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Welcome to GA. Lots to read and enjoy, LitLover.

Was it hallucination--or the bunny?--thinking it was a good idea to screw around with Marks, psyche? Either way, Mark is in for a heck-of-a-time when he stops to think about it. Thanks for reading, Sasha.

So Sasha knocks it out of the park again. The Long Wait, in 'Lay Your Prompts On Me' was a special slice of delightful reading.

Ha-ha! You caught the drugs name, good. I was wondering if anyone was going to catch that. Thanks for reading, Valkyrie.

Thanks, Suvitar.

Thanks, Jo Ann.

Mark slapped the alarm off at the first buzzing. He was ready for his first marathon run of the year; he had been preparing to run it for months. After rubbing the sleep out of his eyes, he reached for the bed-side table-lamp and switched it on before swinging his legs over the side of the bed. He was confronted with the pill bottle and a glass of water, his first act each and every morning. These were new and only his fourth day of taking this particular anxiety med. It was one of the reasons f

A wonderful story you have written, Valkyrie. Honey bunny, since that is the only name you give your MC, certainly didn't have the best of childhood memories and he definitely screwed up at the marathon but that was nicely done with his stepping into church, and a realization.

As much as I like Born Wolf (I do, greatly), and I will comment in the appropriate place for that story later, it is the stories like All Over The Road and this one that shine oh-so-brightly for me. This was just a little gem of story. It was a deceptively simple tale of good friends that may be, might be something more, and to use one of your own lines from the story—But it was so much more than that. From the playful teasing in the opening dialogue on through the description of how the nickname came about and the rough-housing, showing off in the mall, and ice-cream and chocolate bears leaving tiny, sticky footprints, and on and etc. It's all a dance, a tease and a test of how far each one can move or should move before there's no pulling back—no way to misinterpret the play. Such a wonderful game these two are involved in and you capture it beautifully.

Nice imagery, Mann, and a smart pull back from the action. I liked it.

I hope your grandmother is recovering well.

Ouch! Indeed. Thank you for reading, Slytherin.

Glad you enjoyed it, Wayne. Thanks for the note.

Had to be something otherworldly in order to be preserved for so long. I'm glad I was able to surprise you. Thanks for reading, Valkyrie71.

Uhmm, do you have something happy? It was very nicely done, Valkyrie.

Who doesn't love a romance. Be mindful of punctuation, but all in all it is a nice prompt story.

"Hot damn, he’s gorgeous!" Max had never seen a man more strikingly masculine: long, dark, shoulder-length hair of loose ringlets fanned out from his head to lay upon the pillow on which his head rested, an unlined forehead sloped to heavy brows lined with thick, combed eye-brows, long lashes, broad nose – nostrils seemingly flaring in the act of sensual overload, and full, dusky, rose-colored lips. The neat, full beard couldn't hide his sharply defined jaw and strong chin, and added contrast to

Congratulations Thorn!!! A much deserved recognition.

That was stunningly effective and well performed.

Ha-ha. I'd have left the line too, as the other guy did.

A rather nice point of difference made at the end. Keep up the good work, Andrew.

Welcome to GA, Chris.

What a nice look into a scene of interaction between a father and his son that should be the norm rather than the exception.

Good to have the story back on, James. This chapter was intense, informing and exciting in turns. Great writing.

Don't be a stranger, Rico. Welcome to GA, John.