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  1. Daithi

    Chapter 6

    Yes I know you are the Queen of Cliff Hangers and technically that wasn't rally a cliff hanger but maaaaaaaannnnn did you have to stop there??????? . Beautiful chapter and very thought provoking. Instinctively Birch knew what had to be done but i don't think he even realized what could be done. Poor Sayer bet he is still in shock over what he initiated when he completed his binding or mating. Will truly be interesting to see how these two adapt and deal with all the issues that I'm sure are going to pop up for them. It will be interesting to see just how possessive Sayer is going to be . This is going to be fun and I can't wait til the next chapter.
  2. I love when Ask An Author comes around. Gives me an insight into the author. Most authors always leave a little bit of themselves in theirs stories but i love when they answer the questions. It gives us a sneak peek into them over and above the stories they write. Why even how they do what they do, sometimes though one question just isn't enough hehe.
  3. Pup your still mean even if it worked out all right lol. He has his way to stay doing what he loves best and what he is good at. He isn't the same shy little boy that just did what he was told cause he didn't have anything else. H e is a grown man that knows exactly what he wants adn can now reach out and grab it. Do I think he should go back yeah, simply because they are his family f they hadn't sent him out to the US no matter the original reasoning he wouldn't never have found what he did. He needs to go say his good bye collect his things then come home. If he was the same person as when he got there going back would have been a death knell for him e would stay there simply because he didn't know how to stand on his own two feet. He now has a life, a family and a purpose on Iron Hill Farm, he has the one thing he has never had love and acceptance and he will never give that up. His dad is thinking of him he has seen how much his son has grown and become his own man, his um and his sister still think of ownly themselve and how it effects them, his dad will stand up for him and he will be back. Awesome chapter pup !!
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    Big Time Cowboy

    Oh you have got to be kidding , you can't intentionally leave us with a cliff hanger like that. He wins then you leave us with an ending like that. Mean pup just way to mean.
  5. Comicfan outdid himself when he wrote Accidents Happen. The story has so many layers to it Just like Charlie himself. It is my all time favourite on this site it was one of the first stories i read when I came to this site and I have read it over and over again since the first time. Charlie is like this great artichoke ( yeah I know not a great metaphor but apt) that you just peel off the layers and get to the treasure at the heart.The first Chapter you see the first layer of Charlie sorta head in the clouds, oblivious of everything around him. Then comes Mr. Reed into the story and then it takes off but not in the way you expect it to. At this point you would figure it would be meet new guy , become boyfriends and whoo hoo end of story, but nope Comicfan likes to twist things a bit. I agree Scott was the catalyst for Charlie but the story unfolds so beautifully that I laughed and cried all the way through it. This story is funny, heartwarming and made you think. It wasn't your typical coming out finding yourself gay it was so much more than that. To me the story was how one man discovers himself and how his family and his partner help him discover that he was the heart of this big family. Beautifully written and I wish it never ended i would love to have continued to watch charlie and Scott grow as a couple and his continued string of "accidents". Maybe a peak back every once in a while hint hint. Most definitely a must read for everyone!!
  6. nice ending if poor Rhyder wasn't anxious about the competition now he has to meet the parents on top haha haha. I like Rhyder's maturity he showed and his friendship with Cay and Sam, in that he had no problem peeking in on Jas but shied away from seeing Cay and Sam naked. Also loved the way he woke all the guys up it was perfect. I can just imagine the mini freak if he had ro watch Bryce ride bth the broncs and the bulls , don't think it would go over well. Those two are really getting close I really hope something comes up so that he can stay its going to really hurt almost inconsolable if he does leave to go back to England. Great chapter pup can't wait for the next which hopefully will have the competition part as well as meet the parents .
  7. Daithi

    Chapter 9

    lol things were quite for too long eh?. so is the father money hungry or just plain stupid or most likely bit of both. Interesting what leg the father thinks he has to stand on trying to get custody of Jesse after all this time.. Also interesting to see it happen after the interview on TV with Dylan and the Rescue Ranch. I'm sure it won't take long for the boys to pick up on the coincidence. Nasty that you are going to leave us hanging waiting to see what happens and waiting to see about Devon's gift from T.J. I understand Devon stand on the teacher thing but letting it continue is not only bad for Devon but also for the rest of the students because if she does this to Devon what is to top her from doing it to anyone else. I can see once r twice but this has been going on way to long for it to be anything else but bigotry.
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    Chapter 4

    The wonders of Chocolate cake. Wow I don't data a lot of sweets but to go years of not decades without having a peice of cake because your part er doesn't allow it. Yeah that is seriously twisted. Noah needs to wake up and smell the roses and have his cake and eat it to. I think once Noah realizes he can lighten up he will be a little firecracker. Great story can't wait for more.
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    Chapter 5

