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You've done a nice review of Cassie's story, Cole. When her story ends you will have to come back and add to it.
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I cannot believe this is frowned upon. Nor can I believe that I am the first . . . Happy Birthday, Myr!!! Many, many happy returns to you, Sir!
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Hello, Musiclover and welcome to GA. This place should fill your reading habit just fine.
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You are gathering a fair number of characters together in the telling of this story. We probably haven't seen the end of the gathering of them yet, I'm thinking. But with you, that's good because one of your strengths is the capability of keeping your characters differentiated.
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Bobby makes a bet - Prompt 319
Ron commented on comicfan's story chapter in Bobby makes a bet - Prompt 319
I don't like this game! But I do like your story, Wayne! -
It is never too late . . . For posting, anyways. Good to know you exist, Bagnios. The ice is broken--post, post, post!
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Quite a scene you lay out for us readers. I am every so grateful it has never happened to me. Cute and fun, Valkyrie.
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Happy Birthday, NeverSurrender an advertisement for not growing old!!!
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I'm pegged at Grand Rapids, Fort Wayne or Cleveland. I grew up a 50 minute drive away from Cleveland. It was my answer to the question of what the space between the road and the sidewalk was called. I answered, tree lawn, and that got me. Drinking fountain matched the other cities but all firmly place me in the Great Lakes area of the Mid-west. Very clever. edit to add: This reminds me of the scenes in Blade Runner somewhat. I wonder if there were any facial tells when I answered the questions that might have further pinned me down.
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Welcome, Rishabh. There are stories to fit all of what you are looking to read here on GA.
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Thanks, Joann. Happy to be of service.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for saying so, Valkyrie.
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Oh, for crying out loud . . . It isn't the author that pigeon holes his/herself into a genre, it's the readers. If you truly write better in one one genre over another, it might be better to sick with your strength, but it shouldn't prevent you from experimenting, and if you're able to move freely, then why shouldn't you? Let your writing speak for itself, James. edit to add: it is all too often the readers, not necessarily always the readers.
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Hello, Mochiko. Glad to see you on board. Read to your content because no one will mind.
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Graeme - Happy Birthday To You, Sir and wishing you many, many more!
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"Can I talk to you?" Those were the first words he spoke to me. They were not our first contact. As spring days happen, it was to be the most spring like in recent memory. An early morning mist had dissipated leaving the sun to warm the air and greet the potent scent of white lilac. I planted the bushes in the small break between the sidewalk and the front of my townhouse, and for just such a day, it seemed, as I stood on my front stoop and breathed in the reward of them. The day was a del
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I thought it was site work that was causing the brief periods of inaccessibility. I have experienced the outage 3-4 times over the last couple of weeks. I'm using Comcast cable in Boston.
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I jumped over to refresh my memory of the story and ended up re-reading the whole thing. It was worth the time spent on the second go-round. That ought to tell you something. Premium Access - Go for it!
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Happy Birthday Mark
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Hello Jebekah. Old-ish - New-ish, comme ci comme ca, read to your hearts content.
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you THORN wishing you many and more happy returns!
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It will work smashingly until someone comes along, opens the door, and seeing nothing but the forest, locks the door and takes the silver key to the pawnshop. I liked the story, Louis.
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Valkyrie71 has already offered up a nice, short story for P-323. I don't want to be that young again.
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It's a shame these earlier stories aren't getting the attention they deserve from new readers. I found this sad and moving as could be. My heart, it aches after reading your words; it's all too plausible, too . . . horrendous. Every soul is diminished in this story in some way. Every. One.
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Lots of young men have been in Oliver's shoes. You captured the nervous behavior well, Valkyrie. A believable snippet.
