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more of the story comes out. He had a rough life hopefully eventually he can be happy again. I think him telling Alex was more than superficial clinging but it might take a while before he realizes it himself . Lets hope that Alex has strong willpower and a lot of patience
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I like the ice cube bath from Dan . I hope eventually Jae realizes that he can trust Dan emotionally as well as to his work and schooling. It's been two years must be just about killing Dan, hopefully Jae starts to clue in. At least things are slowly looking up and i hope when N-Sang goes down it takes Rand and crashes with all the smoke and fire that they caused the guys as well.
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Feel bad for Marion but I think at this point she knew her family was dead, now hopefully Jeff follows through and the Bishop loses out. And the nano link thing is freaky to me sounds as confusing as hell but might save time and maybe add some privacy. Will have to wait and see.
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Frogs huh that should be a Site to see. It seems like for each step one side makes the other side goes two ahead lol.
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I can see Jackie's point she just got her brother back she doesnt really want to lose him again. So why did she pick tonight of all nights to worry about it. She sees him alot is this really the night to bring it all up. At least with Mark's interrogation worry it was sorta expected but this not so much. It will be iteresting to see what happens the rest of the dinner and what Trey is going thru in the other room.
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Chapter 13: Arthur's Story--Ezra's Family
Daithi commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 13: Arthur's Story--Ezra's Family
All three groups of boys seem to be going in different directions. I wonder if Arthur will ever connect back up with Robbie? -
Chapter 12: Haley’s Story—The Lodge at Alborg
Daithi commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 12: Haley’s Story—The Lodge at Alborg
It's confusing they swore an oath not to tell what they seen which I understand but after teaching them all winter if the boys want to leave they can. Seems a bit weird that. -
Chapter 11: Robbie's Story--Quest
Daithi commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 11: Robbie's Story--Quest
They are bound to make the most of the sacrifice that Casey made. They are a bit more equipped than the other four boys hopefully they will fair batter. -
Chapter 10: Haley's Story--The Rising Road to Alborg
Daithi commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 10: Haley's Story--The Rising Road to Alborg
Maybe things are looking up for the boys, though I wonder what he meant when he knew the four of then we're coming. -
Mmm well after reading Moving On that is definitely not what I expected. I am like the rest of your readers in shock, Scott is gone, Noah by the sounds of it never finished school, and now there is a new man on the horizon. I find it hard to believe that Scott is the one to skip out but I will just hold out and wait to see what happens next. I'm sure there is a perfectly good reason for what happens....at least there better be.
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The little guy is cute, but my dislike of Brian is growing. Hmmm there is more in his past than he mentioned to Alex. This is not going to sit well with Alex. Great chapter.
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Epilogue - Get Your Cowboy On, All Year Round
Daithi commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Epilogue - Get Your Cowboy On, All Year Round
I loved this story Sasha sorry to see it end. I remember that first chapter seeing a dejected Rhyder sitting on the steps talking to Moreta and trying to put his sisters old boots on, now to see him grown , confident and a totally different person. I'm sorry to see things didn't work out with Bryce but I'm sorta not surprised either but at least they are still good friends and didn't work it into the ground trying to save a love relationship. Beau sounds like a much better match for him loves horses but really isn't a rodeo player That reporter is a pain in the ass seeming to make the fact that Rhyder is gay as being more important than what Rhyder can do in the rodeo's but to each their own there is always a bad apple in eat bushel lol. I'm also glad to see that his parents are coming out to see him that will mean a lot to him I think. You did most excellent with this story pup, I wish it didn't end but it was time maybe in a few months you could always let us in for a peek to see how he is during after all he has another foal to raise like Shura so we need to see how it is doing too. And Yes!! a hot-rod red colour for the truck was there ever any other choice lmao. -
Interesting concept of being free but shackled. With what they learned today I wonder how close they were when they thought of the idea of something going wrong in the human world that is adversely affecting the fae world. If i figured it out right that little fae that they saved was in effect a fae version of solar panels and somehow or other it backfired and turned him into a darkling. Now the question is was it intentional by an unseen hand or was it in fact a boomerang effect from something that happened unintentionally in the human world. Great chapter Cia can't wait til next week for more
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Don't think I like Brian not sure I would trust him anyway. Alpha john I'm a little surprised at but it will be interesting to see what happens next.
