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  1. Buz

    Chapter 2

    The Boy's lives have changed for the way better. I have no issue with PESI. Look at Social media sites, etc. Information is power. Can we stop the progression? Do we want to?
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    Chapter 1

    Great start. I need a PESI in my life...
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    Chapter 7

    Like most everybody above, thanks again for another good read of a feel good type story. I had to binge read this story. Got behind for awhile...On to the next one...
  4. That was pure Class mate. Both the chapter and Vin's reaction to his first challenge. Although, I cannot believe Dirk did what he did (re the whole challenge scenario and that he actually did it). Anywho... So Alpha Scott has arrived. I know it is only a small thing, but real glad that Dirk and Kaplan had no qualms about sleeping on couches. Didn't get Vin's Dance but got next best thing via Alpha Scott's preview. We have confirmation that Vin's Dance is going to be truly epic! Alpha Scott's preview was awesome as, so... Can. Not. Wait. For. The. Next. Chapter. Period!
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    Chapter 2

    I really like when good people do good work, cause sometimes the returns are way awesome. So I am expecting a bushel of Way Awesome coming please.
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    Prologue

    The whole project is a renovation. As soon as I saw it I knew what I would do to the place. Every space/room changes in some way. Including the small backyard. But of course you'd get an Inspector through the property, do all the normal checks, etc before hand. That would be a fun project.
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    Chapter 1

    “That won’t be necessary, this’ll be a cash deal..." Wouldn't you love to be able use those words just once in your life? I couldn't imagine winning that much money and having everyone know. My goodness. Just imagine the people coming out of the woodwork for that. No thanks. Anonymous all the way please. Wins money, helps out Parents, moves to farm. What more could he want? The Farm sounds way awesome.
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    Prologue

    Right now, I would know exactly what I would do. Exactly. I say 'right now' because of the home that is available right now that I would love to have if I could, etc.
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    Chapter 10

    What is better than one Puppy? Yay! Ending fit the story very well. Very well indeed...
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    Chapter 9

    That was a perfect outcome. They are so lucky. Someone is definitely looking out for them...
  11. Buz

    Trouble Brewing

    Apart from the 'lack of stone protection during Fall', Southern sounds almost perfect. Well the lack of stone and the prescence of Kylara and F'drun. Bloody F'drun gets to raise his ugly head again...
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    Aftermath

    T'bor did not do well, but then. Neither did Kylara. As for F'drun, I'd hoped he was out of the picture so to speak. But he seems to be worming his way back? I would love to see a Dragon in the ocean. They seem to enjoy it so much.
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    A Memorable Day

    Humph. I get that torturing H'rek for a little longer would also torture D'gar, but H'rek got off too easily. I never said I was a good person or that I was mature in any way, except chronologically. It was good to see D'gar in charge.
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    Misunderstandings

    Really H'rek? Really! Okay. Lesh go!
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    In the Infirmary

    Poor Zurinth. And D'gar has nothing to worry about with H'rek.
  16. The word for today Children, is 'Conflicted'. "Was really hoping this next chapter was going to be about the Meeting and Mage Dance. Was so SO looking forward to it" VS "Yes! The Meeting and Mage Dance are still a chapter away. That's what I like, an Author who embraces the long term. More story for us to read" Now imagine a really ugly Happy Dance in your head. The Pack Meeting Place sounds stunning. It has water, fire, views, seats (comfort), the moon, beautiful sky, a lakefront, a dance floor (well. A stage), a moonlight lake, etc. Just perfect. What a stage for Vin's dance. Them beads is gonna get a workout. This is all so exciting. Caleb, Tasha and Lowe seem like a good Family/awesome people. I can't wait to get to know them. I am assuming Tasha is a Shifter too? If so, what type? Is Lowe a Cub, or? Thanks again for another awesome chapter... p.s. I like the sound of Lady Elaine Wilson. It seems charming and confidently apropos.
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    Chapter 10

    Christmas! But. That's ages away...there is still so much to know? What about the other Block People still trapped in sand? What about that flying thing? Why are the Block People being hunted when they seem so nice. Is the sand planet their original home? Etc, etc, etc... Okay, had to get the predictability out of the way. So, Horace has to, he just has to meet Billy and Will. It is gonna be so fun seeing Horace's reactions to everything and everyone. So cool. But Christmas? Thanks Geron. Stellar as always. Can't wait for our next visit. Be well, stay safe!
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    Chapter 9

    Can't wait to see who/what the Guests are, how they are doing, are they actual ghosts, why would they perish if they left the House, etc? Seems strange to not have any visits from/to/with any of their Mates. Really strange. Is there more to Moped than meets the eye? Lucky me doesn't have to wait for the next chapter...
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    Chapter 8

    Silly Peoples are gonna rue the day they ever thought illusionary powers were useless...
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    Chapter 8

    Moving along swimmingly...They would be lucky to end up on a Farm.
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    Chapter 7

    It ain't science. It's logic. Oh, and by the way. It's wunnerfull. Ya know. Like you're Full of Wunner!
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    Chapter 7

    We've all tried shit. Sometimes you win. Sometimes you fail. But due to teenage logic, you never stop trying Angie just failed this time. The funniest fail I can remember was when I pre-made my 'pillows-shaped-to-look-like-you're-asleep-in-your-bed-as-long-as they-don't-look-too-close' pile. Thought I'd go into the living room for a couple of minutes, then yawn and stretch and say, 'Good night' as if I was going to bed. As I'm sitting there waiting for my couple of minutes time to elapse, my Mother decides she wants to get comfortable on the couch she is on. Decides she wants to stretch out and so goes to get her a pillow. Of course, she has to choose my room to go into. Needless to say my ass stayed home that night. My Mother walked out with a smirk and a, 'Nice try...' I don't know why she chose my room when theirs is right across from mine. It was kinda funny cause Mum did get a shock when she initially walked into the darkened (but not dark) room.
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    Chapter 6

    Awww...I suppose I can see where Donnie is coming from. But I do think it was funny. Oh well. Just a wee glitch.
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    Chapter 7

    Everything is a matter of perspective, no? I think so, yes! Am I starting to feel bad for Magical Items? Especially ones with more sentience? Hhhmmm... Snobbery is funny ain't it? Seems Baby Baldric followed through on his, “I’ll be the best ‘whatever you just said’ ever!” I can't believe they thought Illusion was useless...
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    Chapter 8

    Awww...poor Kippy. That would have been horrendous for him. Good Ricky found Charlie and all, but I hope we go back to visit and get that part of the story too. Was that a dumb comment because, of course we will? So glad Last Pylon Person made it and didn't have to die to save everyone else.
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