Jason Rimbaud

By the time class was over, Tyler’s mood somehow shifted even darker. He would need a lot of help if he would have even the slightest chance of passing the hardest class at Glacier Bay High. As far as he could remember, he had never met Professor Robinson before but there was something familiar about the man. Maybe it was his voice or the way he held the marker as he wrote on the whiteboard. Whatever it was, that familiarity nagged at the corner of his mind. Maybe he had met the man at one

I see by your profile that you are new to GA, so I'll allow you some wiggle room in the absurdity of your above statement. You have yet discovered the silliness that permeates nearly everything I do. I will give you down to earth, I'm self aware enough to know that I'm not so humble. But it's humbling to hear that you believe otherwise. . Self depreciation is the best tool to use because online no one can see my twinkling eyes or the smirk that is plastered on my face. And due to the fact I'm blunt at times, I use that to clue the reader that I am not being serious or mean in my reply. I am not formally educated, true, I do not know the rules of grammar nor do I really care to learn the ends and outs. You were right(write) when you said I do care about learning. And I completely agree with your explanation of changing was to is. And more importantly I understood your explanation However, Devin disagrees with you. 🤪 Readers like you, if I was a talented writer I would have made it clear, readers like you who know more about the technical side of writing scare me. Which is pretty much everyone on this site. Going back to my earlier statement, I'm self aware to realize I am not humble. My fear with writing is this technical side only, I don't worry if the story is good, or if the characters are amusing, I think my writing speaks for itself in that regard. I just don't want to be exposed as a poor writer. Which is why I rely on other people to clean up my incomplete sentences and dangling participles. I also love to end sentences with though or to. I also know that is not proper but I like to. I love to argue/debate the ins and outs of nearly everything. When I find someone who stands up and says what they mean in a wonderful way, I gravitate towards them. Praises don't help me, pointing out that was should have been an is, helps in understanding structure. Now when I make that mistake, I'll do so knowing I am wrong. It's the little things I find pleasure in. (did it again) And on another story, me and another person went off about wind direction and how fast could a cloud get from here to there, it was amazing completely pointless so I understand the enjoyment of doing deep dives with as something as silly as one character shoving a marker up their ass. Welcome to GA and as long as you can put up with my silliness and absurdist behavior, we shall get along fine.

I have all the patience that I want at any given time. I do love your story and I no longer say the "W" wolf word, I am only using Shifter in your honor. See you in the next chaps

Seems like we are finally getting some answers, though I am sad that Ray did not display his whore(ish) nature with the re-alived hero in front of the villains. But the day(night) is still young and who knows what mischief our pawn could make before night(dawn). And on a side note, I'm only asking for a friend, is Big Paws a euphemism for fangs? Like, wow grandmother, what big teeth you have? Can't wait to see our hero's fangs! I'm enjoying this immensely. J

Thank you for your comment. You are the kind of reader that keeps me up at night, which is basically any reader on this site. I never graduated High School and my knowledge of writing is vast enough to fit in a thimble a child might wear to protect their tiny fingers from the needle. I have to look up what possessive determiners meant and after reading the definition and then looking at the examples provided, I still don't really understand what that means. That being said, I can tell you the context in which that statement was made. Devin wasn't referring to said marker up his personal butt, but in a sweeping broad statement that anyone that shoved a marker up their ass would be kind of gay. I'm confident you could point out where I am wrong in constructing that statement in that manner, I am not confident I would understand your explanation but you are welcomed to try if you don't mind banging your head against a brick wall. Imagine me as the dumbest student you ever taught, and then make it a bit more simpler when explaining it. In my meager defense, and probably not warranted, I understood that anything written between parenthesis does not need to adhere to the rules of grammar. (sorry, it was the only defense I could muster) All jokes aside, thank you for your comment, I'm just glad anyone likes my silly stories and if you continue to read, I'm sure there will be plenty more mistakes you can point out. And please do, I will correct those as they are pointed out. J (the moment you read this everyone understands and accepts that all mistakes are my own and not anyone else's fault)

Damn it, it should have said redacted by the author of this comment, there I go again messing things up.

