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Quiet man

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  1. Quiet man

    Chapter 14

    Enjoying the story (not what brad and his cronies are doing, of course). Nice pacing. Want to know such more fast, but thankful for the frequent postings
  2. Quiet man

    Chapter 12

    Thank you for the frequent postings. While the content right now is disturbing, it is a good story
  3. Quiet man

    Chapter 10

    The story is coming out. Thankful for the frequent postings. Going to continue to be an interesting read
  4. Quiet man

    Chapter 6

    Getting clues of not the nicest things that have been done to devyn. Brad is definitely not the upstanding person, but then money talks. Can't wait for more
  5. Quiet man

    Chapter 5

    Wonder what brad's problem with Devyn is. Seems to be a very twisted tale. Looking forward to more chapters
  6. Quiet man

    Hall Pass

    Pete really is playing a game. I'm not gay, but you can't be with anyone else. Mike is in a bind and can't express his true feelings. And Corbin is stuck
  7. Quiet man

    Chapter 1

    Liked the first chapter. Good premise. Keep on writing. Brad
  8. Quiet man

    Prologue

    Wow. Can see that this is going to be quite the story. Very intense beginning. Looking forward to more. Brad
  9. Quiet man

    Firsts- Lasts?

    Very intriguing beginning. Really liking the story. Brad
  10. Quiet man

    Chapter 16

    Couldn't bring myself to like this chapter. So very hard to believe someone could be that demonic. I look forward to Sacha and James rescue. I can only think how terrible James must feel for their situation. Brad
  11. So good to read another chapter, and what a chapter it was. Excellent. Lots of information of what is going on with characters. Now to see how it truly plays out and the ramifications. The other reviews expressed so much better hat I would say. Can't wait for the next chapter. So many ways for the story to go. Hope Corbin lands on his feet. Brad
  12. Quiet man

    Chapter 1

    So much love and emotion in such a short story. Could have read on and on. Brad
  13. Quiet man

    Chapter Two

    Great start. I know I am going to like this story. And if this is your first, congratulations. Brad
  14. Have enjoyed your story and look forward to year next chapters
  15. Quiet man

    Chapter 13

    Perfect ending. The good guys get together. And the bad guys---who cares!! Brad
  16. Very nice transitions. Feelings and fears and very well expressed. Wonderful relationships developing. Brad
  17. Nice introduction. Looks to be a good and interesting story. Brad
  18. Quiet man

    November 20th

    Loved this story and definitely looking forward to the sequel. I can see already that it will be a good read. Brad
  19. A highlight of the last weeks has been waking up Sunday morning to another chapter go button. Each chapter has been very thoughtful in its topic within the ongoing story. Although I was prepared at some point for Andy's death, it wasn't easy to hear. But again your writing about it was so very good. Very emotional to see the different reactions and the group coming together. Brent's comments are so important. Watch what you say yo people because it may be the last words you say. Glad to hear of the sequel. Brad
  20. Good beginning. Definitely keep going
  21. Quiet man

    Sweet Sixteen

    Always great to wake up on Sunday to another chapter of Button. Your topics are great, and your writing is the best. So real. Amazing how button has grown up in such a great atmosphere and turned out so well developed withe his developmental delay
  22. Quiet man

    Chapter 1

    Very touching story. Never like tragedy, but happy when things turn out as positively as it did
  23. Another great chapter. You make buttons journey through life so real.
  24. Quiet man

    Chapter 6

    I will echo that. WOW!!! And yes, was ready to kill also. But what an ending. And what a message. Hats off to the author!
  25. Quiet man

    Chapter 8

    Another great chapter and story. Character development is so good and each will be integral to the story. Glad to see Jesse and Dylan again
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