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lilansui

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    Chapter 13

    Savan's trust issues are way beyond the average scale on the negative side...lol...deep down inside, Cole would have realized all wasn't as it seemed.
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    Chapter 12

    Isn't Baggage fun? in the end it always rears its ugly head, but...romance is so sweet we can't let baggage stop us... I think SarEr was just reaching his limit
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    Chapter 11

    A kiss in time...lol I considered the slug to the face...but then Cole was my romantic what can I say...
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    Chapter 10

    The struggle to remain indifferent to the people around them was really hard to write. Zun and SarEr trying to fit in, and not grow roots, very hard to do..
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    Chapter 8

    Thank you so much for reading through this one too. This one was short, but I think it was just right. Young Jae's and Min's love was the ultimate goal and having Min become the head of a family worked out. It's always good to come back and see some of the things I might have added, but also it's the best to read your thoughts. Thank you so much...
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    Chapter 8

    Thanks Layla, I think that Shin might have worked out if he stayed, but if he had, then Young Jae and Min wouldn't be right...lol. Thank you for your reviews.
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    Chapter 9

    Lol, he is a bit schizo here, isn't he...
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    Chapter 8

    I just saw this, wow, is bad to say I loved that you cried. lol. Thanks so much for your reviews Lisa.
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    Chapter 8

    Across the globe we trot with this one. Cole's grief had a lot to do with him returning to Japan, he build Cole's fashions for his life with Danny, being in Italy might have been too painful. Full steam ahead...
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    Chapter 7

    Young Jae was being a knight, makes him so easy to love right...lol. You're absolutely right about Young Jae putting his faith in Min. Truth might have spared him this moment...
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    Chapter 7

    Danny's death was hard to write, I cried...I think that Yettie's comment truly demonstrated this chapter. Sad chapter.
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    Chapter 6

    Lara is grown up beyond her years.
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    Chapter 6

    Jiro was a jerk, he has his own agenda, and will do anything to get it. It's always so fun to see reader's reaction to Jiro. Makes my day.
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    Chapter 5

    I love the fountain scene in this chapter, it was really a lot of fun to write and of course the kiss. Favorite chapter in this story.
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    Chapter 5

    A game's a foot, lol. SarEr has a hard time figuring out who wants him gone.
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    Chapter 4

    You summed up Min's predicament beautifully. His mom was pushy, in an annoying way, but she was going after what she wanted. I love your thoughts on Min's situation.
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    Chapter 4

    Cole is a romantic.
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    Chapter 3

    Young Jae could be considered stuck in a between a rock and a hard place. A lot to change for him...
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    Chapter 1

    He's shy... wasn't sure it could be real, just saying gal. Thanks so much for the review.
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    Chapter 2

    With Min's life, I doubt it would have mattered, he understood. But then again, they could have tried harder...lol.
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    Chapter 2

    Thanks for liking it, complete status at ch. 2 was a moment of oversight on my part. The story is still going.
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    Chapter 2

    I got you, JoAnn, I got you...lol.
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    Chapter 1

    Great to see your thoughts on this story, Min has a hard time right... just for a few hours with friends.
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    Chapter 3

    Thanks Suvitar, glad to see you back for more. Hope the next chapter makes everything alright.
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    Chapter 3

    Lol, Joann, I would have hidden in a faraway land until I finished the story. I'm glad you love this short story of mine.Last chapter undergoing a reread from a friend and hope to post it soon. Thank you
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