I hate Joel for what he did in the library !!! Good thing Jared could catch up with Cole before he left the school. I'm glad Jared and Cole went to the farm for some alone time (if you don't Count 4 siblings and many animals )
Joel is a creep I hope Jared stops seeing him and that Joels doesn't tell Cole about it.. somehow I doubt that though.... I really like your story, Sasha
Great start, good thing the story is complete so I don't have to wait for next chapter lol Poor Cole who doesn't like to be called "farmboy" and now Jared's sister called him that
I also like watching vampire movies So is the man leaving the bathroom a vampire ? What made Thomas follow him to the living room ? Vampire mind tricks ? I liked this story, Wayne
I was afraid it would be a horror story at first - I liked this story. I don't like bees so I would leave the house right away and I would welcome the rain Sweet little story
Sad prompt and you posted it on my birthday, glad I didn't read it then Just kidding He got what he deserved, I can understand that he became sad when his partner for 20 years left him but what did he expect ? Sad LBO now
Zombie wanted me to share this with you and I usually do what Zombie says
http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2672911/Welcome-doll-island-Artist-creates-creepy-shrine-little-girl-drowned-dies-canal-body-50-years-later.html