Poor Stefan! What a complete asshole for a father! I hope things will eventually start to look up for him and that he makes a friend or two. He needs to get out of that house too. I will follow his story and keep my fingers crossed for him.
Besides, how can I not get drawn in to a story with a Swedish connection...?
Are you doing this to me on purpose?!? When am I supposed to take care of my real life...?
JK. But this may or may not have altered my plans for the weekend...
They finally could connect and talk for real! Sweet! And Wyatt ready to take Eddie in. That must be such a relief for Bryan.
Looking forward to a wedding...(?) LOL
Oh, this has a definite fairytale feel to it. I was thinking Beauty and the Beast, but with a few twists. I'm very curious about the Master, the townsfolk and of course Greg. So many ideas whirling around in my brain...
Poor Nelson! I so hope he gets his slow dance with a kiss at the prom! I'm sure if Eric just has some time to think things through, he'll want that too.
Thank you for sharing your and Mike's story so far! Very moving and a real testament to the amazing power of love. You found yourself a 'Tim whisperer' it seems. I'm sure you give just as much back to him. The love you have for him is just pouring out of your words.
And don't worry about commas! I didn't notice, not with a story such as this. That could of course be because I myself use them mostly for decoration...
Very nice story! Your guys were so cute, getting closer and closer. I'm glad he dared to kiss finally! I can totally relate to the writing itself thing. Weird but wonderful, isn't it? And fun!
I hope you write more, about these two or something else. You have an easy flow to your writing that is very appealing.
Ha, ha! As long as I make you drool some more I'm happy! Increased hotness...? Could be fun! I just need to sneak a little plot in there somehow. You could use the drool to extinguish the flames...
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I'm trying to not end up in bed all the time, but hey! They're in that new love phase. I'm planning to add more actual story. Unless they succeed in seducing me again...
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Well, it's your irresistible prompts that spark these outbursts of creativity! We'll see when the next chapter demands to be written.
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My romantic side keeps taking over. So the quick and dirty was more the fact that I wrote it in a flash and didn't have the patience to let it rest over night.
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”What did he just say?” I thought to myself.
I couldn’t believe my ears and just stared at him. “You did what?!”
From his fidgeting and refusal to meet my eyes, I realized I was perhaps overreacting and being a bit too harsh.
“Just tell me what happened…” I tried to soften my approach to get him to open up.
“The phone rang. I thought it was you…” He snuck a peak at me trying to gauge my reaction. “You wanting something, so I just answered.” He lowered his eyes, looking like he had been hur
You captured the irrational (but understandable) ways trauma can manifest itself. Just a cereal, but at the same time so associated with his horrible experiences. Good to see him daring to face his fears.
Sweet, gentle Eddie! Not so clueless after all. Poor Bryan feeling all that guilt, both for not getting the clues right now and also for missing what was happening when they were young. And yes, MD is probably better off dead...
It seems we both went melancholy with this prompt. Maybe autumn does that. Beautiful how you weaved the passing of seasons with the years going by in your life.
And you apparently got a head start on sonnets! I'm still scared of prompt no 9...
So the secret just keeps spreading. What will Jason do? If he talks to Chris, he might not report them, but otherwise I think the content of that letter may be to mych for Jason to take.
This story is such a fascinating insight into this world that I know nothing about. It feels so wrong g and a bit disturbing that the elders and sisters are supposed to police each other. I get sort of sn uncomfortable feeling in the pit of my stomach.
And the backpack/shoulder bag thing? I was like "What...?" Maybe that's a question for the forum thread.
Yes, it sort of turned into something else, about loss but with a hope for reconnection. It's sometimes hard when things change...
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