Timothy M.
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Those are very good points. I'd love to know what @Rambling Robin thinks about that theory.
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It's so interesting to read the story and the comments again, when I know a lot more about Mick and the others.
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Ugh, I still have to skim this chapter, it makes me so upset. But the way Mick tells Guy why he won't go to hospital was sharp and vivid and should make Guy rethink his approach to helping Mick. And I still think Mick should have let him rip Lester apart and fuck the consequences.
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Good choice but get ready for the roller coaster. Both the good and bad bits are epic. You may go from to within ten paragraphs.
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What do you hate about the format ? There is nothing wrong with have equal amount of spaces between paragraphs, it's more restful for the eyes than shifting back and forth from no space to single space or even worse from single space to double space. Don't make a new paragraph for every line, if you don't like all the spaces in the text. But if you have dialogue, you have to make a new paragraph every time there is a new speaker. It's one of the subtle ways to avoid the he said, I said speech tags.
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story critique Improve & Encourage #10: Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
OK, I did read it and am contemplating how to revenge myself on @Sam Wyer for not warning me about It was well-written, though, and did give good insight in both characters, so I guess that part of the I&E was spot on. -
I can certainly see why Roger would be upset and I don't blame him at all. Charlie's remark about being scared too is his only saving grace. I hope they find happiness, but I have to be honest and say I have no great urge to spend any more time in with a hyper teen like Charlie. Robbie's plenty enough stress for me to read about.
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Rock and a Hard Place Chapter 1
Timothy M. commented on Dodger's story chapter in Rock and a Hard Place Chapter 1
I think Charlie would drive me nuts after a very short time. But at least he has more courage and self-confidence than Roger. -
story critique Improve & Encourage #10: Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Y'all are being so terribly polite when doing the criticism part. I hope @aditus will be brutally honest about my story if he ever returns to do and I&E. But I do like the descriptions of the strengths of the story. Makes me want to read it. -
This last book was hectic but impressive. I'm glad Andy and Will ended up together again.
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Here's to hoping the female detective was clever enough to copy those photos to a hard drive before she let the bad cop fiddle with it. Or that they can be retrieved as suggested by the tech wise readers.
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And why didn't Will talk to Brody before this and get a new job. This feels like unnecessary drama for the sake of it. I hope the next book is better.
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Well finally, and hopefully the reception is over quickly.
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I hope Andy is suffering more than Will. He fended off lots of sluts in high school so he should know better.
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Yup, still being a bunch of idiots.
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I agree. They're all a bunch of idiots.
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Wait a minute - Andrew's mum was perfectly OK with him being gay in the first story. Or is it something else she' pushing him to do? And Andy should have simply told her she's wasting her time trying to seduce him, since he's gay and in a relationship with Will. If she tells her parents, maybe they'd all get the fuck out. Jeff is a bastard for doing this and he does not deserve any consideration at all.
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And remind me again why Will can't go home with Andy and spend a nice quiet evening in his mum's house. I'm getting really fed up with him letting himself being trampled on and not putting his foot down.
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I don't. I feel sorry for the people they inflict their misery upon.
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Well, I guess the British Army is better than US Marines. And Sandhurst does have a good reputation.
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Maybe Will will finally quit that stupid job !
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Well, I relieved West doesn't join a bunch of bigoted, women-trashing idiots and risk getting killed in some stupid war.
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yeah, great advice coming from someone who's not being honest with his own boyfriend.
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Andy should ask and not just wonder why Will stays at the call center.
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LOL, Peter and Will are fun together.
