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Awesome pup. I love that song and your story fits it to a "t" . I especially like the part where Ty's dad is teaching him how to shoot. The love shines brilliantly through the story but shines especially bright when both father and son realize one part of grandpa's teachings won't quite work with Ty. Beautiful Sasha.

great chapter, It's sick the mentality that Diego's father had. He thought it perfectly acceptable to kidnap and possibly kill two boys so that his son could get an inheritance of a ranch that didn't even belong to him. Personally if it wouldn't cause s much pain I would rather have the trial go through in the hopes of a much harsher punishment than a plead out but in the long run it would only hurt Mattie's and his family. I hope that Diego will be able to leave Spain and go home with the guys but not sure how legal it would be unless there is an adoption or maybe foster parents lol. Diego has lost so much I truly hope that he can go home with the boys he needs them to heal and get strong again, he might not have got physically hurt but he was badly hurt much the same and those hurts take longer to heal sometimes/

night leads into morning does it not so I guess both same Q

mmmmmmm hot and sexy. now there is finally something to be said for short chapters. this is just the foreplay chapter can't wait for the main event. Absolutely awesome Nephy!!!

Interesting path this story has taken. I like the way that there are two paths to this story and they are both leading to a meeting will be interesting to see what hapens when they merge.

four boys slowly healing, and staying alive. Switching back to that road leads them onto a new path will it be better for them or will it cause yet another death. Interesting to see what happens. great story.

it's sad that Casey died but once you look past the pain he made a fitting sacrifice his death unleashed the powers in the boys and enabled them to have the strength to defeat their enemies and live hopefully to make it home.

Something happened on that training mission, I'm guessing somebody died either a team member or someone they were supposed to rescue. Hopefully after Trey "connects" he will be able to tell Mark what happened. It tells a lot about how Trey feels that he went to Mark to reconnect. Good chapter will be interesting to see what happens next.

Vincent is right in a way Haje is so busy trying to find out what Shin is dead that he hasn't dealt with his actual death. Though things are looking up if he is actually seeing the man rather than just the job when he looks at Vincent. I'm not sure whether I like or even trust that detective but I also don't want to see him hurt either. Gah what a kettle of fish, but I really hope Vincent can break through and reach Haje he on the right path just needs to work faster lol. Great chapter.

Creating more ties to bind him to Iron Hill. I wonder who was more surprised with the ease of which Rhyder bonded with Samson? Great chapter its hard to believe it's only been three weeks since Rhyder first came to Iron Hill. I don't want him to go home there is nothing there for him and he will end up reverting to the shadow he was but worse since his heart will still be here in Iron Hill. Sam and Caleb better be working overtime to keep him here. I'm sure the States have decent universities as well as Britain lol.

awesome timing. Interesting last line but my question is it said by Eli or the guy that he was set up for. Somehow tough and built guy with the gun on his hip might have made that comment but the tough and built guy that was to shy that he ended up mumbling he didn't have a library card doesn't strike me as the type to walk up and say to a stranger that I hear you need to be fucked. The first guy came in for internet service not to get laid so yeah I'm thinking we are talking two different guys hehe. great chapter if nothig else got Noah nicely stirred up.

So much pain because of hate and misunderstandings. Three family's tore apart tore apart because of hate. One set of parents tear everything apart with hat and lies but a mother's love saves them all. They a mother knows all and sees all this story proves that. Steve's mom knew something was off she wouldn't accept the easy answer of an accident so she tries to put things together and finds out the real story, because of the love she had for her cost son she saves four more. Two fathers, one lies in hate the others gives up in grief families torn asunder all over again. It is totally wrong to say that this sad heartbreaking story is beautiful but it is ...how could a mother's love for her son be anything but beautiful. Thank you for this inspiring story

Out of the mouths of babes. They say that a child is innocent until they grow up then their innocence goes the way of the belief in Santa Clause and the Easter Bunny. This prayer was was so sad yet so very beautiful. A little girl talking to God to understand something his world has no understanding of. Her big brother is gone because he is bad. So she now wants to understand what is the bad that he is done, she has three pint of view. As typical of a little child she blames herself obviously she has done it for not liking the girl next door. But realized that her brother was bad for loving Brad, but her heavenly father and Sally say you are supposed to love everyone so in her mind if her brother is wrong for loving Brad then that means that she can't love anyone, cause that would be a sin. There are so many people hurt with bigotry and it isn't always the ones that are involved. A son will lose his family especially his little sister which he loves so much as to sneak in to try to assure her that he will be fine just won't be allowed to come home. The parents lose their son. But the hidden pain is this sweet little girl who loses everything, she loses her brother, and worst of all she will lose that beautiful innocence of a child because with one action her parent have taught her not to love people, family or anyone because it will be a sin. This little girl faith and love is so strong she is seeking help the nly way she knows...pity the parents didn't do that first. Very beautiful story, brought tears to my eyes.

