up nicely. I love seeing Kayden morphing into a jaguar.
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I look forward to the argument when Kayden says he's coming along. I also have a bad feeling who might be coming along as one of the grooms. That could lead to more misunderstanding and it would be a bad time for Damien to be distracted. Look forward eagerly to the next chapter.
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Happy New Year - Part I
avidreadr commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Happy New Year - Part I
I like this story and I like the characters. They feel real, as do their interactions, language and mannerisms. I want to spend more time with them and look forward to the next chapter. Thank you. -
These two need to talk. Kayden doesn't seem to get jealously and Finn seems to be overstepping the boundaries a bit.
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It won't be easy for Nate to change while still living at home. He needs to get away from his father and take a new path. As long as he stays, his father's voice will always be in his ear.
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I hope the jealousy isn't a continuing thing. I think Damien's going to have enough of a problem dealing with the mine.
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Love it and I agree with Kayden. As you say, he is becoming his own man - hybrid? - and I look forward to seeing it.
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I love epilogs and revisiting characters as I always wonder what happens after the HEA. Thank you.
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Prompt 388 - The Minor Part 3
avidreadr commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 388 - The Minor Part 3
Well, looks like Nate and Ray are going to have time now to discuss their relationship and their priorities. Hope Ray is all right. -
Chapter 11b - Epilogue Part 2
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 11b - Epilogue Part 2
Great end for a great story. I'm a sucker for HEA and this was one of the best. I look forward to reading about the rehabilitation of Nathan; he certainly needs it. Thank you for a great story. -
Jonah is really messed up; some therapy might be in order. Despite what everyone else did, Ren need only look in a mirror to see who's really at fault. He and Jacob might love each other but they're not good for each other. Jacob is better off with Sandro. Look forward to more.
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Chapter 11a - Epilogue Part 1
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 11a - Epilogue Part 1
Loved it, like always. It's great to see they love each other just as much, if not more, three years later as they did in the beginning. I am curious about where they're headed. Look forward to the rest of the epilogue. -
This chapter was satisfying in so many ways. Clem stood up to Nate who walked away like the coward he is and the sex was hot. I'm also not sure if this is the end; it would be a good place to end it. but you might have more in mind. Loved it. Thank you.
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Great chapter. I like how Ashlee's confidence is bolstering Clem. I look forward to the drama I think is in the next chapter. I've already imagined several scenarios, all ending with Nate eating dirt.
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Sweet story. The dream might be a bit cliche, but it is for a reason - it works. Thank you.
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Good start and I also think Harrison has Asperger's. My son has a mild case and has a lot of the same issues.
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I admire Ashlee for being and dressing the way he wants with no apology. He and Clem are so good together. The rodeo as me a bit nervous but I look forward to it and eagerly wait the next chapter.
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The Gayest Man in the Whole World
avidreadr commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Gayest Man in the Whole World
A wonderful story with a perfect HEA ending. Thank you. -
I liked the song this is based on and I really like Ashlee. He's so much better than Nate but I'm waiting for Nate to cause problems.
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Fun story. Yes, please show the first date.
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A great holiday story, which I love. Thank you and Merry Christmas.
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Barney's Birthday Lesson - Prompt 379
avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in Barney's Birthday Lesson - Prompt 379
I enjoyed it. Would love to read more vignettes about these two. -
Prompt #248: The Wedding
avidreadr commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #248: The Wedding
I'll miss new Neko stories; they're really addictive. You mentioned a sequel once so I'll keep on the lookout. In the meantime I'll have to be content with my chronic re-reading,
