I debated "liking" this chapter, as it isn't something you can like in the normal sense of the word.
I finally decided to click the button as an accolade to the powerful writing and stomach churning reality built with the words of a very talented writer.
I'm glad I'm not the only one who doesn't like Jon. I would like to take the cane I use to get around the house and use it on his empty little head. Brutally. For a long period of time.
Well, piffle! Searching around got me the answer to where the you're at, but it does not make me a happy camper. I hope real life stops chewing your underwear soon so we can continue reading!
I personally don't get why homophones are so hard, especially since you can get a definition in about two seconds online. Also, mnemonics help. Bare is something you don't want to be while wrestling a bear.
One that is currently driving me crazy is past/passed. The story I'm currently reading has them both consistently used incorrectly. Most often they are used where the other should be, i.e. "He moved passed the doorway" and "He past me the phone."
I wanted to read The Degan Incident again and found from Rob Colton's profile on another website that if was only available on GA and on premium. If you're not a member you can't get premium. After I joined I was delighted to find that Cia, Sasha Distan and Nephylim were here too.
I love that you posted the whole story at one time. I also hate that you posted the whole story at the same time. I was awake until 3 AM finishing it. As always well written and enjoyable. I look forward to more from Barron and Revi.