flashbacks aren't for everybody. I've read some stories where they are used atrociously and have ruined the story for me. They gotten into the flashback and never seemed to get out of it. But on the other hand have read stories where the flashback done with italics or a typed warning saying such and such is a flashback and it was like a light bulb clicking on and cleared up a lot of questions. So really in my opinion flashbacks can be friends if used judiciously and sparingly, but if used willy nilly and over pages if not chapters then are definitely foes. having the flashback being warned of . different typeset to set it apart visually helps in using them I think also keep them relatively short you don't want them to go on and on like a bad Sunday drive with granny at the wheel, by the time you get done with the flashback you have forgotten about the real time event which kinda puts a downer on the chapter don't ya think?

should have peed on the bolt of lightening would have served him right lol. Poor Guy just has not been his day as it, but I don't know having pure white wings attached to my back after putting n a necklace would have seen cool. cool chapter. For all the surprises he does seem to be handling not to bad after the first couple of seconds of shock. But I have a feeling that Sayer might think he came through this alright but I don't think so I think he is in for a shock at some point . we will see

Oh KC the ending is perfect I can just see the Shock burst onto Michael's face when Ash said that. This chapter was a unique mix of rage,love and then that little shock at the end. It does not bode well for Ash at the end he is going to have his past spread out like so much dirty laundry by a man that is using so many dirty tricks it isn't funny. The one person who can clear it up won't because of money. the truly sad thing is it wasn't even ash the guy was shooting for he was just the guy that got in the way and the price he will pay will be astronomical in loss of privacy and having his reputation smeared all over the place which the guy who did it and the guy he was going after will get away scott free. Something needs t change in this case. But at least the guys are getting closer I just hope that their relationship will be able to handle the rep smears and lack of privacy cause it won't just be Ash you know they will go after Michael as well.

a like or dislike button is a cop out you push a button doesnt really tell you anything. leave a review message them tell them what you like or dislike about whatever your reading make it an original not a generic whatever.

Such a sad chapter. You tied up many loose ends in this chapter but it still had the teardrops of sadness always in the background. Alexi's mom was right to the extent that he needs to face the reality but I also understand why he keeps putting it off. A very beautiful chapter with an abrupt ending but it would have been worse to have it linger...sounds funny to say but the very sadness and tears are what made the chapter so beautiful. I hope there will soon be a solution to their sadness I do agree they could manage a long distance relationship but would rather see them together always.

My only comment on the idea of likes and titles is that mostly everything is set up for the writers, granted the population of members are writers there probably isn't a really large amount that are just readers like myself. Using the like button for chapters ad such is a neat idea is a great idea it gives the writers some feedback since not everyone leaves reviews which is the ideal. But on the other hand adding in the forum and other listings really isn't a plus for me. What i would like to see if your going to continue this is maybe having it separated so that the authors get there boost with their writings but also the non writers also have a chance to get the levels and titles as well we don't write but we like the odd boost to our morale as well. I don't think its really an ego thing persay or a competition to see who gets th highest or whatever but it is a boost to see the different levels and titles you get. Meh I'm just as bad if you want to get down to the nitty gritty as I've enjoyed seeing my name rise to second place on the reviewer list but that's not why i review I enjoy it its my way of writing and letting you guys know what I think of your stories. So I think the ranks and levels here should reflect that but even them out a bit so that non writers as well as the writers have a chance to see themselves rise in the ranks. Not everyone is a writer, not everyone does the forums posts so the likes and titles should reflect that even out the playing field guys . 500 posts or likes to be able to add some colour or flair to my kitty avatar when you don't write is a forgone conclusion it ain't happening within the next decade is all I'm saying lol. Just my thoughts on the topic or rant if you want to be snarky lmao

Very different..very imaginative as well. reminds me quite a bit of the Japanese novels my daughter loves to read. I like the different feel to it took a bit to get into the story then i kept reading cause i wanted to know how you got each of the different sisters. Love the snoopy bit felt bad he had to leave it behind but the ensuing fight would have been worth it hehe.

great story but you stopped it when it was really really getting good lol. Personally I would have done a bit of investigating before the initial meet up but hey walking in blinds works for some . great story

Beautiful . I hope Caleb's idea works cause the ties they Rhyder is building between Shura and Bryce are going to kill all three if he has to leave. I love this chapter all the little details make it perfect. loved the pocket presents with its message that was so cute hehe.

Paul must be so lonely knowing that two weeks adn your forgotten. I don't know if I could live like that, I think I would at least need one person who would always remember me. Somethng tells me that Starfleet is going to remember him with a bang and its not going to be pretty.

very full chapter. Hard to believe these are the same three boys that we met on a vacation day. They have grown so much and yet taught others so much that they are not the same as they were but are a little bit. But i do agree with Stephen there does seem to be something in the near future that everything is leading up to I just hope it is something good and not something that will institute these safe holds that the boys have been working on.... we shall see..awesome chapter Iarwain

can't wait to get reading