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I’m delighted and worried. Delighted at Desmond and Sam’s growth. Worried that it will be the downfall of them both.
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Does Rayhe know any of this? What could keep him gone so long for so many days?
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Fingers, toes and eyes crossed for you! Say, is Ian ever gonna get life-size pics of Lex’s back for the shop and the marketing campaign Cassie will create? (She’ll need a job soon.) I’m with Lex. I firmly believe if you aren’t satisfied with your job, do the work to get another one. Life is too short to spend so many hours in a place you hate.
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Gabriel and Desmond! Please let them live through the whole damn story.
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Thank you for updating this story so frequently, Katya!
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He raped Sam (or hurt him or jerked off on him) and who knows what else. Besides, Desmond has to kill him because he’ll never give up. He should’ve called Julian or gone home.
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Sam and his loud-ass talking on the phone put them in this mess. Fuuuuuuuuck. Wild thought: What if this was Julian’s way of letting Desmond escape? That story about why the video feed had to be dropped sounds sketch af. Where’s Desmond’s famous intuition now? What the he is he doing, stepping outside?!
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Now that Wren had the all-important talk with his mom, I hope Charles backs off. Caleb and Wren are adults. It’s time they muddled through this on their own. I do wish they had someone to talk to other than Charles. Another good friend. But, small town, hard work, no time (or candidates, probably) for new confidantes. I liked the way you handled the scene with Wren and Rachel. As for why Adam left, I’m sure Rachel has her theories.
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Please don’t kill them.
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I think we know why Sam hates Julian “I Like Pain” Salamander. I think it’s cool that he’s involved, but I understand Desmond’s reluctance. He can control himself, but not what others do.
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I’m happy we get to see what happened! Desmond put a lot of faith in that back door. Gabriel can unlock it, but who’s to say Julian won’t barricade the door when he comes to put in cameras? Also, methinks he knows Desmond slept with Vivienne. It would make him even more determined to kill the guy. One more thing: Gabriel might be surprised by Desmond's ability to forgive, but he DID proclaim his love. That helps. LOL
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Good luck! The right job will come along.
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I wonder if the wolf wants to claim Wolfgang as its mate and that’s one of the reasons it’s restless. Wolfgang should stay away during the new moon. Meanwhile, poor Franklin is probably doomed. Crushing on the local “bad boy” taken to another level. Intrigued at the possibility of Mother Nature possessing and murdering people. It’s certainly different.
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Ohthankjeebus. What great actors these boys are. I had the same thought about the key, LOL Edited later to add: Holy shit I somehow skipped the previous chapter. My earlier comment still stands — even more now, in fact.
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Desmond’s intuition is at work. He knows something’s up. We can only hope Gabriel spills the truth before the third day.
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Oh! I meant to mention that I love Charles and Tracy’s relationship. I appreciate how he always thanks her and compliments her work, plus has no qualms about sending her over with a shotgun to protect Wren’s farm. I also appreciate how Charles makes an effort to spend time on his own with Oliver, not only to give his wife a break, but because he’s an involved dad. I have this image in my head of a guy in battered baseball cap with a Baby Bjorn strapped to his chest. Buying fertilizer and tractor parts. LOLLLLLL
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They need to get a dog that’ll bark whenever someone comes around. Wait — maybe not. The uncles might poison it, the fuckers. I’m confused about when the rototiller was sabotaged and the toolbox stolen. Was it at the same time tractor was tampered with?
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It’s great to see a new chapter of this story! I have questions. 1. Why does Alice have the confessions of two bad guys on her tablet? Wasn’t her mom recording them on pack A/V? Why is she involved? (Side note: Mom is an alpha. She coulda told her daughter to stay the eff home.) 2. If everyone knew SFB was hiding information, why didn’t they just torture him? Every day spent yelling at each other meant more lives lost. And will we find out who got rid of all the reports and evidence? 3. The head of the council is Gene’s DAD?!
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I agree on the flashbacks. And I don’t think Jason introduced him to the enjoyment of a same-sex partner; he just opened Desmond’s mind to the possibly of enjoyable sex.
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Tom’s an interesting one. We don’t know what he’s thinking. I’m glad Charlie clarified they’d be going on a date, because I wasn’t quite sure he got it, either.
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Both are versatile. We already knew Wren was before he came back. And Caleb’s gonna want to try everything eventually. I’m wondering how it’ll affect business when it comes out about them. Because it will, sooner than they're ready for. Someone commented earlier that Caleb is using Wren, and I think that’s true to an extent. Wren’s gonna get hurt, poor guy. Caleb has a lot of growing to do — Mr. I’m Not Going to Wash Your Plate.
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I was thinking the same things. Hope he has an alibi for when his dad was killed.
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If Desmond didn’t want Gabriel to see what he was going to do, why did he call him in there? Excited to find out. An aside: I’m surprised more people aren’t commenting on this captivating story. Maybe it’s the tags?
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When the pants came off I immediately scrolled forward, looking for when Caleb woke up from his hot dream. But that shit really happened! No fair, Caleb! Hands to yourself goes both ways.
