I'm breaking the code. Since I know what comes next, here's what happens... In the next chapter Captain Proton flies in to deal with Cassidy, Rick, and his fellow morons.
Talk about a blood pressure raising end. That was masterful. 😂
All these stories where guys meet and within 24 hours are a couple drive me nuts. It's why I had CJ turn down Owen in Australia. Let's see if he plays hard to get once they're living next to each other.
I usually have side-by-side pictures of CJ and Owen as my wallpaper while working on a story. And I've shared many of those in the CJ forum discussion thread. You should follow it so you get notified when I post new stuff there.
Tom's wife will make several appearances in the future.
As for CJ, the chapter generated a lot of comments, but I think what he did fits in with a horny gay teen. I know I did similar stuff when I was that age.
Readers clamored for Ritchie to make an appearance and I decided to indulge them. The kid is definitely CJ's brother. As with Chipper, I wound up writing an entire story about him, but once he's in college.
Although Thierry wasn't who I used as inspiration for CJ, the look is somewhat similar. Google for Spanish actor Maxi Iglesias.
Inked is entirely different from the CJ stories except for having a bunch of hot men in it. Try it, I think you'll like it. And I shared images of all those men in the CJ forum thread which led to some drooling.
Unless Marc's parents die painfully on the way back to whatever hole they climbed out from, I'll be disappointed. They never worried about their own son but were willing to put him out on the street to supposedly benefit others? If he gives them money all he does is encourage them to try something similar in the future.
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Yeah, I doubt Google would recognize Mom. That was my mother's full name. She died while I was working on this story.
Her last name was de la Teja and in Latin countries, most women kept it and added the husband's at the end.
It seems to me the louder and more radical the comments the governor makes, the more he's liked by the unwashed masses. His anti-business positions (Disney and his failed attempt to outlaw private diversity expenditures for example) may create problems for him. We may be witnessing a new shift in party politics and I'm not sure how many of his views corporate America will be willing to accept.
I didn't want to fall into the meet & love trope, and I didn't think CJ was ready for anything serious. Sixteen, full of raging hormones, with a big city as his playground, are not a good combination for anything serious at this point.