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Suvitar

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  1. That was weird, Snowflake letting himself into Brian's room without being invited in and only wearing a towel around his waist Brian's softer and kinder side showed during the time he was with Jimmy, he's a very considerate man. Probably awful of me, but I prefer Jimmy to Snowflake ....and what happened when Snowflake entered the room left me with teary eyes
  2. Happy Birthday!
  3. Saunas are hot....in so many ways
  4. I couldn't resist checking out the story
  5. As any other Finn I started to ski the winter after I learned to walk, and 25 sounds too old to begin competitive career as a skier But best of luck to Brian
  6. Memorable first meeting for both of them
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    Tahoe

    Interesting start. Loved the way you let Brian introduce himself. He's self-centred but there´s a hint of something else, too, something that tells he might be a good guy, looking for someone permanent in his life. We'll see Jossë isn't a Finnish name, and we don't have letter ë in our alphabet, it's not a Sami name either. There's name Jösse which is a nickname for Gösta.
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    Chapter 7

    Such a lovely chapter Dave is a sweetheart, so ready to make Reece feel better even when he didn't know what was wrong. And now they are moving in together
  9. Happy Birthday!
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    A Love Machine

    This was fun
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    Delicious

    This was a sweet little story
  12. Great story Like I said before, I enjoyed the slow pace, and funny conversations. I need to check what else you have written
  13. I liked the slow pace, nice to read a story where main characters don't jump into a bed the first time they meet, but take time to get to know each other. It took them months to even know they both are gay. Great characters and the story's good so far
  14. Suvitar

    The Story

    You left a lot unsaid, but what you said was very powerful and sad
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    Epilogue

    This was a great story and I enjoyed reading it
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    Chapter 12

    Terrible parents and horrible people. The way they treated their children is unthinkable. I wish Jason hadn't even thought about going back home, anything else would have been a better option for him. Lucky for him Adam came looking for him.
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    Chapter 11

    Such a sad chapter There might have been few tears on this end as well
  18. I should learn not to presume anything
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    Chapter 10

    Oh wow, a twin sister and an aunt. Perhaps few cousins and some other forgotten family members will pop up next? I better read on to find out.
  20. You're practically fluent in Finnish
  21. I think you wanted this to be Danish but it's Finnish or perhaps Timothy understands both
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    Chapter 9

    Brilliant chapter. I didn't like Jason's parents from the start, but they are even more horrible than I thought How do you get rid of your baby just because she's not perfect?! They might have not been a rich family when the children were born but they must have been well off and could have offered everything a deaf child needed. And basically that's loving parents and a brother, nothing else needed. I don't understand Jason's mother's motivation to do this now. Of course Jason has a right to know he has a twin sister, but that's not why she gave the information.
  23. Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 8

    Finally someone who cares about poor Sadie I've felt so sorry for her. The way Jason's mother talked about the sister was weird, wonder what's behind that and who she is. Very interesting
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