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This story had me laughing! What a perfectly matched pair Aber and Kalvin turned out to be! I only wonder why Finch insisted on keeping so many mirrors? Must be very inconvenient cleaning up shards all the time! LOL

Oh, I hope mr Whitley doesn't turn out to be a bad guy too. He doesn't seem like one, but with Eric's luck... Could this be the town where he meets the life guard?

Once we had passed that line of intimacy, sharing our bed and bodies, there was no going back. Not that we wanted to. I woke up in the mornings feeling happier than I had in my entire life, wrapped in his arms. The nights and to be honest any time we could be alone were filled with exploration. After a year there wasn’t an inch of our bodies that we hadn’t thoroughly investigated and enjoyed. I could never tire of his hands on me, his lips against mine, his cock inside me taking me. He might hav

This was such a good story! I feel a bit sorry for Sam, that he didn't get to live a human life, but I hope he finds what he was looking for with Aaron. If this is significant for your current writing flow, then I'm really looking forward to your new story. Your writing was detailed and worked on without feeling heavy or deliberate. So nicely done!

I am eagerly awaiting the outcome of that stroll. But something tells me Jenson will bolt again. Just to tease us a bit more! LOL

That ending just makes me so worried about Felix. I guess Dorian is starting to realise that their relationship is getting deeper but he has some major hurdles to get past if he's to reach Felix' true self. That mask of faux confidence is disturbing.

I'm feeling sorry for Noel. Sure, he might end up with a perfect mate in the end but what a way to get one! How xan ge trust the feelings? Are they even his?

So much strength and weakness in that poem. The last part really gripped me, having lived with my guy for over 20 years. Fidelity is hard. It's a choice you make and need to stick with. It's sad to see someone squander their happiness for a cheap thrill and then have to live with the consequences. Some things are just impossible to undo.

Maybe I was a bit hard on this particular poem... It did feel so easy to write that I figured it was simple, but now in hindsight I think perhaps it opened a door to feelings, true feelings, I had hidden away. Perhaps you reading it saw something I couldn't. I'm actually very pleased but a bit confused that you get a man-on-man feeling. I have been writing some of that in my ongoing prompt story and I constantly fear I will end up writing women in men's bodies. So to achieve that feel is a confidence boost. At the same time, the poem is about me and I'm no man... So that makes me wonder if I'm too influenced by hanging out here? Or is it my masculine side peaking out? Thank you so much for reading and giving me valuable feedback in your review. These challenges make me work and think in a different way. Very good change of perspective on my writing.

Well, the guys didn't want to wait any longer. I'm Swedish and we don't have the same opinions about young people and sex as many other countries, so I didn't really think about George being so young until I was about to post. But you're right, he did mature early out of necessity. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Thank you! I felt it came so easy to me. Almost too easy, but apparently I managed to convey my feelings. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Oh, that was the cutest review ever! I actually can picture you sitting there, maybe wrapped in a warm scarf? It's funny, I hadn't thought of this memory as sad, but I guess he hurt me more than I realized... I wrote it so fast, I was afraid I was skimming through my feelings. But perhaps not Thank you for reviewing and reading out loud!

I'm with Marshall. Dustin gives me the heebie jeebies too...

Ha, ha! You're just as sweet as Levi and George! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Now that was an amazing ending! A belief based on that kind of love is one I could share. I'm glad Jason got a chance to reconnect with all of his friends and that he got to share his new insight with everyone even if it wasn't to everyone's liking. Thank you for sharing your story! I learned a lot about this world I had almost no prior knowledge of. Your characters shone a light on different aspects of love and honor, which was very interesting.

I'm glad I don't suffer from claustrophobia or this would have been hard to read. What hell to sit there and not know what is going to happen! What twisted game is going on there? I'll look forward to a new chapter from your new flame free computer.

I first saw your body, beauty and strength Perfection like that is rare to behold As water caressed you length after length My shyness in check, I dared to be bold Like satellites in orbit we drew near Our own little universe, that freezing pool All pretense and excuse getting so sheer Hours spent talking, teenage me acting cool Naive obsession with an older man Who lied words of love in a whispered voice Relieving boredom was your sordid plan Not strong enough to make another

Somehow, I just never expected this. This change happening between us. I couldn’t figure out what it was, just knew that I was having more and more difficulty keeping my inappropriate feelings for myself. Whenever I was in the same room as George, I wanted to touch him and be close to him. Sometimes, when the nights got cold, he would sneak into my bed to share my warmth. I used to lie there in the dark, listening to his breathing and fantasize about being allowed to touch him. My feelings fille

That was very dramatic! As a mom, I got all teary eyed from reading about mom and baby. I still hope Stefan can find some place to stay for a while, but he won't trust anyone.

Hm... Did Jenson lose control and hurt a lover way back when? Very curious about that guy. Merrick isn't exactly young anymore. He might be sweet, but I bet it's a really spicy sweetness. Just what a vampire would like.

Uh-oh! What does Chris want?

So glad to see more of this story! Nice to see Morgan with a little spark in him again. Having something new to live for or take an interest in is what he needs. Will Beck be something new too? I guess we'll see!

I laughed when I read your review! I've been reading this poem out loud so many times to try and get it right. It turned out a bit difficult, so I'm glad you didn't give up on it. My poor ballade could use some TLC, since I was too impatient with it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

The freedom of form is a bit deceptive. Sure, a lot of the structure is for the writer to decide, but when you have so many rhymes it's almost impossible to get out of a chosen path and find a better way to express a thought. If you try, you have to redo the entire thing. With 14 rhymes, that's tough! You get pot committed, so to say. So it didn't turn out quite as I expected. I wanted to convey an idea and I'm not sure people will get it. That said, I enjoyed the challenge a lot. Now, the sonnet prompt seems like a breeze... LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!