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Adrian must be so confused right now. No one is reacting as he expects them to and he is being thrown one curve after another. Normally by now I would be so frustrated with the lack of information but your story is very suspenceful I never know exactly what is going to happen I really like that. Keeps me reading to find out what is going to happen next.

Really good chapter. Though you do have two sentences that are repeated, where Alex is standing in front of him by the tub and tells him to sit on the edge and put his feet in the tub both those sentences are repeated one after the other not sure if it was intentional. the clues Adrian is giving off does not bode well for good memories so the nightmare he was waking up to in previous chapter is making more sense now. I like the fact that Alex asks why he was in the wrong territory and his surprise at the way that the packs reacted made sense to me at least granted most rogues probably are bad but you have a bushel of apples they aren't all bad usually only a few . Should never judge all by only one or two. great chapter.

I like the way you give out so much information but not enough so that you want to continue reading to find out more. Alex sounds like a interesting man he is huge but then looking at a height of 5.2 anyone could be considered huge hehe and he has a thing for the colour black. Definitely looking forward to the rest of the story I want to find out what happened to Adrian that scarred him so badly mentally that it affected the rest of his life.

Interesting, gives you enough to snag you and make you want to come back and find out what you left out, very intriguing.

I love carrot cake but my comfort food is mashed potatoes and corn lol. I think the guys have the right idea sure they could take the three weeks and whittle it away with what ifs and we should haves but why. But they knew it was going to happen the only thing that caught them by surprise was the timing so now they only have three weeks to finish making that bond strong enough to handle a years separation. Meeting the family actually works in a way as long as it goes good it will give both men relief and a cushion of support. I like the way they are thinking rather than giving up they are pushing ahead thier schedule just like the military did to them half the battle is already won now they just need to strengthen and build on what they have to make it thru the separation.. Great chapter Renee looking forward to more!!

A beautiful love scene. But what a downer afterwards. Its one thing to "know" that he would be deployed since he was still active but it's totally different and in your face to hear those words I'm being deployed. "knowing " it but sweeping it under the rug and not dealing with it is so different that having it right there with a time stamp and everything. It's such a sad ending to a chapter that started so happy and loving..literally lol. But it's out there and I think given a day or maybe two they will deal with it so that by the time the three weeks are up he can leave with hope rather than dread. I am looking forward to seeing what happens and how they deal with the next three weeks.

What a beautiful coming out story. I can to a certain degree see how you would think of the letter being bad timing. But as a a mother of two 20 something girls I think the timing would be perfect, If I had a son that was ostracizing himself from the family and as far as I could see for no real reason then getting a heartfelt letter of love with an explanation I think it would be a beautiful gift. On one hand I can see your hesitation because truthfully whenever you hear of coming out stories its not the good ones that bring families closer its the ones where the kids are killed, hospitalized , kicked out of the family those are the ones that come first to the mind of kids. Ive had three separate anniversaries in my life where our my gift was my husbands life and my daughters so I guess I'm not exactly the greatest person to compare after nearly losing my daughter twice adn my husband once having either of my girls write me a letter to say that they were gay would be nothing. This story is full of the love your family has for you and you have for them that is the way it should be we need more stories like this to replace the painful ones that are always brought to mind first. Thank you for sharing your coming out story and I personally think it is the best \nniversary gift you could have given your parents.

I love your stories lilansui they are always so insightful they look so calm and light at first glance but there is always so much going on the farther you read. Jae keeps telling himself he wants the quiet everyone knows each others business kinda life but..... then he does the no hands exhilarating ride on his bike. How much longer can he tell himself he wants a quiet life... does he really want it or did he just need a break, by the looks of it we will find out what kind of life he lead before coming home. Wonder what will happen when Angie realizes that the guy who talks to her and servers her her specialty coffee is her secret crush.. You most definitely have me hooked once again lilansui cant wait for the next chapter!!

The visit went as he expected which was sad but I guess no surprises at least his dad stood up for him. I can understand a mum's worry but when the mum puts prestige for herself before her son she goes to far. Lol I guess Bruce doesn't mind being called by his boyfriends horses name, better than another man's name. I think after the last ditch effort of hers his mother finally realized her son had grown up. Great chapter and im glad he's going home.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY KITT

One more way that this partnership is unique. Sayers is fae and that is how he reacts and sees things even though he has lived in the human realm, but Birch is human and that's what he sees and reacts to. The fact that he picked up on the very thing that might be unbalancing the fae world doesn't surprise me. Now my question is not so much Sayers but the rest if the fae world will they listen and investigate or push it to the side...Great chapter Cia

Sorry hard as it will be this week trip is necessary. For the visa to stay in America but mainly for Rhyder himself. He could forgo going back to to England but I think he needs to, face what he came from put that insecure boy in the past and show his mum and dad who he is now. His dad I think sees how much he has matured and knows what be wants and needs but his mum doesn't and I think she needs to and really with him there sorta in her face she can't really push it aside with her I know best. Go. Be done with it and come back then there will never be that what if....

