LitLover

There is so much I enjoyed about this chapter. I love the connection between Jay and Mikey and the garage sex was really sweet and hot at the same time. They are such a great couple. Everything they do seems to be aimed at wanting the other one to be happy and satisfied. I'm relieved that Cal was able to get past his hurt and really start to remember and see what Benny's life had been like in school. Cal is lonely but he seems to have realized just how lonely Benny must have been too. They're already very sweet together. Cal's grandmother was very sweet. You can see how much she loves Cal. I wonder what Cal said to her though since she seemed to already know who Benny was. Maybe Callie spoke of him highly...and often?

This chapter makes me happy. You have really given Rob a lot more depth than simply an overprotective jock here. He is thoughtful and aware of his actions and realizes that joining the GSA could potentially mean overshadowing Eric. I already liked Rob but this chapter made me really respect him too.

You really pack a lot of emotional punch in all of your writing and this poem is not exception. I think most of us have been there at least once. The realization that you are the only one invested in a relationship can be a painful one.

That was such a beautiful chapter Gary! I loved the happy tears and that proposing was motivation for Michael to work hard to heal. My heart melted when he said he just couldn't wait another day to propose. Kendall saying that he would never have found the perfect ring, because the perfect ring was the one that Michael had already chosen was such a beautiful thing for him to say. (How many more times can I say "beautiful" in relation to this chapter ) AND Janine and Lanny are finally together!! Yay!! I am so happy for them and I loved Kendall's reaction I swear, he and Michael are becoming relationship good luck charms!

Damn poor Cal. He was really hurting and Benny walking away from him didn't do anything good for his depression. Even if they weren't dating he really could have used a friend during these past few months. I feel badly for Benny, knowing that people are scared of his size, but he's right...Cal didn't treat him like everyone else yet he treated Cal like he would everyone else at school. That wasn't fair to Cal. I like Linda's perspective. She is very perceptive and she is honest with herself..especially when she admits that she probably wouldn't be so worried about Jay and Miles if she was distracted with a boyfriend. That is a very mature and honest view for someone to have of themselves and not something most teenagers are able to do. Maybe now Cal and Benny can start on a road to friends and boyfriends. Maybe Jay and Mikey's friends group is expanding? There might be safety in numbers.

I loved this. The confusion..the memory loss..flashes of images...a shy, hesitant vampire with a broken heart. I finished the chapter wanting to know more...wanting to know about George...wanting to know what happens to these two men. I hope you think about expanding this story.

Wow Dillon took the news a lot better than I expected. He is right...he needs to leave the planet or he and the baby are going to be test subjects in some secret facility somewhere.

I had suspected this might be what was going on. I wonder what Dillons's reaction is going to be. Is this something unknown to Lor's people as well? I knew Lor's reaction to seeing Dillon hurt was going to be a furious one and he didn't disappoint

Lor is going to be furious when he sees that Dillon was attacked! Nice cliffhanger by they way! I'll forgive it since you post so often

I loved these. They really capture the emotion as well as the reality of a relationship...especially the busy mornings with kids (even if that was several years ago for me lol)

that was beautiful Gary! I agree wholeheartedly. I smile with, cry with, worry about, commiserate with, cheer for and rejoice with many wonderful people here. That sounds like friendship to me. Thank you for knowing how to put those feelings into words. You do have a gift

Dillon's father is a real piece of work. Harry is no winner either. Funny thing is I think that Harry wanted Dillon for himself, which is ironic since the group he is with detests gay men.

Finally got caught up on all of the chapters. Holidays are great but make it tough to follow the stories I like to read Hmmm I think Harry seems like the most obvious person who could be involved in this, but that almost seems too easy. I guess we will have to wait to see if the investigation turns up any more information.

I am smiling and misty eyed at the same time after reading this chapter. It's amazing how you can consistently do that to me. M & K's love is so beautiful because it took so much for them to get to this point. They do truly appreciate what they have with each other. Sometimes people lose that. I don't think they will. Michael is such a big softie. First the tree and then those ornaments (that was where the misty eyes came in ) I was sad for Jeremy but I have a feeling that Kendall won't rest until his friend finds some happiness of his own. That is just who Kendall is. He wants everyone to have the kind of love he has.

The funeral was sad, but Adriano's speech was beautiful in its simplicity. Everyone seems to be settling in to their lives again. And Tommy may get a chance to go that with his kids in his life. I also think it will be nice for the cousins to get to know each other. Bradley especially could benefit from CJ's experience having two dads. It's also nice to have a friend who just understands. I would say that I can't believe Chil lied about sleeping with Brett and Cesar but really nothing surprises me about him

I wonder what research Lor did to think that pushing someone up against a wall was courtship I'm happy he stopped when he did because that would be a terrible way for them to start off. Now at least Dillon is only a little confused and mostly bemused.

I can understand Dillon's trepidation. He knows essentially nothing about these aliens and he finds himself attracted to one and he doesn't know if it is male or female. That has to be disconcerting. It will be interesting to see more interaction between them....I am trying to get a picture of what Lor looks like

So Lor has found his mate? I can see there being a lot to work out. Are they physically compatible, where would they live, etc? Looking forward to the next chapter

I can't believe I forgot to review this chapter I love Kendall. He is an incredibley kind person. He has so much patience. I don't know if I could have been as understanding or as calm. Michael knows he can trust Kendall but he must have been a wreck waiting for them to get back. I still don't trust the change in Candy to be permanent but maybe they can at least work on being civil. I loved how Michael and Kendall needed to reconnect physically with a hug and didn't care who was in the room.

Really good first chapter Caz. I like the premise. I can't wait to see where you take this

They're a lot of fun to watch.

OK I recognize Aamir Khan, Shah Ruhk Khan Is that Salman Khan and Ranveer Singh too? LOL actually I did haha I am a big Aamir fan...but I do think Imran is a cutie

Here's some Imran just for you Drew OMG I didn't even recognize him! Guess I wasn't looking at his face

Very, very nice Victor I do love Roshan...can we invite him too?

It looks like CJ might be getting some friends his age soon I think it would be great for Tommy's son to meet CJ and hear from someone his own age how good of a man his dad is, especially after all of the lies he's probably heard from his grandfather over the years. I loved that Chip's kids made contact with Doc and expressed their disgust with their father's behaviour. I hope that maybe Chip will learn something this time around, but honestly, I am not holding my breath since he ran from Washington with his tail between his legs (didn't he do the same with his wife when he was caught cheating on her?)