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Confidential conversations II
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential conversations II
Thanks, Albert. Yeah, we're gradually learning how upset Evan has been about his twin disappearing. Chris may be confused about their volatile behavior, but he has no doubt how important Russell is for Evan. Glad you approve of the dialogue and the sex. -
The colors are gone after the big update, but there is now a new feature which can make text messages and mail stand out. I think it's the button to the far right on the editor box.
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Maybe he thought it was better to confront his stalker?
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I like that Mitch wants to keep his faithful employees but asking them to do night shifts is perhaps not so hot an idea. Research shows working at night increases the risk of various health problems. I bet Tom would be the clever know-it-all who points it out. Expanding the business by building a second warehouse with all the automated stuff and then refitting the old one might be a better idea. Kit is so innocent and good-hearted, but Tom will spice his life up and he has a point about not caring what other people think.
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I've managed to do some unintentional foreshadowing, by putting in details which were mainly to give background and color to the characters, and later when something happens, one or two readers will say "Oh, so that's why xx and yy." And I'm all before I go "Oh well spotted. " If you want to read a story with masterful foreshadowing try Headstall's Morningstar: The Malaise. Graeme's Leopards Spots is another but here he had all of us hunting for the clues at the beginning. No one guessed who Ken was, though.
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Confidential conversations II
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential conversations II
You always know how to make me laugh. Even when you're saying perfectly sensible things like the above above smelly soap, you managed to do it with a wink and witty words. -
LOL, Kitt in protective mode is funny but sweet. But I do love Mitch and Tay best, especially in a playful mood.
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This chapter is another of my favorites, I love the way Tom takes Kit by surprise. But the joke's on him at the end.
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This is definitely in my top five favorite chapters of the Confounded saga. I over the shopping debacle every single time. And then I over the graveyard scene. Tay has eminent instincts but what a difficult, yet defining moment.
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awww Kit made Tom laugh, and he's so proud of it, but genuinely happy too. Good talk with his dad, but it'll probably need more of those to clear the air. As for Jay....
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I love first chapter from Tom's POV. It explains a lot about him and it's fun seeing romantic Kit from the outside. They really do seem perfect for each other.
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Yes, you should. Most definitely. How could you forget about your fans patiently waiting for more chapters. Well, now you're back, it's worth reading and commenting. I love this chapter for their honesty and determination. They have plenty of self-knowledge and if they can see the potential relationship problems, they can also deal with them. Hopefully.
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Ooops, major mistake by Tom here. But I can understand why he wants to clear the air with his parents first. And he's never been good about sharing his secrets.
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Mitch and Tay are awesome and funny. But they just hit another wall with Tom and Tay knows it.
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Don't know why I never commented on this chapter. It's a wonderful mixture of tenderness and jubilation. Kit's a goner for sure and so is Tom.
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Now I'm hungry and I want cup cakes. I'm glad Tony was firm with his sister when she was out of line with her questions, and I was impressed with Geoff. He did very well.
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Ohhh, a number prompt...
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Yeah, it really was a good day for the twins even if they has to talk about their father for a bit. But luckily Chris was there to support them.
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Confidential Conversations I
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential Conversations I
LOL, you'll meet Faster Helena at the engagement party, if I ever get so far. I seem to get sidetracked all the time. Yes, we finally get to hear about Jacob's issues and find out he's not the god-like person in Russ' mind. To me that makes him more human and likable. He's lucky to have found Russell, who for all his faults are devoted and loyal. They fulfill each other's needs much more than even I anticipated. I was looking forward to writing the twins together, but I also worried about getting the tone of their twin bond just right. Your compliments about them bing fun make me very happy. And you're absolutely right about Chris being a proper Guardian. Thank you for faithfully commenting on every chapter, and for being patient about getting a reply. -
Confidential Conversations I
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential Conversations I
Thanks, Gary. Perhaps once I've finished the story, you'll be able to find time to read it again. It'll probably be a few years from now. -
Planned and unplanned meetings
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Planned and unplanned meetings
Thank you, Albert. When I set out to write this chapter, it wasn't with the intention of having a light and dark side, but somehow it worked out really well. The day may have started badly for Russ but he rallied with the help of Jacob and now he has Evan by his side. Never underestimate twin power. -
what's a TKO ? Oh wait I know : Technical Knock-Out.
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Ugh, getting up at 5 am is so not my thing. I totally agree with Tay and Tom. It was one of my favorite parts in Confounded I where Tay got all grumpy at Mitch for being a morning person. I'd never accept a job which forced me to get up early in the morning every day.
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Round Two goes to JD and Drake. Don't we all love to see Jimmy put Preston in his place. It makes me wonder if he's had to do something similar before with his own family. Drake may say he doesn't care about his brother's nasty words or Jimmy's embrace, and he may try to draw lines in the sand. But while he may succeed in shutting Preston out of his life and heart, I bet he won't be able to resist Jimmy in the long run. After all, he apparently knows all JD has to offer after their third date. But even more important, he now also knows what a good friend and supportive partner he is.