Cool I'm not sure Rhyder was insulted initially or nit when Ty intimated he was using a ghost name for the rodeo, but it truly was cool at the literal meaning. Very apt for a rodeo rider. That place seemed really beautiful with the western feel to it. And Rhyder won't have ant problems fitting in. True it would be great to take Bruce with him across the puddle but I really do think that all in all going himself will sucks but in the long run do amazing things for his own belief in himself and his dad will be there to back him up. Great chapter pup.

a lot happened in this chapter....Well at least they now know who to charge along with the tv station and they should be able to put Spin's attack on his shoulders as well. I'm glad T.J.'s mom stood up for him which probably surprised the heck out of him . Something tells me that for all his self righteous anger when it comes out who sicced the tv station onto the guys and for what reason I hope it really backfires on him . Since he is the one that endangered teens not the ranch but rather the opposite when they find out a father endangered teens and tried to do all that damage because his son doenst show the correct sportsmanship and such ...yeah its not going to go over well for him lol, and too find out his wife left him for same reason haha. I think once the truth comes out of who did what and why the guys will be the ones to come out on top though you know Jesse's dad will use this to fight dirty. I'm not surprised that Spin came out of it early as soon as Mattie showed up I'm glad that even though there was a lot of damage he will come out of it well enough. I wonder if he recognized voices and that's why he isn't remembering right now or it could have just been shock too. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.

I loved this story and all the sequels. Like Myiege this was one of my first and favourite stories read here and I still reread it along with all the sequels. Most intriguing is the way it deals with memories and flowers its only mentioned I think twice but this story is the only had this unique way of keeping memories alive. I guess thats the best way to put it now you will just have to read the story to see what I meant hehe. Beautiful and humerous story definitely a must read.

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I figured the safe haven wouldn't last that long and having Brandon so happy made it worse. But lo and behold when the guys that beat up and knifed Spin are caught. What happened in Spain will just be a sample, I don.t want to be anywhere near that tv channel r reporters in the next day or two. Btw really nasty cliff hanger With the financial backing and lawyers Mattie and CJ have those guys aren't going to stand a chance and you know Trever probably is behind this trying to weaken the guys hold on Jesse. Too many coincidence since that riding meet and his father showing up. Can, wait to see what happens next

Yes I know you are the Queen of Cliff Hangers and technically that wasn't rally a cliff hanger but maaaaaaaannnnn did you have to stop there??????? . Beautiful chapter and very thought provoking. Instinctively Birch knew what had to be done but i don't think he even realized what could be done. Poor Sayer bet he is still in shock over what he initiated when he completed his binding or mating. Will truly be interesting to see how these two adapt and deal with all the issues that I'm sure are going to pop up for them. It will be interesting to see just how possessive Sayer is going to be . This is going to be fun and I can't wait til the next chapter.

I love when Ask An Author comes around. Gives me an insight into the author. Most authors always leave a little bit of themselves in theirs stories but i love when they answer the questions. It gives us a sneak peek into them over and above the stories they write. Why even how they do what they do, sometimes though one question just isn't enough hehe.

Pup your still mean even if it worked out all right lol. He has his way to stay doing what he loves best and what he is good at. He isn't the same shy little boy that just did what he was told cause he didn't have anything else. H e is a grown man that knows exactly what he wants adn can now reach out and grab it. Do I think he should go back yeah, simply because they are his family f they hadn't sent him out to the US no matter the original reasoning he wouldn't never have found what he did. He needs to go say his good bye collect his things then come home. If he was the same person as when he got there going back would have been a death knell for him e would stay there simply because he didn't know how to stand on his own two feet. He now has a life, a family and a purpose on Iron Hill Farm, he has the one thing he has never had love and acceptance and he will never give that up. His dad is thinking of him he has seen how much his son has grown and become his own man, his um and his sister still think of ownly themselve and how it effects them, his dad will stand up for him and he will be back. Awesome chapter pup !!

Oh you have got to be kidding , you can't intentionally leave us with a cliff hanger like that. He wins then you leave us with an ending like that. Mean pup just way to mean.

Comicfan outdid himself when he wrote Accidents Happen. The story has so many layers to it Just like Charlie himself. It is my all time favourite on this site it was one of the first stories i read when I came to this site and I have read it over and over again since the first time. Charlie is like this great artichoke ( yeah I know not a great metaphor but apt) that you just peel off the layers and get to the treasure at the heart.The first Chapter you see the first layer of Charlie sorta head in the clouds, oblivious of everything around him. Then comes Mr. Reed into the story and then it takes off but not in the way you expect it to. At this point you would figure it would be meet new guy , become boyfriends and whoo hoo end of story, but nope Comicfan likes to twist things a bit. I agree Scott was the catalyst for Charlie but the story unfolds so beautifully that I laughed and cried all the way through it. This story is funny, heartwarming and made you think. It wasn't your typical coming out finding yourself gay it was so much more than that. To me the story was how one man discovers himself and how his family and his partner help him discover that he was the heart of this big family. Beautifully written and I wish it never ended i would love to have continued to watch charlie and Scott grow as a couple and his continued string of "accidents". Maybe a peak back every once in a while hint hint. Most definitely a must read for everyone!!

nice ending if poor Rhyder wasn't anxious about the competition now he has to meet the parents on top haha haha. I like Rhyder's maturity he showed and his friendship with Cay and Sam, in that he had no problem peeking in on Jas but shied away from seeing Cay and Sam naked. Also loved the way he woke all the guys up it was perfect. I can just imagine the mini freak if he had ro watch Bryce ride bth the broncs and the bulls , don't think it would go over well. Those two are really getting close I really hope something comes up so that he can stay its going to really hurt almost inconsolable if he does leave to go back to England. Great chapter pup can't wait for the next which hopefully will have the competition part as well as meet the parents .