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lol things were quite for too long eh?. so is the father money hungry or just plain stupid or most likely bit of both. Interesting what leg the father thinks he has to stand on trying to get custody of Jesse after all this time.. Also interesting to see it happen after the interview on TV with Dylan and the Rescue Ranch. I'm sure it won't take long for the boys to pick up on the coincidence. Nasty that you are going to leave us hanging waiting to see what happens and waiting to see about Devon's gift from T.J. I understand Devon stand on the teacher thing but letting it continue is not only bad for Devon but also for the rest of the students because if she does this to Devon what is to top her from doing it to anyone else. I can see once r twice but this has been going on way to long for it to be anything else but bigotry.

The wonders of Chocolate cake. Wow I don't data a lot of sweets but to go years of not decades without having a peice of cake because your part er doesn't allow it. Yeah that is seriously twisted. Noah needs to wake up and smell the roses and have his cake and eat it to. I think once Noah realizes he can lighten up he will be a little firecracker. Great story can't wait for more.

Well Birch is coming around but Croll has really bad timing lol. Hopefully it just new acquaintance jitters between Birch and Croll and not anything more. Birch doesn't really need to deal with antagonism from Croll thinking Birch isn't good enough for Sayers. Hopefully after this little interruption they can get back to their little interlude. I hope Birch was right though that Sayers can draw the energy off of Birch to enhance his...will be interesting.

What a beautiful chapter. A most excellent say to welcome being 18. I like Shaun he seems like a really great guy seems to keep Jase a little subdued which us a good thing. This is just exactly what Rhyder needed after the wishy washy phonecall from his family. Can't wait to see what happens next.

like this only problem you stopped before the good stuff. It would be really cool for you to continue on with the payback...then to see the result from the Dick. Granted I'm pretty sure it wouldnt have been payback..hot. sauna steamworthy but not payback..also pretty sure the result or reaction from the Dick would have put Vesuvius to shame...i would have loved to have seen that...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY LESHWAR

Switch from the beginning of the story eh? this time instead of Michael being wasted it was Asher. It' bringing home how much has changed since Asher got shot. even the raunchy joke at the entrance of the club after a heated moment Michael just blew off and made a joke about it later. Tonight showed as well a few issues that Asher still has about the shooting, normally he isn't the drunk at the end of the night he is the one taking care of the drunk. Bit or a role reversal for their night out, hopefully the two of them can find a mid point between the two.. Whoo hoo Michael called Asher his boyfriend, things are looking up.

Ok I wouldn't want to go home to that either. I did think it was funny that they told him that he couldn't live in his sister's shadow., isn't that what they had been making him do whenever he was home. I also noticed that most of the phonecall was for there expectations the hose his sister sold for a months rent and what was it beer lol, the new bedroom he had no choice in and the haranguing about stuff they want him to do . They never listened when he said his riding had improved other than to tell him not to boast,,,(when did stating a fact become boasting) they didn't care that he had a boyfriend or friends at all. It sounds like if he goes back nothing will have changed other than he will be older and deeper in their shadow. Hopefully it finally kicks in that he is an adult and doesn't have to go back. For such a happy occasion of an eighteenth birthday it had too many sad parts to it hopefully the next chapter is happier.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOTALLYY

If I was pragmatic I would say the funeral was just a meteor shower but though they could predict the event how how they predict that there would be exact 68 points of light. Intriguing idea. Hamish has a lot to think about in this chapter and I think at the end Matthew through him for a loop.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CELETHIEL

Oh this is going to be Funny I already like the little brother. Mouth shifts into gear before the brain does should have some really hilarious incidences in the story. little differnt than your norm but looking forward to reading the ... rest of the story...yeah I went there lol

Oh this is going to be Funny I already like the little brother. Mouth shifts into gear before the brain does should have some really hilarious incidences in the story. little different than your norm but looking forward to reading the ... rest of the story...yeah I went there lol

Oh this is going to be Funny I already like the little brother. Mouth shifts into gear before the brain does should have some really hilarious incidences in the story. little different than your norm but looking forward to reading the ... rest of the story...yeah I went there lol

You sure like to mix things up pup. Not the first incest story I've read probably won't be the last either but you did it very well. It was there but not in your face all that came through was the love the two brothers had for each other. I feel bad for the mother she ends up losing both her sons and having to deal with the two brothers...ugh disgusting. A lot of people would think i am being a bit jaded agreeing with the brothers love but think the uncle is disgusting. But the way I look at it is the two boys love each other, the older protects the younger and makes sure he is always safe no matter what and you can't help but see the strong love they have for each other. They just happen to be brothers. Then you have the uncle who gropes and wants to make a trophy of the younger brother there isn't any love what so ever in that just sexual lust and depravity, he's a predator of the worst kind. Got to admit Brayden is right there family would fit on that reality show quite well especially as he describes it. It all comes down to the type of love you have and the strength of it not who you love at least that's my take on this story. Really great story Sasha

this chapter is really sad. That they can't go to authorities to report a sexual attack because he is involved with someone. Does that mean the uncle is free and clear to do whatever because no one will believe the nephew. It shouldn't matter if let alone who he is involved with the attack took lace that should be what matters.

Loved the story Cia. Particularily like the unique outlook on Hope and the Pandora's box. I so could see a best friend doing exactly like Perry did it was so funny to see her work her magic on him. And of course he reacted pretty much like she figured he would, not once but twice he never stood a chance did he?

CONGRATULATIONS STELLAR

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DADDYDAVEK

Awesome pup. I love that song and your story fits it to a "t" . I especially like the part where Ty's dad is teaching him how to shoot. The love shines brilliantly through the story but shines especially bright when both father and son realize one part of grandpa's teachings won't quite work with Ty. Beautiful Sasha.

great chapter, It's sick the mentality that Diego's father had. He thought it perfectly acceptable to kidnap and possibly kill two boys so that his son could get an inheritance of a ranch that didn't even belong to him. Personally if it wouldn't cause s much pain I would rather have the trial go through in the hopes of a much harsher punishment than a plead out but in the long run it would only hurt Mattie's and his family. I hope that Diego will be able to leave Spain and go home with the guys but not sure how legal it would be unless there is an adoption or maybe foster parents lol. Diego has lost so much I truly hope that he can go home with the boys he needs them to heal and get strong again, he might not have got physically hurt but he was badly hurt much the same and those hurts take longer to heal sometimes/

mmmmmmm hot and sexy. now there is finally something to be said for short chapters. this is just the foreplay chapter can't wait for the main event. Absolutely awesome Nephy!!!

Interesting path this story has taken. I like the way that there are two paths to this story and they are both leading to a meeting will be interesting to see what hapens when they merge.

four boys slowly healing, and staying alive. Switching back to that road leads them onto a new path will it be better for them or will it cause yet another death. Interesting to see what happens. great story.

it's sad that Casey died but once you look past the pain he made a fitting sacrifice his death unleashed the powers in the boys and enabled them to have the strength to defeat their enemies and live hopefully to make it home.