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He should have known not to go, he betrayed them once why should it be any better the second time. Though I do love the fact that he called out to Jae then blamed Jae for coming as if it was his fault. Dan is going to have an uphill battle with jae. He had no trust in anyone it will be even worse now.
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Great review joann. One of my favorites stories. I love the touch of comedy and lightheartedness that this story has. But more mostly the fact that the four main characters aren't perfect but the two couples are perfect for each other. Each of then start off prissy, sometimes antagonistic but end up warm loving not only to each other but to others as well. Mostly definitely a must read.
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awesome chapter, those tunnels and rift sounds like fun to explore. This is the first time though that I think that all the new stuff actually overwhelmed Sonic, granted it didn't last long. I have a feeling it won't take long before Sonic has them back exploring more again.
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Loved the title of this chapter. So unlike Asher to not remember but cute as anything that ash was forgetful and Michel was the one who stayed sober. Not sure what to make of Ziggy bit of a prick lol. Great chapter can't wait to see what Micheal has up his sleeve for ashers birthday. Sorry to hear you have another surgery upcoming hope all goes well.
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I understand why Jae is hesitant, Dan didn't really say anything other than his lawyer will take over the suit and accused Jae of running. He never really said mu h of anything after that other than if he didn't hear back from them he would consider that a yes to working with him. Interesting chapter I'm not sure if Jae has a more jaded opinion of this Dan guy because of the shaggy appearance he presented for this meeting or the fact that he started out against them right from the start by not meeting with theirs lawyers first. Hmmm Jar doesnt trust anyone but he does want to help Andre and Junghee to be able to sing again.. can't wait for the next chapter.
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I don't like Brian, something us off about him. He doesn't act like a future Alpha specially since John seems like an excellent example of an Alpha. Are you sure the ages of the true brothers haven't been mixed up cause Brian reminds me of someone that would show hus belly immediately if it would mean getting his way faster he just seems wrong for the future of that pack. And he us jealousy of his brother which is weird since he is the one to inherit nit Alex. Will be interesting to see what will happen.
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I loved this story I don't want to see it end but all good things must end....i guess. To think how far the story has come from a bump on the road to godly status of three. Amazing how much love, all kinds of love can change your life. From a solitary person with only a brother to love to a trio of angels becoming gods.. Beautiful story and hopefully not the true end I will keep my eyes open for more in the future.
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Chapter 51 Three in a Bed II
Daithi commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 51 Three in a Bed II
Mmmm study gods what a riveting chapter. I loved the part where in the aftermath they are laying there and touching whatever skin they can reach no matter who's it was. That sums everything up the three are bonded sorta of like a three ply rope, three separate skeins twisted or braided together to form a super strong rope. Can be separated into three and still be strong but together would be unbreakable.. Like I said study gods... Even if one wants spam and chips..didn't say they would be sensible all the time sometimes lapse of judgements do occur lol. -
Wow awesome chapter. I thought like the guys did revenge or vengeance suing the pants off of TJ's father the tv station the reporter but the guys were right what good would that do but drag it all out. Buying the station canning their assessment and then publicly staging why they did that was perfect. I hope nothing happens to Jesse and Dylan from this interview but again they were right they needed to do this and by the sounds of it it worked out well. But I don't like the last paragraph but the boys will be expecting trouble so hopefully it backfires on the abuser. Also with that comment Jesse made about never knowing his father ever might just help out CJ and Danny with the fight with Jesse's so called birth father. We can only hope. Great chapter
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Now I understand why he would want to go back to a quiet life where everyone knows everything except who he is . But his mom is right he wouldnt be happy there for long and definitely not with a wife and kids. But can he go back to what he left and fight for everything while his ex-lover and friend tears everything apart. Good chapter looking forward to see what he does next. I'm glad he has his mom on his side.
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After that confrontation the question on my mind isn't why Alex reacted like he did since he is the alpha's son he would most likely get some of that power and he seems the same age as his brother so maybe twins but his brother was born first so the line continues through him maybe. But my question would have been what did he mean when he said that Rick wouldn't see him again, as wary as Adrian is and he doesn't trust anyone first thing that would have popped into my head was would I be thrown away and out of the pack so that Rick would never see me again. But nothing even close came into his mind all he could focus on was why did Adrian react like he did. Bit of a mystery am looking forward to see what happens next
