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  1. Timothy M.

    Prologue

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Prologue

    Very intense prologue. But I don't understand why Mason would be unaware of the risk of being hunted (as pr the story description). And why would Robbie not be available as witness in the case ? If he's talking openly about staying with his sister up north, surely the police can get hold of him? If they fear him being killed, they should tape his explanation of who the attacker is, and why, in front of a magistrate or a judge, or stick him in a witness protection program. Anyway, I agree with Mason's reasoning over why his parents are sending him to Australia, but I agree even more with Jeremy. He should see it as an opportunity to become independent and widen his horizons. How old is he ? 18 or 19 I guess.
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    Threat Assessed

    Timothy M. commented on Cia's story chapter in Threat Assessed

    I very much enjoyed the expanded version.
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    Chapter 3

    Timothy M. commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 3

    How can you leave us all hanging with such a cliffie ? lol, jk, I know what it's like to be stalled in a story. But I hope you'll return to it one day.
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    I know, but I mostly ignore or forget about those when it comes to my own stories. Of course, I'm pleased for GA that the site has lots of traffic which can generate ads revenue.
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    Chapter 28

    Timothy M. commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 28

    Well, I guess that's the end of the Captain rejecting Kohen.
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    I just want to mention I loved the double play on the chapter title. Wake-Up Call - yes Callie woke Drake up in more than one way. He needed that as well as her push to go along with what his heart has been telling him all weekend.
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    I had to go back one chapter to get reacquainted with Harm, but that was OK, and I got to see your replies to comments. I like the way he's quite relaxed about the female partner thing, but perhaps they should let mixed couples choose whether they want to be a Triad or not. As Harm says they can always donate sperm. I look forward to more chapters.
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    Don't forget some of us will read story of specific chapters more than once. In addition, authors will look at the chapter to answer comments, and then readers will access the chapter again to read the replies. I rarely consider story or chapter views as an accurate measure of number of readers. Only likes and comments count for me. Oh - and followers of my stories of course :')
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    It's not like weeks have gone by since their weekend together, and Drake can truthfully tell Jimmy he simply needed to have things fall into place. I'm not saying Jimmy should accept Drake's declaration immediately, but he wanted to get another chance at a relationship. If he gives up on that after pushing Drake for most of the weekend, they're both making a mistake. They'll still have to work at building trust and dealing with the past, but unless Jimmy has decided Drake is too damaged by Richard to be worth having as a boyfriend I don't see why he'd reject him. After all, Drake will have to tell him he loves him, and Jimmy can ask if he believes it will be enough to make him trust too. If Drake doesn't trust Jimmy, the relationship will fail.
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    Awesome - and I'll be able to get a list of the stories Kitt, Lisa or I have edited.
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    She does not mean for Mort to do escorting, it was simply a way to start the proceedings of making them relax about sex and nudity.
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    Domestic violence does not prevent divorce. At least, not here. And he's rich enough to hire a PI to get evidence for her infidelity. If he's not prepared to fight, I don't feel so sorry for him.
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    Well, perhaps you have other plans than Mort getting rid of her the classic way. And I'd like to see Arch find his balls and divorce her, since it would be a much better revenge if she had to live with a failed marriage and exposed as a cheating slut and a gold digger. There are things worse than a quick death, you know.
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    I bet Hercules is angry because he used to be or wants to be Arch's lover. The man was a fool to marry a gold digger, but hopefully Mort can get rid of her.
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    I loved the way Hale called the men on the bigotry towards gay men, while at the same time bolstering their courage to stand up to women. In Denmark there is worry about having too many women as teachers and in kindergarten, because they do not understand the boys, who need males as role models. But no one has found a good solution. Also, facts, knowledge and science are not rated as well as girls telling how a text makes them feel.
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    Chapter 59

    Timothy M. commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 59

    Hmm, new love interests for Will and Brad at the same time, as well as someone Stef needs to dress up. If Dillon also happens to be doing history at college, he'll be the perfect fit in the family, whether or not he's a permanent replacement for Zack. And I agree with Centex about Jake being good for Brad.
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    Chapter 12

    Timothy M. commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 12

    Helleboek ohhhh, Hellebæk, right. It should be transcribed Hellebaek, if you don't have access to the Danish letter æ. But in case you need them, here they are for copying: Ææ, Øø, Åå. Oh, and feel free to have your beta-edit team contact me for any Danish phrases or names. A most satisfying chapter indeed, I love it when Granger puts down idiots like that Admiral in his polite but steely way. A clear case of words being more effective and satisfying that the xx inches of steel which Granger would plant in his guts in a duel. PS you still have those pictures from Black Widow hanging around in the text and end note of the previous chapter (ch. 11).
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    Forgotten?

    Timothy M. commented on northie's story chapter in Forgotten?

    Like @droughtquake I assumed Andy would start taking pictures of them, but perhaps that would have sparked an attack. But I'm glad he was there to tell them off, so I guess that was a sort of bonus to him forgetting the promise to Eric, which was a really awful thing to do. I hope he can get Eric some help if he's ill, either taking him to the hospital or getting hold of a nurse or home carer if something like that exists. It would be what I would do in Denmark. Visiting Eric on Boxing Day is a much better idea than inviting him over for Christmas. And like Andy I wonder how those kids and the parent knew about Eric. Talking to the local school might be a good idea, but Andy should focus on Eric's needs for now.
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    Hale

    Timothy M. commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Hale

    From the way Hale is described I can't imagine him wanting a permanent relationship. But I'm sure Mort will let him down gently.
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    LOL, true, you should get a lot more likes for doing bug fixing and a lot of other stuff around here. If you made more posts about what you do, I'm sure your rep count would climb. But the main way to earn likes here is being an author. Which is the way it should be. (The other one is to be very active in the chat topics.)
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    But a difference of 12-13 times (26k compared to 2-3 k views) seems rather strange. Oh, well, it's not a major problem. And compared to all the bugs you had to chase down after the update things are running pretty smoothly now, right ?
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    Hale

    Timothy M. commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Hale

    Doing acrobatics with Hale seems a good way to stay out of sight and move around to different parts of the country.
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    Stories sound scary - and the banner is brilliantly chilling too.
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    Jimmy has made his point, several of them in fact, and he now needs to leave Drake alone to process his talk with Richard and his feelings for Jimmy. I have faith Drake will get there, and if Jimmy has waited many months, surely he can wait a few days or weeks. Drake needs to get back home and let the turmoil settle and if Jimmy can't understand that, then he doesn't know Drake as well as he thinks. If Drake decides he cannot get over his issues and trust Jimmy, then it's better for both of them to make a final decision and tell Jimmy. If he thinks he can get over it, they can discuss how to get there together, including Drake talking to a therapist.
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    It's so nice to read a story which mentions temperature in Celcius like a civilized country. Do you also use meter and kilometer ?
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