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Timothy M.

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  1. I'm so impressed by all of the above - and so relieved none of it applies to me. I'm happy to live a quiet existence here at GA with friends and more than enough readers who like and comment on my stories.
  2. Timothy M.

    Chapter XVIII

    You're welcome. It's hard to take of my editor cap even when reading for fun.
  3. At first I wondered why Andy didn't go shopping with Eric and helped carry the bags, but then I realized Eric wanted to do this on his own. I wonder whether Andy worked it out for himself or Eric made it clear when they set out. I'm assuming the appointment to get new glasses is after lunch? I feel very sorry for Eric not being able to enjoy hot food normally. Surely there must be a technical solution to this problem? A microwave with containers which can be handled wearing oven mitts? Powdered soups which can be made ready at the table by pouring boiling water into the bowl ? Andy should get his clever mind working on this too. I'd love to hear the story of Adam cornering the landlord and very politely pointing out how bad it would be for his public image if the local paper were to run a story about the lonely, crippled oldster freezing in squalor due to the lack of maintenance.
  4. How could you forget about Marius? https://satwcomic.com/zombie-zoo Ha, ha, to the crime story idea - Russ isn't usually observant or quick-thinking enough to uncover a conspiracy.
  5. I've missed them too. Reading most of the chapters again along with Albert's comments have put me in the mood to write more. Fingers crossed that inspiration lasts.
  6. Yes, here we are at last, I've come to the end of all your wonderful comments. I'll have to write more chapters now. I'm glad you don't mind the small tidbits about Denmark. When I have people visiting from abroad I usually try to tell them about the sights we happen to go past. Yes, Henry is a fool, but he may not have realized yet. I think he's given up on his children for good, but he'll probably keep trying with Isa. He does love and need her, and I think he was actually looking forward to them being on their own as a couple. This was actually one reason he didn't mind Kristin and Evan leaving to study elsewhere, and it was actually Isa who wanted Russ to stay at home and go to a local college. But more on this later.
  7. Jimmy is a man on a mission and we all wish him success, for his as well as Drake's sake. But I think he just realized how difficult it will be with all the ghost of the pasts. Drake has been abandoned by his parents and by the first man he loved. He's been caught between siblings who despise (Preston) and love (Callie) him, and he hasn't really progressed from confused and insecure teen to the man he could become. I'm impressed how patient and kind JD is, he really did fall hard for Drake, and it must have been agony to see him with another boyfriend. I hope he's rewarded in the end, but knowing your romantic heart, I'm sure he will be.
  8. Timothy M.

    Chapter XVI

    Methinks Greg is trying to worm his way into Chris' good graces. I hope he'll have to work very hard to accomplish this. At least he's now asking and trying to be fair. The text parts were fine, I only noticed one place which was off: I have many friends, I received back. Use commas and dots, while texting. should be I have many friends, I received back. Use commas and dots, while texting.
  9. Timothy M.

    Chapter XV

    It's sort of funny to have Greg all desperate for Chris' company and homely comforts like food, talk and friendship.
  10. Timothy M.

    Chapter XIV

    Ohh I loved the subtle revenge of denying his enemy food. Very clever - and Greg even admitted he's been wrong about calling Chris names. He may be redeemable.
  11. Timothy M.

    Chapter XIII

    Well, perhaps that's the lesson Greg needs to learn ? And by this point we don't know why he's behaving like this. The explanation had better be good.
  12. Timothy M.

    Chapter XII

    Ah there was instant attraction between them, but I guess Greg subsequently discovered what Chris didn't tell him. But why would he object to him being born in Canada?
  13. Timothy M.

    Chapter VII

    I like that Chris is honest with his new employer and I think Mr M. appreciates it as well. Basil is a nice butler caricature.
  14. Timothy M.

    Chapter VI

    A nice nonjudgmental doctor. I'm liking Mr. Montgomery more and more.
  15. Timothy M.

    Chapter V

    LOL, you do have a thing for Armani. I can recall Kit tell Tom that putting on his new shirt and trousers should be almost orgasmic.
  16. Timothy M.

    Chapter IV

    In the midst of sorrow it can be helpful to have things to do. But thinking back on happy memories can be good too.
  17. Timothy M.

    Chapter III

    Uhm, I assume he had some ID and the fifty dollars in his pocket. Hopefully they were not burned as well.
  18. Timothy M.

    Chapter II

    Hmm Mr. Montgomery must be a very shrewd judge of character. And a bath sounds like a good idea.
  19. Timothy M.

    Chapter I

    A trip down memory lane can be good to understand what's going on.
  20. Timothy M.

    Chapter XVII

    I did laugh a little over the games he played with Greg's need to check up on him, but it's interesting how it makes him feel safe and not alone. The letter shed a lot of light on the situation and I think I can recall the conversation. I'll go back to the first chapters to check.
  21. Timothy M.

    Chapter XVIII

    I'm guessing you mean the lake feeds fresh water into the sea, and not that salt water from the sea enters the lake ? It's interesting how they're gradually finding a way to co-habit and even seem to appreciate each other.
  22. Timothy M.

    Chapter XVIII

    You can post another chapter now, please, it's been more than one day. There are good reasons for this rule, both for the sake of the author and other people. You'll notice you got very few comments on the first chapters, and this is because we rushed on to the next chapter to see what was happening. After you slowed down most chapters have at least 10 comments.
  23. I love it when someone clever confronts stupid bigots and exposes their idiocy.
  24. I'm glad you had a good time and your friend appreciated the surprise visit. btw did you enjoy the meals? https://satwcomic.com/masterchef
  25. Tyr will take good care of all three.
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