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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    Thank you You have to remember that right now its around 2 months after the wedding. Corey's had time to mull over what his friends have told him. I don't know if Corey is ready to be Jason's buddy, but he is trying to let the anger and bitterness go. Thank you for your review and your support, Lux
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    Haha well I have heard that squirrels can be dangerous I love that you picked up on that line. I love David's character... he's a sweet, gentle mountain of a man, and he does see Pierre as a treasure. He doesn't hate Jason because, to him, Jason lost something precious. Thank you for your review and your support, B.
  3. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    There might be a little bit of something working to throw these two into the same place at the same time. Kingston is also a fairly small city, so running into each other was inevitable. I'm so glad you like Jason now. He has grown up and matured a lot from the guy in the prologue. I have to admit I like him too Thank you for your review and your constant support, Gary.
  4. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    I don't think there will be a worry about them taking things slow. It's taken them almost two months since the wedding for them to get to this point. Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi.
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    I was impressed that Corey kept his temper myself. To be honest, that scene wasn't exactly as I'd envisioned it in my story outline. The characters changed it on me I think Corey is trying to take his friends' advice. Thank you for your review and your support, Parker
  6. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    Right now Jason just wants some of the friendship he used to have with Corey back. I don't think anything romantic is even on his radar... or Corey's for that matter. As for Corey avoiding the gym when he thinks Jason might be there? There might be a good chance of that. Although Corey might be trying, he does have a lot of years of issues to get over. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Corey is definitely a free man now Thank you for your review and your support, tim.
  8. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    With Drew and Jason, you have to remember that they've been living apart now, essentially since that summer. As far as he knows, his brother is still in that party life. Believe me, before the engagement announcement, there would have been some skepticism from the family about Drew having a serious girlfriend. As I mentioned in my reply to Drew, Zach sees Corey as a bit of a shiny toy. He's had him for a while, so the newness was wearing off. There are also very few gay men in and around the city where they live now, so Zach hasn't seen Corey interact on a personal level with very many men. Corey and Drew love each other and are best friends, it rattled Zach to see someone he thought wanted his toy. Was it a shitty attitude to have? Yes. I know someone like Zach and he acted almost exactly like this when his girlfriend's male friend paid her any attention. Otherwise, he practically ignored her. Thank you for your review and your support, Spikey
  9. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    haha yeah, I can see Perri and Liz ganging up on Drew when they visit each other... might be a good prompt chapter About Zach... he's actually loosely based on someone I know. The guy like to ignore his 'toys' until someone else wanted to play with them. In my mind, his reaction was less based on jealousy from affection, as possessiveness. Thank you for your review and your support, Drew
  10. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    Chapter 6 Jason dropped Drew and his new sister-in-law off at the airport to catch their flight for their honeymoon. He gave each of them a hug, and waved as the happy couple joined the crowd in line for security. As he watched his little brother take his wife’s hand and kiss her on her cheek, he smiled. It was still hard to believe his baby brother was actually married. The ceremony had been nice, and thankfully short. The reception… had been interesting. <><><>
  11. LitLover

    Chapter 17

    Bahaha did not see that coming. It was really good to see Daniel come out of his shell a little and join his brother on stage. I think Carlos is becoming more and more smitten with the young man
  12. I love the relationship that these two brothers have. They're so close and both so protective of each other.. and they also know how to rile each other up (well Rob does lol). I have to wonder if Rob is going to ask Trevor to the prom though, given his stance on not leading someone on.
  13. This chapter makes me happy, but sad at the same time. It's great that Kellar finally has a friend in Tobyn, but it seems like he may gain a community soon, only to have to watch some of them die. I hope he can help the girl, but if he can there is going to be a lot of pressure on him to save the entire pack (mostly from himself). I too hope that Fendral's children are still alive, and maybe just can't communicate for some reason. I really like the running and playing to two men did in this chapter. Wolves are pack animals and play is a big part of their bonding. Both of these men will be better for it, regardless of where their relationship leads. Another great chapter, Gary! Next one please.
  14. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    haha it would make some weddings more interesting, wouldn't it? Thank you for your review and your support, Robert.
  15. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    You know, I can see David proposing like that. He is such a big old romantic. Although, there is something to be said for Pierre deciding to take the bull by the horns so to speak... since he was the one who started the pursuit before they started dating. thank you for your review, and your support, B.
  16. It was hard to do such a wonderful story justice in only a few paragraphs. You deserved some recognition of your own for your hard work and dedication to putting out such wonderful stories and characters.
  17. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Well they don't live in a very big city, so the chances of running into each other are relatively high. The question is what will happen when it finally happens? Thank you for your review and your support, Reader.
  18. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    That was a lovely thing for you to say, Dugh. Thank you for your review and your support.
  19. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    The wedding was a lot of fun to write... and so is the friendship between the three guys. If Pierre and David do end up marrying, I wonder who would pop the question? Thank you for your review and your support, jaysalmn.
  20. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    I love that you pointed out Drew's comment about Jason being a sore spot for Corey. I don't think Corey realized until that moment, how much bitterness and anger he carried around and displayed. It was important for Corey to hear. Even if you don't allow someone back into your life, you don't have to carry around your anger towards them. And yes, he did laugh at the speech As for Zach cheating? Anything is possible? Who knows why some people act like jerks. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim
  21. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    I enjoyed writing about the toast. It was a fun scene to picture in my head. Pierre and David are a sweet couple, even though Pierre is much more exuberant than his gentle giant. Corey concentrating on being the best person he can be. I like that. Thank you for your review and your support, Def
  22. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Thank you, Onim Corey did throw out the garbage... in the dramatic style Drew was teasing him about. As for forgiving Jason? Only time will tell. Thank you for your review and your support
  23. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Haha, yes, on to the dancing. I believe Corey has a dance claimed by the bride. thank you for your review and your support, Puppi
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Zach was an ass, and it was well past time for Corey to give him the boot. It's unfortunate it had to happen on such a public stage. Jason did seem angry, and I think it would have been hard for him to hear what Corey said, but he knows this wasn't directed at him. Except for seeing Jason heading over, Corey was so preoccupied with Zach he didn't really register Jason's presence at all. Thank you for your review and for all of your constant support, Gary.
  25. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Zach might not have minded, but as an assistant coach of a small city university, I doubt he could afford Jason's old apartment. lol Although Corey's mom wasn't in the same room when all of this went down, she did have a reaction to everything. That will be discussed more in a later chapter. Thank you for your review and your support, Parker
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