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My AC picked the perfect timing to go on the fritz... of course it had to be on a record-setting day for heat. So I had a very uncomfortable night last night. Thank goodness I still had a fan I could use. And my bathroom sink is stopped up. Of course everything has to happen at once. Today will be another scorcher and record-setter. Hopefully it won't take too long to get a repair appointment set up.
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So Corey has a secret admirer... it will be interesting to see how this plays out with his social anxiety and how the paranormal fits in. I will admit the font used for the blog threw me off a bit initially. I don't think I could read an entire story in that font. This was a good first chapter, though. It drew me in and I'd like to know more about the characters and see where the story goes.
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It could have been a duck...
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I'm glad you're ok and virus-free
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I had a Zoom 'meeting' last night with a bunch of old college friends. It was really great to "see" them all and catch up. It's been 30 years since we all first met, but they're the kind of friends where we just pick up where we left off. It's been a long time since we've all seen each other in person, but we're planning a reunion when it's safe to travel again
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It's 86 here and supposed to be 90 tomorrow. We're supposed to set a record tomorrow. Thank goodness for AC!
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I wasn't even born yet...
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I've been working on my anthology story and playing Candy Crush and Solitaire.
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May CSR Discussion Day: Timber Pack Chronicles by Rob Colton
Valkyrie commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I like this thought I think I'd have to be a bear too Will information about these be posted here? I'd love to check them out- 6 comments
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I think you chose good place for it to end, with Peter killing Angela and not knowing what happened to Simon. It leaves room for a sequel. When I say the ending is rushed, I mean we could have seen more of Peter's hunt for Angela and the toll it took on him, along with the reactions of his friends and family. Jane disappeared, so there would have been buzz in the school and maybe a rift between Peter and the rest of his friends since he knew what happened to her. What you have here is good, but could have been expanded on a bit more. I still enjoyed the story, though, so please don't think I didn't like it. So has re-reading those chapters inspired your muse?
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May CSR Discussion Day: Timber Pack Chronicles by Rob Colton
Valkyrie commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Great interview! I'm excited for any new Rob stories, especially Timber Pack Chronicles- 6 comments
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The ending was definitely rushed. This novella could easily be expanded into a novel, should you ever feel the inclination. It's totally understandable to not want to revisit finished works, though. I don't tend to do that myself. I really like the outline you've presented for the sequel and would encourage you to finish it, provided your muse cooperates. Thank you for sharing it
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I turned my AC on today too. I loved Downton Abbey. It's a great show.
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I reflect the spot from my screen onto the wall and he goes nuts trying to get it. I'm doing a Zoom meeting with a bunch of old college friends in a little bit. I'm really looking forward to seeing and catching up with everyone
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*waves* My evening entertainment is watching Joker attack sunspots reflecting off my computer screen onto the wall.
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It's up to you how fast you'd like to post your stories. Some people post weekly, others post more frequently... building up hype and leaving teasers is a good way to draw people in. I'm sure you'll get readers no matter when you decide to post. I'm looking forward to reading it.
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Are your other novellas related to this story? I'd love to know more. What happened to Simon? Who made Angela? I feel bad for Jane It's sad Peter got his heart broken, but now he can focus on the future... hopefully with someone not wanting to become one of the undead
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It's been about 80 F here. And I totally rock a bikini.
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I have the real thing... not a cosplayer.
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Well that was unexpected! I wondered if Simon had something to do with everything going on, or if he was trying to get closer to Angela to kill her. Now I'm not sure what to think. Poor Jane. Poor Peter. So what are they all in for next?
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Yeah, well I have Thor, so no one else's compares to mine
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I do have the best herd, don't I? And yes, it was one of your collaborative Guardian Angel stories
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We all have our things And this bee is not tiny.
