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Kat and Will are getting re-acquainted and the parents are getting drunk and horrible. How will any of them survive two months of this?
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They are very comfortable with each other, just as old friends often are. Poor Marc, he´s probably just passing by. Looking like an interesting story.
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Fall a brief interlude of Four Perspectives
Suvitar commented on Aditus's story chapter in Fall a brief interlude of Four Perspectives
Nice to find another little story about Sam´s life and thoughts -
Lovely picture. Scary nightmare or perhaps it was more than a dream
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I agree with Lisa, you writers are amazing This was different but nice.
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That´s one way to get your friends go out together
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I don´t know the egg trick but I do love spring, I love days getting longer and lighter and warmer, I love green grass and leaves and I love all the flowers. I don´t even mind the flies and mosquitoes. I just want more sunshine and no more snow!
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Poor Bernard! Jack has such a nasty mouth It´s good that Brenda wants to be close to Bernard, I think it´ll be good for them both. Molly is a lovely mother and cares for her son, but she should let Bernard make his own decisions about his relationship with Jack. And I do hope they´ll get back together after Jack gone through some therapy. They make a great couple but there are issues to solve before it´ll be a happy ever after for them.
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Chapter Twelve: Twentieth Century Boy
Suvitar commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Twentieth Century Boy
What a wonderful surprise to find a new chapter and a great chapter it is! Alan carried Matt’s bass that was a definite aaawwww moment, so sweet and they seemed very comfortable with each other, at least with their friends there. Nick a lovely little brother and I think Richard is a good choice for Zoë. I´m still not sure about Stuart, there´s something about him that makes me not trust him. Thank you for the new chapter -
I´ve never seen a baseball game, so I don´t know if it´s interesting to watch or not. But I do love football...even if this season my team has made it very hard to like them. They´ve played a boring game and we´ve lost too many matches so there probably won´t be trophies this year. There´s still a tiny chance to win Champions League.
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Button is so cute and no-one can help but love him. I hope there´s nothing really wrong with him and he´s just developing slowly.
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This was a sweet chapter. Everything seems to be going well now, Craig finally got a job, he has a lovely baby boy and a loving boyfriend and supportive family and friends.
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Such a sweet little story and I´m looking forward reading more about Button and his dad (dads?).
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I caught up with the story and I have no idea who is the gay player. Enjoyed the story very much.
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I felt so sorry for Mark Does he have any good memories of his childhood and of his father? He´s a grown man and he expected a slap from Gary for losing a fish. I mean it was a fish and those things happen when you´re fishing. What kind of father treats a child that way You have done a great job making me hate Mark´s father without even meeting him and he´s only been mentioned a few times. I know these chapters are supposed to be of certain length and I always think they are too short but luckily you post regularly. Looking forward reading more next week
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Lovely story but the ending made me cry
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Great start to your story, I thought about waiting til it´s complete but started to read already. I´m a fan of English football but I´m looking forward knowing more about Australian football, that´s something new for me
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This is a great idea. After reading the first chapter I can see it will be needed
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Wonderful chapter! I´m so glad Colby and Jake could talk about their problems and decide to be together Age difference may bring difficulties later but Colby seems very mature and level headed guy, so perhaps they´ll be ok.
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Thanks for sharing! There were some interesting facts.
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I agree with Graeme, that was a bit confusing behaviour from Phillip. Wonder what´s behind it. Why would he phone Josh and give him more time to spend with his friends? I´m sure it´ll be clear later. Glad they had a chance to have some fun together. Great chapter!
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Chapter 31 - And a Happy New Year
Suvitar commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 31 - And a Happy New Year
Such a beautiful love story and I really enjoyed reading it Great story and wonderful characters. Can´t believe I hadn´t read it earlier.
