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    Charlie surprised with his strength when he was honest with Tina and told her he didn´t love her. He could have so easily stayed together with her.
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    Had to google Blueberry Buckle and it looked just like something from my oven Charlie is such a sweetheart
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    Scott seems like a nice man and Charlie needs friends...and a boyfriend even if he doesn´t know it yet
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    Charlie seems more determined here. I think I´ll follow Charlie to the hospital to meet Scott.
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    Poor Charlie! (I do hope I can say something else after next chapter ) Charlie hasn´t had an easy life so far, hopefully that´ll get better now. He seems so nice and sweet.
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    Poor Charlie! On to the next chapter to find out what´ll happen next, hopefully something nice for Charlie
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    Chapter 19

    Suvitar commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Oh wow, that was a perfect ending to a lovely story. I especially loved the scene where Drew told Rick about his boyfriend and gave Rick a chance to explain himself, I might have even shed few tears. They are all still friends and I´m looking forward reading about Brandon´s life....if you ever should write about it. Such a great story
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    Cumulonimbus

    Suvitar commented on Aditus's story chapter in Cumulonimbus

    I knew Sam wouldn´t want Mark back Now he needs to find Paul and explain the kiss and then they can live happily ever after...or something like that Really enjoyed your story and hopefully there´ll be more
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    Burnt Dreams

    Suvitar commented on Aditus's story chapter in Burnt Dreams

    You described Paul´s heartbreak and also Maya´s love and worry for her brother brilliantly. It has to be Sam on the phone, wanting to tell Paul that he said no to everything Mark had to offer. Lovely story
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    That was a sweet revenge Great story, I really enjoyed it
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    Winter Storm

    Suvitar commented on wolfwriter's story chapter in Winter Storm

    I liked your story and I´d like to think it had a happy ending, at least they were planning to stay in touch. Those two men who came to vandalise the car, didn´t find them plausible. Lots of snow everywhere and they just decided it´s a good idea to spray someone´s car....
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    So glad I didn´t have anything planned for this Friday evening....first two stories I´ve read have been brilliant
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    I really enjoyed your story and I can so well relate to constant rain and mud...it´s so nice to have sunshine after a long rainy period. Dev and Hunter seem like a perfect couple....hopefully they´ll have a long and happy life together
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    The Story

    Suvitar commented on Ron's story chapter in The Story

    Great story I`d like to think this was a beginning of a very long love story
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    Chapter 10

    Suvitar commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Lovely story and I liked the happy ending.
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    Chapter 6

    Suvitar commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Such a sad childhood and I wonder what happened to the mother.
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    Chapter 2

    Suvitar commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Perhaps you should use less she/he and more their actual names. Who is Danielle? In the first chapter there was Victoria...They probably aren´t important but they are confusing as was the dream scene.
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    Chapter 1

    Suvitar commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Chapter 1

    The way this begun, gave an impression it won´t be an easy relationship....if in fact there´ll be a relationship. On to the next chapter
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    Chapter 18

    Suvitar commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 18

    I love the way you keep me guessing and coming up with theories about Rick; is he gay, is he straight, is he bi or is he just a very confused young man Brandon being gay and possibly interested in Drew could be the thing for Rick to realise that he wants Drew to be more than a best friend
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    Epilogue

    Suvitar commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Epilogue

    Lovely little story with a happy ending Couple of things: it´s threw a party not through and you used then when you should have used than.
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    Chapter 3

    Suvitar commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I´m glad they are staying and the old man will stay away.
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    Chapter 2

    Suvitar commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I was wondering the same as Terry, Seth seemed like a person who´d protect her mother against his father. And why hasn´t he bought a lock for his bedroom door?
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    Chapter 1

    Suvitar commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    She should have reported him for abusing a child and have him put into a prison. Perhaps he´ll die now.
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    Chapter 17

    Suvitar commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Rick keeps deciding to tell Drew the truth and ends up kissing him instead
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    Jackie will hit the roof when she hears about Mark´s plan to live with Trey and not in her house. But first Trey needs to come back home safely and they can properly start planning their future together. Lovely chapter
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