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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    lol yes it would appear that you're one of the lone anti-Jason holdouts. It is great to get a different perspective on Jason though and see where the holes are in the story. What is in my head is more detailed where Jason is concerned. In my head, Jason did try to find Corey and Pierre at certain points, but Drew refused to talk about Corey or Pierre with him. After being shut down he stopped trying. I mentioned in an earlier chapter that Drew wouldn't talk to Jason about his friends but I obviously wasn't clear on this point and will have to think about going back and adding more detail. I thank you for that Thank you for your review and your support jaysalmn. I really do appreciate your thoughts.
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    Deciding if it's worth risking a friendship they both missed for the last eight years is going to be tough. I think they may be getting closer to at least having an honest debate with themselves. Thank the for your review and your support, Puppi
  3. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    Haha no, I would say that Corey is definitely NOT immune to Jason. Jason and Corey do need to get on the same page, but at least they're reading from the same book now Thank you for your review and your support, Def
  4. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    Drew has forgiven Jason for what happened with Pierre, but that doesn't mean it would make it easy for him to trust the guy with his heart, right? Thank you for your review and your support, BuffyWillow
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    I believe you're right and Corey is seeing Jason in a new light... but also with the good things he remembered from when they were younger. Forgiving usually does help the one who forgives, and I think Jason feels lighter now that he's let some of his anger and resentment go. Thank you for your review and all of you support, Gary.
  6. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    I think Jason realizes how big of a chasm he'd have to cross for Corey to ever contemplate a relationship with him, and that's why he doesn't want Corey to know about his attraction. He feels like Corey's trust is fragile. The question is, how fragile is it, really? Thank you for your review and your support, Parker.
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    haha well it was a party thrown by a client... the jockstrap might not have been appropriate Thank you for your review and your support, B.
  8. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    I think Jason and Corey are both so worried about the other's reaction that they don't notice the attention THEY are receiving. We'll have to see what Corey does with the knowledge that his rekindled crush isn't that much of a secret. Thank you for your review and your support, Dr.P.
  9. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    Their friendship was an important part of their lives. More important than they probably realized at the time. And yes, trust is key with these two. Thank you for your review and your support, Dugh
  10. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    Thank you, Robert. I really appreciate the support, and your kind words.
  11. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    lol well I've found people outside of the situation seem to notice things the people involved don't, and I think Kendra had some pretty decent instincts about Corey. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim.
  12. LitLover

    Chapter 11

    Chapter 11 Corey squinted in the bright sunlight. Although there wasn’t a cloud in the sky, there was a definite chill in the air, heralding the coming of winter. Still, it was a nice Halloween day for the kids he knew would be swarming the neighbourhood at any time. His phone buzzed, and pulling it out of his pocket, he grinned when he saw a text message from Jason. “I’ll be there at 9. You’d better be wearing it!” “Yeah, yeah. I said I would… pushy bastard.” He rolled his eyes an
  13. I'm so relieved that Kellar was able to save Adelin.. not only for Adelin's sake, but because it would have likely torn Kellar up inside to lose the girl. I know that he won't be able to heal everyone he tries to help, but losing a 'patient' so early into his (can you say healing career?) might have made him question himself and his abilities. I was wondering the same thing as a few other reviewers... did it have to be Tobyn's energy specifically, or could Kellar have drawn on anyone's energy? I suspect there may be a conversation about that at some point. although, would Keller really know or was his request instinctual? Although we think that Kellar and Tobyn's feelings for each other are pretty obvious I wonder if Tilly would notice? Her attention was pretty squarely on her sister, so I'm not entirely sure she would have noticed if Tobyn and Kellar kissed, much less held hands. We'll just have to wait for future chapters to see what, if anything, she observes between them. Now that Kellar has healed Adelin is he going to try to leave and save himself from heartache? I get why he would want to leave, but I just don't think the healer in him will allow him to leave this pack until he figures out this malaise. I know Tobyn wants to do the right thing by his pack, but his attraction, and apparently his need to be close to Kellar, is going to make it really hard for either man to walk away from each other. Wonderful chapter, Gary. Eagerly awaiting the next one!
  14. Beautiful, tim... just beautiful
  15. I think the parents are handling this relationship well. Having teenagers myself, I understand the desire to pretend your kids are virginal until they're married, but it's unrealistic. By giving the boys a little bit of trust, it encourages them to act more responsibly and to being open with communication... at least it will with Nelson and Eric. Oh and I've never known that gelato could be so hot!
  16. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    lol Jason trying to keep it together could become interesting. Whether or not Corey noticed, or will notice, Jason's reactions is an interesting question... how do you think he would react if he did notice? Thank you for your review and your support, Def.
  17. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    I feel kind of bad for Jason myself. Thank you for your review and your support, tim.
  18. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    I would guess that Zach was always kind of a jerk, but is acting even worse now... especially if he did notice the attention Jason was giving Corey. As for the crush? Thank you for your review and your support, Lisa.
  19. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    I don't think Corey is naive or overly forgiving when it comes to Zach, I just don't think he cares (or ever really cared) about the guy, so it's easy to dismiss him. Remember... when Zach shoved him, he did fight back. After the slide, he wasn't hurt (luckily) and that play won them the game. For him it was no harm done, and their team won, so he was willing to let it go for the sake of peace. You're right, if Jason does start to act strangely, Corey will likely notice... who knows what he'd make of that behaviour. Thank you for your review and your continued support, Tim.
  20. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    I think blaming this on 'not getting laid' in a while is a convenient explanation for Jason. He might not want to examine those potentially disastrous (in his mind) attraction to his friend. Corey notices the protectiveness (eg at the bar), and he hasn't seemed overly bothered by it, but that might also be because Jason has tried to let Corey deal with Zach on his own terms. Thank you for your review and your support, spikey. Oh and that song is still stuck in my head!
  21. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    Thank you Kit.
  22. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    hehehe well feelings wasn't the first thing that came to mind, I must admit I think Jason realizes he has to tread carefully, but he's also going to have to figure out how to trust himself and his instincts where Corey is concerned. Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi.
  23. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    I think Jason wants to believe his reaction is just because he's missing sex. Anything else, in his mind, would complicate things, and potentially send Corey out of his life again. Corey's reaction would be interesting to know though I wouldn't be surprised if a lot more people noticed Jason's
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    I think Jason is so worried about Corey's reaction that he's hoping Corey didn't notice. I think if Zach persists you're not going to have to worry wait for him to be thrown against a wall or something. I think Jason's lost his patience with the guy. Thank you for another great review and all of your support, Gary.
  25. LitLover

    Chapter 10

    Thank you, Lux. I think you;re right, Jason is going to have a struggle ahead of him. Thank you for your review and your support.
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