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scotty94

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  1. I'll give everyone a classic. bright and early for their daily races---------------------------------- I want the original artist and the cover artist for this one please.
  2. older member get over your self: Running Bear never cared enough About Little White Dove and her tender love. Wig Wam Bam by The Sweet.
  3. my five will be: Harry Potter 1 to 7 by J.K Rowling lord of the rings by J.R.R Tolkien The Hobbit by J.R.R Tolkien Private Peaceful by Michael Morpurgo and all of the tom sawyer books by Mark Twain especially Tom Sawyer Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
  4. scotty94

    Chapter 1

    I'm liking the story from what I've read but I didn't understand a few of the phrases and words being from the UK myself I find it hard to understand american English, I understand why you did change it to suit the majority of the reading audience but you sort of lose the English feel to it. But keep up the good work and it look like I'll have to obtain an american English dictionary to understand these words and phrases.
  5. that time already just the other day I was checking out some of the other responses time flies.
  6. welcome aboard.
  7. Why go back I left school two years ago at the tender age of 18 and will not step foot in that building ever again, although I did like some aspects of school especially the first years in there white tight during ballet class that didn't leave much for the imagination.
  8. RIP Robin Williams.
  9. scotty94

    Chapter One

    hey there, just started reading this story today and at the moment it's good, but I did notice a few minor spelling mistakes and a few grammatical errors but nothing that can't be ironed out by an editor and beta reader follow this link and put a request in for an editor and beta reader: http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/forum/8-editors-corner/
  10. I came out at thirteen and my parents and my brothers are cool with it, my brothers have to be any way because one gay the other is bi.
  11. Rest In Peace Trebs.
  12. I was surfing the web and came across this awesome video, if you had the chance would you go to a concert like this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aro6w-KDJX4 comment below.
  13. I Hate writer block I was waiting for Nano to start, and as the clock hit midnight my head went blank I must of written 1000 words several time and deleted them so I decided to get some sleep and when the morning came the words just flowed from my head.
  14. 18,000 words god almighty, I'll give it a go as I always read first chapter of all stories and from the first few paragraph I read, I'm looking forward to reading it when I have a few mins or hours free.
  15. Not much in the immediate area here where I live in greater Manchester, but just a quick forty minute bus ride in to town and I'm dropped off in front of a street rammed with gay bars and venues an amazing place right in the centre of Manchester called canal street. Chock-full of every sexual orientation you can think off come to Manchester and experience the gay life in the best way possible.
  16. I know how you feel buying homes in the UK isn't easy so you lucky to have one in america, and it difficult for me to even pay the £400 rent I owe every month.
  17. welcome and step inside our magical world full of great people stories and laughs.
  18. I though a fox was an animal, not a website?
  19. exciting wedding my mum went in to labour with her first child on her weeding day, so glad I wasn't a twinkle in her eyes then, my dad would of been flipping out I hope it all goes well for you daughter after all no matter how stressful wedding can be it is one of the event you remember for the rest of your life.
  20. Happy Birthday Sasha
  21. Shifter always play a big part in my writing recently, but I hate the though of wolves although they are awesome my brother is obsessed with them and he has sort of worn out the paranormal aspect for me and there a regular occurrence. A story I am working on is called Elemental, the story is about four teenager 3 boys and 1 girl, they each control one of the elements either Water, Earth, Fire or Air, along with that the can also control animals, turn in to animals and talk to animals. But the animals they control and turn in to are not what you expect they include Foxes, Eagles and Sharks. Although wolves are very popular it dose depend on what you are trying to get across to the reader and what universe, era or date the story is set.
  22. I had the pleasure of reading this amazing story first, due to being Rachel beta reader. Keep up the good work.
  23. it happens all over the place bring me back to the murder of James Bulger in 1993, I hate to say this but some children are not all that innocent some are just EVIL
  24. Congratulation to all you promising and signature author out there, but do you really need a title to get people too read your work, I like to see author get recognised but everything in this world is about title. if I was still an author and I was ever promoted to be a promising or signature author I would refuse and if I the computer automatically adjust your profile when you are promoted I would delete that account and set up another, and repost my story, title cause problems of all sorts. But well done to all you promising and signature author out there I will continue to read your story but not because you have a title just because there amazing stories and I enjoy reading them.
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