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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    For those Nathan fans, yes, it would seem he has been permanently 'friend-zoned'. Thank you for your lovely comments and all of your support, Dugh
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    Chapter 16

    I think friends can give you great insight, but the good thing about Liam is he takes advice, but he tries to make his own choices He knows he wants to be treated a certain way by Alek, and talks with friends help him confirm that belief. Thank you for your comment and your support, JP
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    Chapter 16

    I might have too, but Liam needs to move in his own time, or he's going to always be second guessing himself. Thank you for your comment and your support, Wesley
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    Chapter 16

    LOL sometimes a little drama can be a good thing, right? Thank you for your comment and support, Hlasota
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    Darkness and Sleep

    I hate to 'like' these because they verbalize a great deal of pain, both mental and physical, but i did 'like' them because you conveyed that pain so effectively in each of these poems. My my favorite line, I think, is "and the soul whispers to the heart, “its ok, tomorrow we try again”."
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    Attraction

    Tasty and spicy . Perfect for a hot summer's night
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    Flirtation

    I think I'll go with'Rave'. I'm really enjoying this collection, Parker
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    Selection

    Definitely spicy Very nice, Parker
  9. These are filled with pain, but I sense hope, and determination too. "If you want a true friend. There’s none better to find" I couldn't agree more. I count myself fortunate to be considered your friend. I'm thrilled to see you back and as you've stated so well, digging out of your hole.
  10. "But where is my fury. Where is my fire." It will come back.. with each new word you write, and new story you tell, that fire will come back
  11. Your shoulders have always been wide enough for the world to lean on. It's time for you to lean on your friends. I'll always be here for you, my dear friend. Your health and wellbeing are the most important thing.
  12. Happy Birthday, Puppi! (to feed the addiction )
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    Chapter 21

    Chapter 21 As Liam watched Alek approach his father, he debated whether to step out of the truck, or if that would just make the brewing situation more volatile. Deciding not to add any stress, he stayed put and waited. “Dad?” Alek said, approaching the older man. “What are you doing here?” “Your mother asked me to invite you for dinner tonight.” “She did?” “You have not visited her for weeks, Aleksei. You’re breaking her heart.” Although Liam couldn’t hea
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    Love

    I liked all of these, but I think the one I loved was #4. It describes a lasting and abiding love perfectly. In the beginning it's shiny and new, over time it begins to show signs of wear, but is still keeps you strong.. finally, after many years, it may be tarnished, and brittle, but is still enough to see you through. Simply lovely, Moggy.
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    Chapter 7 We Pen

    These were all wonderful in their own way. My favourite lines were: "I won't give up I'll keep on my quest". I admire the strength of people who don't give up, even in the face of pain and adversity, and just keep soldiering on until the get what they're striving for.
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    Fallout

    Breakups are always hard on everyone, and being asked to choose sides doesn't make things easier.
  17. Happy Birthday, Val!!!
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    i remember you

    This was a wonderful tribute to all of the lives lost that day, tim. A world without hate... it would be a beautiful place.
  19. Just thought i'd peek in and take a look around and this is one of the first thing I see So much math! brain short circuiting....
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    Time to Go?

    All of these describe a loss of some sort, and the pain with each is palpable with each line. I think though that #2 is almost a loss with a full heart, similar to what a parent might feel when they send their kids out into the world to begin their adult lives.
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    Musings

    Hahaha this was great!
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    Chapter 20

    I promise to catch up on the rest of the reviews, but this? This was amazing
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    Mac's Task

    It's hard to get past that initial awkwardness, even if you're alone, but once it does your mind can let go. Very well descibed, Drew
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    Yoga

    I think what I love most about these characters is how realistic their relationship is. They're not twenty, thirty or even forty anymore, so there are physical challenges to contend with. i love that you don't shy away from those issues, and incorporate them. Saying goodbye would be hard, but both men have a supportive partner to help them get through and mend any remaing breaks in their hearts. I get David's concern about the guilt, especially for Maurice who'd only been with Eric. Becoming physical with someone is a huge step.. and can cause memories of your previous partner to surface. It didn't happen here, but it was a real possibility. Oh and I also adored David's protectiveness. Sometimes we all need someone looking out to make sure we're taking care of ourselves.
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    Chapter 44

    I was so happy to see this update in my notifications! I've missed these guys. Although I'm sad to see the story end you've left in a great place. Marjorie will always be Marjorie, but I admit I breathed a sigh of relief that she didn't do something to ruin the wedding. Greaf last chapter
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