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Thanks Valkyrie, This month has been hard to deal with so far, but I'll make it through. I do appreciate the support though. Have a sweet day. Lmoline

The Phrase by L. Moline Screaming the same phrase Hearing the same reply, Seeing the results are identical I wish I had never come to this place I wish I would have known what I know now I wish I hadn’t drunk so much, or my friends would have cut me off Now I lay here crying in pain Screaming the same phrase, Hearing the same reply Seeing the results are identical He told me you will never be free I will always be w

Thank you.

I thank you, Cyrus, for your kind words. I also thank you for letting us share in your art. From one artist to another you are appreciated.

I love this chapter, it's nice seeing how shy Wes and Chase are around each other. And of course more of the cutest kid alive in my mind.. Benny, you will never go wrong with him..

I love Adam as a new dad. i also love the new grandparents, however I'm still wondering about Anna. Since you brought in the psychologist A.K.A "the Shrink" I'm now wondering if Anna suffers from an undiagnosed mental illness. Even if that is the case she does not need to be in Rileys' life.. Now with the guys bringing in a new addition to the group of cute kids, when is Benny coming back.

Great beginnings to a lovely story, however I do hope the parental units get what's coming to them... lol.

OMG. I hope Brady will be OK. Also great chapter.

Thank you, Brian, for sending love, it is always nice to know someone cares. Now as for the poem it is a reflection of the emotions that had built up over the last couple of months. Some of the build up was do to my therapist bring up things that I was not and had not dealt with, hence the name of the poem. Although , I guess writing it was my way of surviving all over again. Thank you again for your support, Have a sweet day.. Laura

I have read and reread this story several times and still get caught up in action. It is a story of love on different levels, it also has comedy, action. For those who like a well rounded story this is one I wholeheartedly recommend.

Thanks BDANR, I appreciate it greatly. Yes this poem is very melancholic. It is a poem of wishing for a better life than I had. Thank you again and have a sweet day..Lmoline

Man, dude just won't take the hint.. I wonder if they will ever get it together?

Thank you, Gary. This piece was very hard to write, but at the same time it was a necessary release. You are right about life being a challenge and it's not easy to get through. As always thank you for your constant support. Have a sweet day. Lmoline

thank you RJ , I'm definitely going to try. I just realized that the first initials of your name are the same as my sons. Lol anyhow, thank you for reading and commenting on the poem, it means a lot to me. As always, Have a sweet day.. Lmoline

A powerful piece of storytelling. A beautiful but also heart wrenching display of true friendship.