    Well Birch is coming around but Croll has really bad timing lol. Hopefully it just new acquaintance jitters between Birch and Croll and not anything more. Birch doesn't really need to deal with antagonism from Croll thinking Birch isn't good enough for Sayers. Hopefully after this little interruption they can get back to their little interlude. I hope Birch was right though that Sayers can draw the energy off of Birch to enhance his...will be interesting.
  10. What a beautiful chapter. A most excellent say to welcome being 18. I like Shaun he seems like a really great guy seems to keep Jase a little subdued which us a good thing. This is just exactly what Rhyder needed after the wishy washy phonecall from his family. Can't wait to see what happens next.
  11. Daithi

    Chapter 1

    like this only problem you stopped before the good stuff. It would be really cool for you to continue on with the payback...then to see the result from the Dick. Granted I'm pretty sure it wouldnt have been payback..hot. sauna steamworthy but not payback..also pretty sure the result or reaction from the Dick would have put Vesuvius to shame...i would have loved to have seen that...
  12. HAPPY BIRTHDAY LESHWAR
  13. Daithi

    Stark-Ass Naked!

    Switch from the beginning of the story eh? this time instead of Michael being wasted it was Asher. It' bringing home how much has changed since Asher got shot. even the raunchy joke at the entrance of the club after a heated moment Michael just blew off and made a joke about it later. Tonight showed as well a few issues that Asher still has about the shooting, normally he isn't the drunk at the end of the night he is the one taking care of the drunk. Bit or a role reversal for their night out, hopefully the two of them can find a mid point between the two.. Whoo hoo Michael called Asher his boyfriend, things are looking up.
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    Reality Check

    Ok I wouldn't want to go home to that either. I did think it was funny that they told him that he couldn't live in his sister's shadow., isn't that what they had been making him do whenever he was home. I also noticed that most of the phonecall was for there expectations the hose his sister sold for a months rent and what was it beer lol, the new bedroom he had no choice in and the haranguing about stuff they want him to do . They never listened when he said his riding had improved other than to tell him not to boast,,,(when did stating a fact become boasting) they didn't care that he had a boyfriend or friends at all. It sounds like if he goes back nothing will have changed other than he will be older and deeper in their shadow. Hopefully it finally kicks in that he is an adult and doesn't have to go back. For such a happy occasion of an eighteenth birthday it had too many sad parts to it hopefully the next chapter is happier.
  15. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOTALLYY
  16. If I was pragmatic I would say the funeral was just a meteor shower but though they could predict the event how how they predict that there would be exact 68 points of light. Intriguing idea. Hamish has a lot to think about in this chapter and I think at the end Matthew through him for a loop.
  17. HAPPY BIRTHDAY CELETHIEL
  18. Oh this is going to be Funny I already like the little brother. Mouth shifts into gear before the brain does should have some really hilarious incidences in the story. little differnt than your norm but looking forward to reading the ... rest of the story...yeah I went there lol
  19. Oh this is going to be Funny I already like the little brother. Mouth shifts into gear before the brain does should have some really hilarious incidences in the story. little different than your norm but looking forward to reading the ... rest of the story...yeah I went there lol
  20. Oh this is going to be Funny I already like the little brother. Mouth shifts into gear before the brain does should have some really hilarious incidences in the story. little different than your norm but looking forward to reading the ... rest of the story...yeah I went there lol
  21. Daithi

    Part Two

    You sure like to mix things up pup. Not the first incest story I've read probably won't be the last either but you did it very well. It was there but not in your face all that came through was the love the two brothers had for each other. I feel bad for the mother she ends up losing both her sons and having to deal with the two brothers...ugh disgusting. A lot of people would think i am being a bit jaded agreeing with the brothers love but think the uncle is disgusting. But the way I look at it is the two boys love each other, the older protects the younger and makes sure he is always safe no matter what and you can't help but see the strong love they have for each other. They just happen to be brothers. Then you have the uncle who gropes and wants to make a trophy of the younger brother there isn't any love what so ever in that just sexual lust and depravity, he's a predator of the worst kind. Got to admit Brayden is right there family would fit on that reality show quite well especially as he describes it. It all comes down to the type of love you have and the strength of it not who you love at least that's my take on this story. Really great story Sasha
  22. Daithi

    Part One

    this chapter is really sad. That they can't go to authorities to report a sexual attack because he is involved with someone. Does that mean the uncle is free and clear to do whatever because no one will believe the nephew. It shouldn't matter if let alone who he is involved with the attack took lace that should be what matters.
  23. Daithi

    Dual Edged Hope

    Loved the story Cia. Particularily like the unique outlook on Hope and the Pandora's box. I so could see a best friend doing exactly like Perry did it was so funny to see her work her magic on him. And of course he reacted pretty much like she figured he would, not once but twice he never stood a chance did he?
  24. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DADDYDAVEK
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