Lead balloon ???
So myself and some others take off a week of multiple posts harassing you about cliffs and other things totally not related to the story and you think it is below par ?
I have to apologize, I have usually commented on the chapter by now, but living in a hotel for the past two weeks and having sparodic internet connection combined with a new job has my posting way down.
Now, for the chapter ......
Thanks for sharing first off . I'm liking the idea of Brian and Keith warming up to each others. Too bad Helen is being such a control freak (all just because she has to deal with 3 nuclear bombs, geesh), that she forced Brian to bed by himself.
Yeah I know that it was to get Brian, his dad, and Fel out of the way so Jim and her could hide the bombs, but what a party pooper.
I know you were looking for a certification of being cliffhanger free, but......
Isn't The Scar suffering with a ankle sprain and just north of the resort watching and waiting to see what happens? Isn't Jim and Helen about to take two of the bombs to a storage facility just north of the resort to hide them? I guess if The Scar can't come to the bombs, why not have Helen just take them to him .
Hence, maybe a bit more subtle, but most definitely a cliffhanger once again