*big thumbs up* J (not derailing the conversation anymore)

Once again I need to apologize, for once again being responsible for the left turn these comments have taken. Instead of talking about this wonderful story, I'm soliciting myself into making porn, something I haven't done in twenty years, and no longer have the body to do. So yes, I'll do it, but it will be in the background, now I have to make a website, I don't even know how to do that. I'm off to perm my ear hair, be back later.

Hey @Lee Wilson, see what you made me do. Now I have orders to fill, and by Monday? I'll have to pose for the photos myself. Though I don't work on a Ranch, banged a cowboy once, and I don't have any siblings so the incest is out, unless you count my cousin forty years ago, nor am I latin but I've dipped my toe in that ethnic pool once or twice in the past and I'm bald though I could wear a hat so you wouldn't know and I do happen to own leather chaps (don't ask). And as much as I can tell, I am still alive, but I have makeup I could make myself a little more pale. And I'm 40ish give or take ten years, and as for hairy, my ears are growing hair like a forest, maybe I'll comb them down instead of keeping them permed, All right, after all I am in the hospitality buisiness so I'll see what I can do though I have no idea who's gonna run my restaurant while I'm fulfilling these orders. J

It's okay, I'll write some end of the world porn that would be appropriate for your hero's. It will be very tasteful I'm sure with barely a mention of the apocalypse. Do you have George's email I can send it too? J

Still hooked on the premise, I'm with ML, everyone is dead, time to handle business, they need supplies, weapons, a fortified place to stay away from dead bodies, clothing, transportation, and porn. Haven't they seen The Walking Dead? J

*puts on my bullshit shoes* When I said he had to raise it to 3.7, I was rounding up. I meant 3.625. I think I'll allow it. J (the not smart one)

I think Tyler's problem is he's already getting "A" in everything, If he's carrying an A in the rest of his classes, the only way to continue is to get a "A" in Math, as Math is not his strong suit nor does he carry an A over from his Junior year. Or at least that's what I think but who knows, I don't understand how all that shit works. as someone I know said one time, books can have fiction... J

So let me once again offer a comment that doesn't pertain to @Lee Wilson wonderful tale of death. First a blatant lie gets delivered, @Lee Wilson (wind does not blow east to west) Then it gets repeated ad nauseam by the echo chamber, @Jason Rimbaud (did a quick goggle search on how fast clouds move, did not know wind moves west to east) Then it inadvertently gets picked up by trusted sources @ReaderPaul (one who is trusted and way smarter than I, though we both looked up cloud movements he just did a better job) Then it gets debated as if it were a fact, @Jason Rimbaud (who dove head first without doing any checking on wind movements and then argued like he knew what he was doing) Then it gets regarded as a truth, @no-one That never should've been discussed by rational people, @Jason Rimbaud (should never be considered as rational) Then it gets the status of a possibility, @ReaderPaul (I think I almost convinced him I was right, though he knows deep down that I am always wrong) And recorded as a part of the generally accepted perspective as a genuine @Lee Wilson gave a little to readerpaul and a little to me, but all that craziness has now become part of the record. TRUTH, And then we all just move on as if a lie was a verified fact! (new fact, some people believe a certain book contains unbelievable things so Lee's tale, the wind can and does move east to west). How'd I do?

I know what book your refering too...hahahaahah

Another character I never thought would be seen in that light. And to think, it was a throw-away line meant to imply how everyone was relieved that it wasn't Devin. I love your insight into the characters. J

I used to dress up and go to Rocky Horror Picture show all the time. I know all the songs and remember the dance, though I doubt I could do it now. I always looked good in stockings...

I did no such thing, Brandon clearly states his age is 18. Thank you. .

Compassion is such a subjective word. We'll see how all this plays out. He doesn't have much to do in Part One, he's more of a Part Two kind of dilemma.

That would go against the rules of GA, can't have a younger with an older. But if that wasn't the case I'm sure it would have been on the table. J

Oh my god Yes!!!!!1. That would be awesome. Guaranteed A right there. Where were you when I was writing this story?

Poor Dylan, I feel sorry for him. Matter of fact, I feel so sorry for him he got his very own spin off. hahahaahahaha J

I know of a way... J

I promise you in three chapters most of these questions will be answered. Though Devin might always be an asshat. Methinks.