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  1. Chapter 23 Alexi woke up alone in bed the next morning. He turned to his left searching for Joshua only to find a note on the pillow. Rubbing his eyes, he sat up and read the note. “Went for a meeting with the dean, I’ll be back soon, Love you. – J” He smiled, got out of bed and walked to the desk by the window. Opening the top drawer, he reached for a diary he kept there and slipped the note between the pages. A picture fell out and he grabbed it before it hit the floor. He’d forgotten
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    Chapter 22

    Thanks Sacred, that kitchen scene is a favorite of mine too. I'm just about to post the next chapter, but I saw I hadn't replied to your review, sorry. ;( I'm sorry about that. Can't wait to see what you think of Chapter 23, loads of changes.
  3. Great review, Lisa!! I'm going to check this out.
  4. 3 Yoshi walked along the main street in the small village. His head covered with a cotton hat, his clothes those of a merchant. His sword hidden at his waist by a gray overcoat that Sando had gotten along with the merchant clothes. “Wait for me in the teahouse,” Sando urged leading the way to the building set in the middle of town. “You’ll be safe, and no one will bother you until I return.” There were so many shops and people; no one knew who he was. He relished the adventure of walking
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much, Jaro. I'm happy my story touched you, that means so much to me.
  6. Happy Birthday, Conner. Hope it's a lovely day for you.
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    Chapter 3

    Thank You Cannd.
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you so much!! No, your correction is not a pain, I've changed them,tell me if I missed any. Thank you for reading and reviewing, it truly means a lot to me, Lisa.
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    Chapter 2

    Lol, love wild parties too,
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks Lisa, that's funny about Silver from 90210, lol. I've changed that on chapter 1 about the frats = fraternities. You're awesome.
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    Chapter 3

    CHAPTER 5 Knox stood at Silver’s door at exactly seven o’clock. He adjusted the collar of his double-breasted black jacket and stuck his car keys into the pocket. Ringing the doorbell, he stepped back, nervous. He’d waited for Silver’s call all day. When the call hadn’t come, he worried that Silver might stand him up. He waited a minute before he reached for the doorbell again. Before he could press the button, the door swung open. Silver looked handsome in black: black slim blazer, black T-sh
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    Chapter 2

    CHAPTER 3 The girls of Theta Phi mingled with their guests, wide smiles and charming conversation as they tried to raise as much money as they could for their homeless charity. Their guests were making bids on different gifts that Tina had spent the past month finding. Silver focused his lens on a pair of tickets to the final NHL Stanley Cup game. He was pretty sure Jude and the rest of the hockey team were going to make bids on the tickets. “Great prize,” Knox said beside him. Silver jerked u
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    Silver Ice

    Silver Reese falls for an ice hockey player named Knox Thurston.
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    Chapter 1

    CHAPTER 1 Silver Reese sipped hot chocolate, barely tasting the sweet liquid. His eyes were firmly fixed on the God of Ice skating powerfully toward him. Dressed in carnelian red and white, gloved hands gripping a hockey stick, Knox Thurston dodged an opponent expertly determined to reach the goal. Team captain Jude Martin passed the puck to Knox, escaping a trap from the other team. A second later, number eighteen scored. The rink filled with thunderous applause, nearly making him deaf. Silve
  15. Happy Birthday Trebs
  16. Congratulations Cassie!! Can't wait to read more of your stories.
  17. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JO ANN!!! :wizard: :joe: :wizard:
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    Chapter 6

    The foundation is looking kind of iffy there, a lot of bad things happening. Thanks for reviewing Lisa.
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    Chapter 6

    Vincent is so cool under pressure, I just love him..lol.
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    Chapter 22

    My dear John, that's so sweet...I've been writing the next chapter and dreading the separation myself. Your idea sparked a few thoughts for me... we'll see what happens. You're right talking is always the solution, but words disappear when you're afraid of losing that one thing you care the most for. It's like a block, especially when you know the demands your own life forces on you, and you're not sure the person you love will understand those demands. I feel Alexi is having these kind of thoughts and feeling as though the life he lives might pull them apart. And Joshua, who believes he gave up on Shane, doesn't want to lose this opportunity to make up to him. He also knows that what they have together is unique and that he may never find that again. Their struggle to hold on despite their issues makes this story so beautiful to me. You're right about travel, flight delays, luggage lost/misplaced, mean attendants, -funny when you care about the person you're going to see, it makes it all worth it. Thank you so much for this thoughtful review. You're awesome.
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    Chapter 7

    Yeah, Jaxton is right. Vincent is truly unaware of what Shin was working on. He's just trying to protect Haje the best he can. Thanks, Lisa.
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    Chapter 7

    He's all mush inside, .
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    Chapter 7

    Levin's colors will soon show, I thought a vacation was in order after all the trouble. Thanks Daithi.
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    Chapter 7

    Chapter 7 “We should visit your aunt in Florida for a while,” Seol said the next morning when Haje went downstairs for breakfast. “I don’t think we should stay here.” “There’s something I need to do first.” Haje sipped his coffee and leaned on the counter. “You should go though, take a break from all the trouble.” “I’m not leaving you here. Someone has tried to kill you twice since the accident.” Seol shook her head and sat down at the kitchen table. “I can’t take it. Let’s go to Flori
  25. Happy Birthday Cia
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